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'Thoughts'
"Talking"
"Kyuubi Speaking"
'Kyuubi thinking'
-King of all Naruto
Time Skip-Chapter 1: The Rise of a New Hero
Naruto was now 12 years old. (1) He had enrolled in the academy, but no one would help him.
'I wonder why everyone still hates me! I haven't done anything!' thought Naruto.
Naruto was eavesdropping; not on purpose but he was just really close to some people from his favorite area.
"Good job Kiba, you passed! Do you want to go out tonight for some nice food?"asked the man.
"Of course," said the young boy.
'I wish I had a family like that…..'thought Naruto.
After the Mizuki accident--- (2)
Naruto had decided to become a real ninja, not just learn the basics. He went to the Old Man, as he put it.
"I want to be Hokage!" said Naruto
"Well, that's good Naruto, but you'll need to learn some really strong jutsu to become Hokage. You'll have to be the best in the village!" said the Hokage.
"Yeah! That's why I'm going to train right away!"
"I'll send a jounin to help you train……he might be a little lazy,"
"And he called you a LITTLE lazy!"said Naruto.
He was training with Hatake Kakashi, the Copy Ninja. Naruto trained for the day under Kakashi.
"Hey, Kakashi-sensei! How do you do your Katon Jutsus?" (3)
"Well, first you'll have to find out what your element is."
"And I do that how….?"
Kakashi took out a strange looking piece of paper. "Channel your chakra through this."
"Ok, I did that, now what?"
"Apparently you're suited for Futon Jutsus."
"Are there lots of other people who know Futon Jutsus?"
"No not many, but I know a few, I can help you get started."
"Ok, let's get started right away!"
"First you'll need to improve your chakra control."
"Ok."
"Let's start off with the tree climbing exercise….."
"But Kakashi-sensei, I already know how to climb trees! It's easy!"
"Do you know how to climb a tree without using your hands?"
"Umm…..no."
"Well, then we'll start with that. First you have to channel chakra to your feet and then start climbing. You keep the same amount of chakra at your feet and you maintain it. After this exercise, we'll begin the water walking exercise. You'll have to keep channeling chakra to your feet while walking. Just telling you, most genin don't do these exercises but…"
"But what Kakashi-sensei?"
"Well, the reason you have to do these exercises is because of the fox. "
"Oh…"
"Well then, what are you waiting for? Start climbing those trees!"
Naruto steadily started to master the art, also, his team consisted of himself, "Emo Boy" a.k.a. Sasuke Uchiha, and "Master Fan girl #2", a.k.a. Sakura Haruno. (4) They had actually opened up and they weren't that bad now.
The first day, their "Sensei" was late due to "a black cat crossing his path. They were going to have "a test for becoming real genin" or as he put it.
Flashback
Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura were in the place their sensei told them to be…at 7A.M!
They all arrived on time but "somebody" was late.
"Hey, Sasuke when do you think Kakashi-sensei will be here?"Sakura asked.
"Hn," Sasuke replied with his infamous voice. The dullest in the world.
"Hey Sakura, let's play a prank on Kakashi-Sensei!"said Naruto.
"There will be no prank pulling in my genin team, Naruto...."said Kakashi, hiding in a tree.
"Wow, Kakashi-sensei, you're actually on time!"said Naruto. Training with Kakashi had made him learn, if Kakashi said 2 in the morning, he actually meant 9 A.M.
"Yes, and I've been here for a while. Now, let's take the real genin test, shall we?"
"Sure," said Naruto and Sakura, with Sasuke replying with his infamous "Hn."
The genin split up to hide, even Naruto. Well, that is if you count running far far away hiding. Kakashi had taught him some stealth and diversionary tactics. He also taught him how to act in battle. Of course since Kakashi had been his sensei for a while, he knew that Naruto could perform Kage Bunshin no Jutsu. Hell, he even knew Tajuu Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!
Naruto started to run from Kakashi, watching him. Once he was sure that he was far enough, Naruto made one Kage Bunshin.
'I wonder where Naruto is and what he is doing,' thought Kakashi.
Then Naruto got closer to Kakashi and made another Kage Bunshin to tell Sasuke and Sakura his plan. These Kage Bunshin were spotted by Kakashi, but Naruto was smarter than that. His Bunshin slowly came towards Sasuke and Sakura.
"Hey you guys, I have a plan!" whispered Naruto to Sasuke and Sakura.
They had gotten the plan. Naruto jumped out of his hiding spot and Kakashi saw him immediately.
'Well I think they got the basics. I'm pretty sure they have a plan since has been about 20 minutes,' thought Kakashi.
Naruto jumped out of his hiding spot and preformed his signature jutsu, Kage Bunshin. 'This is part one of the plan. Analyze Kakashi-sensei's movements and his Taijutsu style,' thought Naruto.
"Hey Kakashi-sensei! I bet that you can't find the real me!" said Naruto.
"How much are you going to bet on that, Naruto?" Kakashi said.
"You're just stalling since you know you can't find the real me," said Naruto.
"Well, I don't need to find the real you, I'm not the hunter, I'm the hunted," said Kakashi.
'Darn it, he won't come at me. That means I'll just have to come at him!' Naruto thought.
Naruto's first batch of clones flew at Kakashi using rough Taijutsu.
"Lesson one, Taijutsu!" said Kakashi.
"Sakura, do you know what style of Taijutsu he is using?" asked Sasuke.
"………Yeah! That is the Hidden Leaf Style: Basic Chuunin Taijutsu," said Sakura. (5)
Slowly while Naruto and his clones were out in the battle field, Sakura, Sasuke, and one of Naruto's Kage Bunshin were watching him trying to analyze his movements.
"Never let your enemy get behind you, Naruto," said Kakashi, "One thousand years of death!"
Well, that's the end of Chapter one. Sorry to leave it as a cliffhanger. I'll try and update soon.
(1)=Yes a time skip has happened. I didn't feel like writing his childhood
(2)=If you don't know the Mizuki Incident then you have got to not be obsessed with Naruto
(3)=Katon means Fire Style- Futon means Wind Style
(4)=All rights reserved (just joking)
(5)=He is a jounin so he has to know some chuunin Taijutsu-he wouldn't go all out on them!
Ninjutsu Notes:
Kage Bunshin no Jutsu-Shadow Clones
Tajuu Kage Bunshin no Jutsu-Mass Shadow Clones
Taijutsu Notes:
One Thousand Years of Death-Kakashi's technique that sends the enemy flying into the air from pinching a nerve near the butt
Hidden Leaf Style: Basic Chuunin Taijutsu-basic Taijutsu learned when chuunin
Genjutsu Notes:
None
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