Oh and btw guys, thanks for the reviews :) I'll try and take on any feedback you guys give me. And if I offend anyone just let me know and I can stop writing about this particular topic :) And I'm not trying to pay out the actors and actresses, just how the movie contradicted the book, and the personalities of the characters from the book (i.e. Jace loving himself)
SPOILER ALERT... if you haven't read the books or seen the movie... just saying... kinda... I guess :)
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"He'll be back," Hodge reassures the evil man (with hair feathers?) in front of him.
"How can you be so sure?" Valentine asks.
"Because there is one thing that he cares about more than himself?"
Valentine scoffs. "Yeah right."
"No!" Hodge exclaims, "I know it is hard to believe, but the girl means a lot to him. I think their stubborn personalities drew them to each other. They're in love."
"What?" Valentine gapes at his servant, "Jace? With Clary? My Clary? No way."
"I know right," Hodge gossips excitedly, "Who would've thought?"
Valentine shakes his head. "Anyways, so you think he'll come back for her?"
"Yes."
"Hm."
"Hm." Hodge sighs. "Wait!" he suddenly exclaims, "I've got it! Tell them that they're brother and sister. It will break their hearts."
They ponder this for a moment. "Not bad," Valentine admits. "Buuut, don't you think that us saying that right now kinda gives away the plot a little bit? I mean, the people who had to read the books waited for two whole books to know what happens. Now there'll be no suspense!"
Hodge shrugged. "Bit late now, don't you think?"
"Hm," Valentine said, "Very well! We shall break their hearts! God, how I love being evil."
The two cackled evilly together, paused to giggle like schoolgirls, and then resumed cackling evilly.
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So how is it so far? Should write more? :P