Hey Guys! If you haven't heard a new season of Total Drama has been confirmed! If I do make an All Stars type season after this one, I will probably either edit this whole story so that it would make more sense appearing after the new season (which I doubt I'll do), simply ignore the new season (not happening) or just make due with what we have even if either story makes it so that the other is impossible.
Warning: This chapter of Total Drama Pahkitew's Next Step may contain stunts performed by ANIMATED teens. Do not try anything you see here at home. Seriously, you could get really messed up.
Contestants
Team Jadno Uzgoj Svinja:
*Luna Tsuki, Female, 17, Asexual, The Unintentional Know-it-all [Pokemon FTW (Me!)]
*Ronnie Ceyas, Male, 17, Homosexual, The Loveable Goof [Pokemon FTW (Me!)]
*Andrew Madison, Male, 14, Homosexual, The Extroverted Introvert [Pokemon FTW (Me!)]
*Gareth Namico, Male, 17, Heterosexual, The Expert Detective [Guest]
*Aaren Mitchell, Male, 17, Heterosexual, The Troubled Geek [GirlPower54]
*Lilly Lindanna, Female, 15, Homosexual, The Attentive Hottie [Pokemon FTW (Me!)]
*Olive Lee, Female, 18, Heterosexual, The Social Perfectionist [PinkMocha1227]
*Carly Carpenter, Female, 14, Homosexual, The Shy Twin [Michael 15]
Team Lijepe Lijepe Medvjeti:
*Lauren Johnson, Female, 16, Heterosexual, The Textbook Hellraiser [SideshowJazz1]
*Serena Keller, Female, 18, Heterosexual, The No-Nonsense Band Geek [xXRocketShark216]
*Graham Ulry, Male, 18, Heterosexual, The Introverted (Yet Sarcastic) Otaku [xXRocketShark216]
*Griff Jackson, Male, 16, Heterosexual, The Over Joyful Actor [Totaldramafan04]
*Rhonda Carpenter, Female, 14, Heterosexual, The OCD Twin [Michael15]
*Indigo Daniels, Male, 16, Heterosexual, The Shy Schoolboy [Prestoncampbell2001]
*'Blaineley' Mildred Stacy Andrew O'Halloran, 20+, Heterosexual, The Disgusting TV Host [Total Drama World Tour]
Interning
Joshua "King" Darwin, Male, 16, Heterosexual, That One Popular Guy [Michael15]
Voted Off
16th Place: Joshua "King" Darwin, Male, 16, Heterosexual, That One Popular Guy, Ex Medvjeti [Michael15]
Story
Chris is standing in front of the new mess hall with Chef and Evan slightly behind him.
"Last time on Total Drama, Pahkitew's Next Step, we met our contestants! After introductions and some team name mix ups – " Here he pauses to glare at Evan " – we started our first challenge. A new rendition of The Phobia Factor! Contestants had to face some of their biggest fears. And while Rhonda cost The Medvjeti's the win, in the end, Joshua, or "King", got voted off! Today, he gets to hide an immunity statue somewhere around the island. His statue, unlike my own, can only be used before the votes are revealed. Unfortunately, while looking for good hiding spots, he also has to work as an intern. Then, when the next unlucky camper gets voted off, they'll be taking his place hiding a statue while he will take "The Unsafe-Roller-Coaster-of-Shame!"" Chris exclaims. "Find out who our next unlucky contestant will be right here on Total. Drama."
"Pahkitew's… Next Step!" Evan and Chef join in.
Theme (I suggest Total Drama Action if you want to listen while reading it. This will be the only time I post the theme.)
[Similar to Pahkitew Island's theme, a camera pops out of a tree next to a waterfall (the same one that you see where the spotlight is being put up), a spotlight comes out underneath it, a camera comes out of Scuba Bear's eye and out from underneath a now frogless lilly pad. A clipboard comes down and it starts going through Pahkitew Island, showing Chris and Chef enjoying coffee in front of the new mess hall and the interns making some kind of animal trap or something]
Dear mom and dad I'm doing fine
[The camera jumps down a snowy mountain]
You guys are on my mind!
[Evan, Lauren and Indigo are all seen skiing. Lauren and Evan apparently set up a trap or something as Indigo trips and they high five.]
You asked me what I wanted to be, and now I think the answer is plain to see,
[Luna and Lilly are talking about something before they run into Carly and Rhonda who also appear to be talking. Carly and Lilly both blush. A pigeon flies past.]
I… wanna be… famous…
[The pigeon flies past Olive who starts screaming and running away, before the camera zooms out to a laughing Aaren and then again to where Olive is now giving him "The Courtney Look"]
I wanna live close to the sun. *Ching!*
[Blaineley and Joshua are sunbathing, both grinning]
Go pack your bags 'cause you've already won
[Andrew is reading a book and listening to music and runs into Ronnie, who wraps one arm around him, leading him somewhere]
Everything to prove nothing in my way, I'll get there one day.
[Griff and Gareth are outside the new mess hall, where Andrew and Ronnie join them.]
Cause I… wanna be… famous!
[The camera pans out to Serena and Graham are arguing while the other four are making bets on who's going to win.]
Na, na, na-na-na-na, na-na-na, na-na-na-na
[The camera pans to Lauren and Blaineley arguing, Joshua, Indigo and Evan rolling their eyes in sync as they follow behind them.]
I wanna be! I wanna be! I wanna be famous!
[Olive and Aaren, still glaring at each other, join them.]
I wanna be! I wanna be! I wanna be famous!
[Carly, Rhonda, Lilly and Luna finally join them, discussing something]
*Whistling*
[They all sit in a circle, Chris, Chef and the interns popping up, preparing to wreck the kissing moment of anyone. No one makes a move and Chris looks disappointed. It goes back to the place where the Aftermaths took place, and the screen flickers to show the Total Drama Pahkitew's Next Step logo.
The Cave (with the Medvjeti)
"Okay guys, we're down one player. We're going to have to even the odds this challenge." Serena stated. Everyone nodded.
"We just need to be ready for anything Chris throws at us." Graham states. "Lauren, you get along well with Evan. You hear anything from him about what the challenge could be?"
"He told me it would be more of a physical challenge. That's it." The prankster replied.
"That gives us a slight advantage. Aaren and Gareth are their only real physical competitors." Graham replies.
"Carly told me that Aaren doesn't really get along with anyone, and Gareth's friendly enough but is really reserved a lot of the time." Rhonda adds in.
"Those may be their strongest players as in brute strength, but we can't forget speed, stamina, agility and other factors Chris might have in the challenge." Blaineley states.
"And we can't underestimated anyone…" Indigo says.
"I still think we have pretty good chances!" a cheerful Griff says, smiling.
"No wonder his stereotype is The Over Joyful Actor…" Serena mutters.
Confessional
Serena is sitting in The Confessional. "Okay, I'm sorry, but for some reason I don't really like 'The Spirit Raiser' type people like Geoff, Owen, Ella, or in this case, Griff."
*Static*
"I get the feeling that Serena doesn't really like me..." Griff says, looking somewhat dejected.
*Static*
"I like Griff... he's easy to talk to... but Serena scares me..." Indigo confesses.
*Static*
Lauren jumps right in. "So, from what I've overheard and observed, Serena doesn't like Griff, Indigo likes Griff, Serena scares Indigo, Serena has a crush on Graham, everyone hates Blaineley (and for good reason), Rhonda gets along with Indigo since her sister's shy, Blaineley thinks that Indigo, Rhonda and Griff are all annoying while Serena's too bossy, and I seem to get along with Serena. Meaning the friend groups are currently myself, Serena and Graham, Rhonda, Griff and Indigo, and Blaineley by herself. Which isn't good, seeing as Serena wants everyone who's not in our little friend group gone. I think all three of us can agree on taking out Blaineley first, and I can see the others doing the same. The problem with that is, than we have two unofficial alliances of three, meaning it's probably going to end up being a tie-breaker. That means one of them will probably go down, giving us the majority, meaning that all three of us are confirmed to at least get to the merge. And while I like Griff, Rhonda and Indigo, I'm not about to lose my spot in the merge. I only hope I can keep the friend groups like this until then..."
*Static*
The Treehouse (with the Svinja)
"Okay, so Rhonda told me they eliminated Joshua. That leaves Rhonda, Griff, Indigo, Serena, Graham and Blaineley." Carly tells her team.
"Joshua "King", from what I've researched about him, was probably their strongest competitor. Graham and Serena are probably in a co-leadership, Griff being the cheer-leader type person with some brains as well, Indigo being the brains, Lauren being the support and favored competitor with Evan, Blaineley being the elimination fodder and Rhonda being the between-team-communication with Carly. Joshua would have been the brawn of their team, but he's gone, meaning their strongest competitor is out. Serena and Graham are probably their strongest players still in, making them split the role of brawn." Luna states. "For our team, Aaren definitely has the brawn, Andrew the brains, Ronnie the cheerleader-type-person with brains, Carly matches Rhonda's main role and backs up what I say, Lily seems to be our leader, and Gareth is a pretty good balance of everything. If Aaren and Gareth dueled it out with Serena and Gareth in a physical challenge, I'd say our chances would be pretty high. Same with Andrew and Indigo in a mental challenge. But knowing Chris, you can never be sure."
"That sounds about right. I guess we should get to the mess hall and eat." Lily says.
Everyone nods.
Confessional
Luna is now sitting in the seat.
"I don't think anyone seemed to notice that I didn't mention Olive, including Olive herself. That's because she has no uses. She's probably going to get dumped first."
*Static*
The New Mess Hall
"Alright, campers! For your second challenge, finish eating as quick as possible, than meet me where the make-up trailer was last challenge." Chris says.
Not much talking happens during breakfast.
A Clearing where the Trailer was
"Your next challenge is…" Chris starts.
"An obstacle course!" Evan finishes.
Some campers look like they've already been defeated, others look ecstatic.
"Before we tell you what you'll be doing, Svinja, choose one person to sit out on the bleachers over there!" Chris says.
"I say we should choose the least athletic person, which would be And-" Ronnie starts.
"Wait! I'm not that athletic, but I'm actually really good with obstacle courses!" Andrew exclaims.
"In that case, do you guys mind if I sit out?" Lily asks.
Everyone shrugs.
"Go ahead." Carly says, smiling.
Confessional
"Gives me time to observe the competition. Including my teammates." Lily explains.
*Static*
"Okay, so I... I know you're probably wondering why I didn't act very shy right then... well, I just didn't want to sit out of this challenge... after all, you can't sit out two challenges in a row, and in case they win, I want to be able to sit out... so I was just happy that I have a chance to sit out on a harder challenge..." Carly explains.
*Static*
"Hmm... so Lily's observing us, is she? And I kinda feel bad for Carly..." Lauren says. "I hope she does get to sit out next challenge... and not just because I want my team to win!"
*Static*
"Now…" Chris smirks. "In this obstacle course, you'll be doing several things here that contestants have had to do in previous obstacle courses, as well as new things! You'll have to go through the 'Earthquake of Inevitable Pain' from Season 2! You'll have to go through the tires, dribble a soccer ball through cones, and swing across monkey bars, all while the UPHILL platform is shaking, Chef is throwing stuff at you, and I'm shooting golf balls at you! Then you'll have to go through the 'Mad Skills Obstacle Course' from Season 4. You'll grab a pair of glasses, or if you already have a pair, you'll take them off. Then you're going to go through The Kickstart, The Cannonball Run, Wrecking Ball Alley, The Bouncy Agony of Double Trouble, The Grand Slam, and taking place of The Gang Planks, we now have The Jellyfish Monkey Bars from Season 1! After that, you'll take off the glasses, grab a pig, and go through 'The Oofstacle Relay Race of Hilarious Hurts' from Season 6! You'll have to go through The Greased Log Over a Thorny Bog, A Greasy Zip Line Over the Ravine, The Greastacular Tubetabcular, The Grease Tires, The Grease Wheelbarrow Race, and finally, The Greased Wall. Then you'll have to go for an obstacle course remenicent of the one in Season 5. Another round of The Bouncy Butts, going on The Rolling Pins, and finally The Grape Crusher yet again! After that, you'll have one minute to scarf down as much pancake as possible. Than you go on The Salad Spinner! If you barf, you join Lily on the bench. If you don't, you have to go through the whole thing again! Remember, the only time you can't barf is after or on The Salad Spinner. If you barf before then, that'll only make it more interesting for you and the other contestants! To make it even more interesting, this will not be a relay, or a one at a time race. You'll all be going at the same time. The first team that either finishes their pancakes completely or has the last person competing wins. Good luck!"
Confessional – Blaineley
She smirks. "I already set The Salad Spinner to death mode after watching Mal in All Stars. I'll just have to change it back to normal after everyone else goes."
*Static* - Chris
"Yeah, we already set it back. For trying to cheat, Blaineley will be automatically eliminated, as well as the person voted off by which ever loses. The only difference is Blaineley will not get to hide an immunity idol."
*Static*
"On your marks… get set… go!"
A montage of the contestants going through different obstacles is shown. Griff falls down during an "Earthquake". Serena easily going through The Jellyfish Monkey Bars. Blaineley and Luna both slipping on The Greasey Log Over a Thorny Bog. Aaren getting stuck with his pig in The Greastacular Tubetacular, while Andrew easily slipping through it. Ronnie struggling up The Greased Wall. Lauren doing The Bouncy Butts. Andrew, Ronnie, Gareth and Olive eating their pancakes. Serena, Lauren and Graham eating theirs. Some of the contestants doing The Salad Spinner. Carly, Olive, Griff, Rhonda, Indigo and Blaineley joining Lily on the bench. Aaren finally getting free. Some more contestants going through various obstacles. It goes back to the benches, and one by one Gareth, Luna, Aaren, Graham and Lauren join the bench leaving just Ronnie, Andrew and Serena. Finally Ronnie joins the bench. Than it shows Andrew and Serena struggling to finish their pancakes. In the end, Serena finishes first. [Yes, even in the Beta version I left a quick montage. I have nothing to write about while they're doing an obstacle course, so a montage just made sense to me, even if it does make the chapter a lot shorter.]
"Serena has finished her pancakes first, meaning the Medvjeti win! Svinja, I'll see you at the bonfire for your first elimination ceremony." Chris states.
"Yes!" Serena exclaims, raising her fist in victory.
"But…" Evan adds in. "Since Blaineley has cheated, she will be joining Joshua on The Unsafe-Roller-Coaster-of-Shame!"
A picture of a clearly unsafe mine-cart track with loopty-loops and a rollercoaster cart is shown.
"W-wait, what?" Blaineley asks, clearly dismayed.
"So, as I was saying, Svinja, meet me at the bonfire in-"
"WAIT!" Gareth exclaims. "The only reason I'm really here is to stop any cheating. Since that will obviously no longer be a problem this season, I volunteer to hide the immunity statue and take my leave, as Joshua will do in a few minutes."
Would be Votes:
Luna – Immune: Andrew, Gone: Olive
Lily – Immune: Andrew, Gone: Aaren
Ronnie – Immune: Andrew, Gone: Olive
Carly – Immune: Gareth, Gone: Olive
Olive – Immune: Gareth, Gone: Carly
Gareth – Immune: Andrew, Gone: Luna
Andrew – Immune: Ronnie, Gone: Lily
Aaren – Immune: Andrew, Gone: Olive
Andrew: Immunity
Aaren, Carly, Luna and Lily: 1 - Cancelled out
Olive: 4 - Cancelled out
Gareth: Quit.
Leaving Confessional – Blaineley
"So I suppose this is why most people don't cheat. Makes sense. I don't even get to hide an immunity statue. That stinks. And now I'll have to see Bridgette, and, even worse, Geoff, at the After Math…"
Leaving Confessional – Joshua
"IT'S KING! GET IT RIGHT YOU HORRIBLE AUTHOR! … So anyways, the Medvjeti will regret voting me off. And none of them will ever find where I hid my idol – because I hid it secured to the underside of the Svinja's treehouse."
*Confessional*
Lauren is sitting there, smirking. "Interesting..."
*Static*
Contestants
Team Jadno Uzgoj Svinja:
*Luna Tsuki, Female, 17, Asexual, The Unintentional Know-it-all [Pokemon FTW (Me!)]
*Ronnie Ceyas, Male, 17, Homosexual, The Loveable Goof [Pokemon FTW (Me!)]
*Andrew Madison, Male, 14, Homosexual, The Extroverted Introvert [Pokemon FTW (Me!)]
*Aaren Mitchell, Male, 17, Heterosexual, The Troubled Geek [GirlPower54]
*Lilly Lindanna, Female, 15, Homosexual, The Attentive Hottie [Pokemon FTW (Me!)]
*Olive Lee, Female, 18, Heterosexual, The Social Perfectionist [PinkMocha1227]
*Carly Carpenter, Female, 14, Homosexual, The Shy Twin [Michael 15]
Team Lijepe Lijepe Medvjeti:
*Lauren Johnson, Female, 16, Heterosexual, The Textbook Hellraiser [SideshowJazz1]
*Serena Keller, Female, 18, Heterosexual, The No-Nonsense Band Geek [xXRocketShark216]
*Graham Ulry, Male, 18, Heterosexual, The Introverted (Yet Sarcastic) Otaku [xXRocketShark216]
*Griff Jackson, Male, 16, Heterosexual, The Over Joyful Actor [Totaldramafan04]
*Rhonda Carpenter, Female, 14, Heterosexual, The OCD Twin [Michael15]
*Indigo Daniels, Male, 16, Heterosexual, The Shy Schoolboy [Prestoncampbell2001]
Interning
Gareth Namico, Male, 17, Heterosexual, The Expert Detective [Guest]
Voted Off
16th Place: Joshua "King" Darwin, Male, 16, Heterosexual, That One Popular Guy, Ex Medvjeti [Michael15] (Idol Found by Lauren, Not Used. Previously hidden under the tree house.)
15th Place: 'Blaineley' Mildred Stacy Andrew O'Halloran, 20+, Heterosexual, The Disgusting TV Host, Ex Medvjeti [Total Drama World Tour] (No Idol, Booted for Cheating)
14th Place: Gareth Namico, Male, 17, Heterosexual, The Expert Detective, Ex Svinja [Guest] (Idol Not Found, Unknown Where It's Hidden)
Chris Idol (Idol Not Found, Unknown Where It's Hidden)
Reasons
I'm going to start putting down the reasons why I eliminated contestants down here.
For Joshua/King, he didn't really fit my writing style, and unless I made him evil, which I don't think is what the person who submitted him was planning, he wouldn't really fit into the story. So I eliminated him.
For Blaineley, the only reason I really brought her back is because she's actually really funny to me, but she didn't get enough screen time. But like what happened with Joshua/King, I couldn't write her properly. So I thought of a good excuse to eliminate her!
For Gareth, I was originally going to have him stay a bit longer, but there were more characters that were more important to the plot, so I had to make him leave. Originally, when I wasn't going to eliminate Blaineley, he just got eliminated, but that didn't feel right, so I thought of a reasonable excuse for him to leave honorably.
But don't worry, these characters will return in an Aftermath that will be happening soon, and they might even return in another season...