I,d like to start off by saying thanks for the support and the reviews you guys/girls gave, Im very happy you like it...
I read your reviews and I will do my best to comply with your wants, so...
First off ,Yes I will be making my chapters longer. You will notice shortish chapters still, but I promise to change soon, longer, better :)
Second ,this isn't a direct adaptation, but you who might of played the game, you will notice some parts similar to the game.
Yes, the outcome for the characters will be the same, but I will try to change it up alittle, there will be chapters about the characters from the game and their experiences...but I will be introducing new characters and telling the story from there point of view aswell, some will be completely made up, and others will be from some of the notes and papers you find in the game itself...and...
Third I will not being doing it as the game does it, in regards to chapters, I will continue the same persons story as the chapters go on, ...but after a few chapters on someone I will be switching back and forth between two different stories, because some will end up crossing over and influencing the other stories...
But Ive wasted enough of your time with this...Time for the next chapter
I do not own Corpse Party but wish that I did
Chapter 2 - A Home away from Home
[ Naomi POV ]
'Wha..what did she say, was she, was she talking to me? Oh, Oh God, what is this place, where am I, where are my friends?'
Thoughts and questions flooded my head, I couldn't stop them...I needed the answers, I needed to know what is going on. The intercom has stopped now, it's silent again...I hate silence...
I just want to hear Seiko's voice, or Satoshi's voice, please! I don't want to be alone...I don't want to be left alone...
Tears start to form in Naomi's eyes as she ponders the thought of never seeing her friends again...
No...NO! I can't be alone, I can't be...
'Get it together Naomi, get it together, your not alone, but this..this is not a dream either. This is happening, really happening, you need to get up and find your friends, mopping like this all day will only make it worse'
At that Naomi stood up, put on a brave face and was prepared as she would ever be to face the horrors that await her.
[ As Naomi rises the lights of the room begin to flicker, giving brief glimpses of the room she is in...finally the lights flicker on and brighten up the room ]
Naomi stares in shock at the room she has now a complete view of...
Its empty! What!?, no..no it can't be empty, what about those sounds I heard, that tapping, the intercom? Was that all in my imagination, was I hallucinating? What kind of place is this?
'No Naomi, the more you let it mess with your mind the more corrupted its going to get'
I..I need to find Seiko and the others, they must be worried sick.
As Naomi walks to the door to start her search for the others she hears the sound of chalk being scrapped across a board...
Ah..ahhh! What is that? WHAT IS THAT!?
No matter how much Naomi covers her ears the sound seems to pass through her hands...
Ahhhh! Stop! Please...Please!
As the screeching continues, Naomi's ears slowly start to bleed, the blood slowly starts to flow from here ears, making her scream.
...
Then all of a sudden the sound comes to hault...
Naomi falls to her hands and knees. [heavy breathing...]
*cough* *cough* *cough*...ahah..ah..aha *cough* *cough* ag...oh god, *sob* please be over... *cough*...
I want to go home...*sob* Please, please let me go home...
As Naomi turn to look at the entrance she notices a blackboard against the wall, there's writing on it...
'Wha..that was never there before'
Naomi slowly lifts herself from the cold floor, she slowly walks towards this message shown to her...it reads...
? YOU ARE NOT LEAVING THIS SCHOOL...YOU CAN TRY...YES...YOU CAN TRY ?
As soon as Naomi finishes reading the message, the writing seems to melt away in blood revealing another message...
? WELCOME HOME ?
Naomi slowly walks back and trips over something.
Ah! What was...Oh my god...
She stares at the body on the floor and slowly turns it towards her...
SEIKO! SEIKO ITS YOU!, Wake up, wake up Seiko, its me Naomi.
[ Naomi shakes Seiko's body, trying to wake her...]
Then just as Naomi started to worry...
Ah, agh, N..Naomi ,is that you?
...
Chapter 2 End : A Home away from Home
Once again, sorry for another short chapter, I'm just busy playing around with some idea's in my head...I promise to make the others longer...but it can be a challenge.
So let me ask you guys if you have any ideas on what you want to see, don't worry , I'm not asking for a story. I'm just looking for some feedback and any idea's you might have that will make this more fun to read...I will choose the most popular idea or the one that intrigues me the most...thank you.
So once again PLEASE REVIEW :) and tell your friends or family about this, I'm looking for as much support as I can get...
P.S - Any titles you have in mind for my chapters post for me to see, I'm not very good with titles, so any help will be greatly appreciated :)