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Out the back door Peter, Edmund, Susan, Lucy with their mother Helen ran to the shelter as the booms came down. Edmund suddenly stop and said. "Dad."
Before he turn around at stated to run back to the house. "Edmund!" Helen yelled after her son worriedly.
"Don't worry mom I'll get him." Peter said as he ran after his little brother.
Edmund was about to get his fathers picture when a boom was being shoot. Peter notice and yelled. "Get down." He pushes Edmund to the ground.
Once the explosion was over Edmund and Peter got up and this time Edmund got his fathers picture and tried to catch up with Peter who was pulling him.
Peter and Edmund where close to the shelter where their mother was holding the door open. "Come on, hurry."
Peter pushes Edmund inside the Shelter and stated yelling at him. "You could have gotten us killed. You're so selfless." Helen said to him. "Enough."
"Why can't you do what you're told?" Peter said and he slams the shelter door.
I could lost you Eddy. Peter thought as he watches his mother hug Lucy and Edmund while Edmund hugged the picture closely to him. I cann't stand losing you Ed.
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