Well hello there again people of fanfiction! I'm so happy I'm getting great responses to this story! Comment me an episode, and I will try to fit it in somewhere. There are a few episodes, like Doomsday, that I have a big idea for, and I want to save them for later on. I can tell you that Doomsday will be sort of the season finale. I think I may have about three 'seasons'. I need to come up with a better word. If you guys have ideas, please tell me. Anyways, I'm going to do something I don't think I've ever done, and that is reply to reviews on here as shoutouts. I had two, so here are the replies.
maraudergirl15-Thanks for reading! Me and a partner have started another story kind of like this on our shared profile. It's called I don't know (wonderful title I know) and our profile is PartnersinCriting.
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Nightmare in Silver Part 1
"First we need to pick up a few people." He said opening the doors. "Stay here, I'll go get them." He said leaving. I figured he was going to grab his companion or companions, so I decided to just sit and wait. I noticed he had Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows sitting on the console. I knew he usually took a long time according to the show, so I sat down and started rereading my favorite book. Ten minutes later he shows up with Clara and two kids. I knew instantly what adventure I was being taken on. Clara ran up and hugged me when she saw me.
"Oh it's great to see you, Kate! He's left me for a week. It gets boring without you two." She said.
"Clara, this is her first time traveling, so don't tell her anything about her adventures just yet. Let her live them out." The Doctor said.
"Well then you haven't met these two then. That's Angie and Artie. They're my kids that I watch. I'm their governess."
"Now that we have our introductions down, it's time to see the place I chose!" The Doctor said as we stepped out of the Tardis. The place looked like the moon with a U.S. flag and everything. There was even an Earth in the sky.
"Fun?" Clara asked.
"Your stupid box can't even get us to the right place. This is like a moon base or something." Angie said.
"It's not the moon." The Doctor said.
"Actually, I think it does look like the moon, only dirtier." Artie said.
"I don't think the moon can get dirtier, Artie." I said.
"Hey, guys. It's not the moon, okay? It's a Spacey Zoomer ride, or it was." Just as the Doctor said that a door opens in one of the rocks, and a man wearing a tall hat looks out.
"Psst. Excuse me. I don't suppose you happen to be my lift off this planet? Dave's Discount Interstellar Removals?" The man said.
"Sorry, afraid not." I said.
"They were meant to be here six months ago! Well, that's Dave for you. Unreliable."
"Stay where you are!" A woman's voice said.
"Oops." The man said. He then ducked back inside the rock as the military ran in.
"Throw down your weapons and identify yourselves." The guys all had guns that were pointed at us.
"No. No weapons. You're scaring the children. See I have a golden ticket! Spacey Zoomer and free ice cream?"
"Who are you? This planet is closed by Imperial order."
"How's this?" The Doctor said holding up his psychic paper.
"Oh! Welcome, Proconsul. I wish they'd told us you were coming. Any news of the Emperor?" The captain asked.
"Oh, the Emperor? No, no. None that you'd er…."
"We pray for his return. If there is anything you need, my platoon is at your service."
"Right. Righty-o. Well, carry on, Captain."
"Platoon, let's move out! On the double. Two, three, four. Two, three, four. Two, three, four." The military moved out. The man poked his head out again.
"Have they gone?" He asked.
"Yes."
"Uniforms give me the heebie-jeebies. Come on. They can't stop me being here, but they don't like it." The man then lead us away from the Zoomer to a place where we could see the whole amusement park.
"Ha ha! You see? I told you it was amazing. Well it used to be." All the rides were wrecked and grass was growing in the cracks in the concrete.
"I never doubted you." I said smiling at him.
"You never do." He said putting an arm around my shoulders.
"Okay, stop flirting you two." Clara said. The Doctor took his arm back sadly.
"It closed down. Wish I'd known that before I landed here, but let me show you my collection. Come along. Follow me. This way. This way in, come on." We followed the man into his room. It was a nice room with lots of waxworks on display. There were chandeliers hanging from the ceiling. "Welcome to my show, Webley's World of Wonders. Miracles, marvels, and more await you. I am Impresario Webley. You see before you waxwork representations of the famous and the infamous. Anybody here play chess?" The Doctor put his hand up. "Perhaps you, young man?" He said pointing at Artie.
"Actually, I'm in my school chess club." Artie said.
"Ah. Follow me." We followed Webley into this room with the chess board in it. There was something covered, but I already knew what it was. It was a cyberman. "We defeated them all a thousand years ago, but now he's back to destroy you. Behold, the enemy!" Webley uncovered the cyberman.
"Cyberman! Get down!" Everyone but me and Webley got down.
"Kate! You know how dangerous these things are! Get down!" He yelled pulling on my hand.
"No need to panic, my young friends. We all know there are no more living Cybermen. What you are seeing is a miracle. The six hundred and ninety ninth wonder of the universe, as displayed before the Imperial court, and only here to destroy you at chess." The Doctor started scanning the thing.
"Careful now. An empty shell, and yet it moves. How?"
"Magic." Angie said.
"That might we be, young lady, but a single penny wins you five Imperial shillings." I then noticed that there were two little metal things seemingly looking at us from the waxwork Blowfish head. I remembered this from the episode.
"Doctor, do you have the feeling we're being watched?" I asked him so quietly so that no one would be alarmed.
"What did you see? When you say that, there is something that is watching us." I looked over to where I saw the bugs. They were gone.
"Never mind. I must be seeing things." The Doctor looked at me wearily but stood up.
"I haven't got a penny, but I've got a sandwich." Artie said.
"All right, take a seat. It is free of all devices," he said opening one side of the bottom to show there was nothing, "and yet it has never been beaten. Would you like to make the first move, young man?" Artie moved the bishop pawn one space. The Cyberman then countered it by moving one of his pawns two spaces.
"Oh no, Artie. No, don't do that, it-" The Doctor tried to warn him, but he advanced on the pawn two spaces. Then the Cyberman's queen came up to end the game.
"That's a fool's mate." The Doctor said.
"If you can tell me how it works, I'll give you a silver penny." Webley said.
"I think you do it with mirrors?" Angie suggested.
"Mirrors? Oh no but good suggestion." I said.
"Let's see, hey? Low tech. It's a puppet. Monofilament strings, which means the brains are in." He opened a door in the Cyberman's chair to show Porridge with a control box.
"Hello." He said.
"Hello." Me and the Doctor said.
"I'm the brains."
"Hello."
"Give us a hand." Me and the Doctor helped the small dude out of the small place he was in.
"Hey, Kate you finally found someone shorter than you." The Doctor said. I gave him a slight punch in the arm. "Okay, I'm sorry." I smiled.
"They call me Porridge. Oh, it's good to be out of that box." The small man said.
"For you, miss, an Imperial penny." Webley said as he produced one from Angie's ear. The Doctor and I both see what I had seen earlier slither across the floor.
"I have not one but three Cybermen in my collection." Webley said as we came back to the main part of this place. The Doctor then checked to see if they were working. Angie looked at some of the waxwork. One was a tall man with a familiar face.
"Is that the King?" Angie asked.
"Emeror Ludens Nimrod Kendrick, etc., etc., the forty first, defender of humanity and Imerator of known space.
"He looks a bit full of himself." Clara said.
"Don't say things like that about the Imperial family. You can end up on the run for the rest of your life." Porridge said.
"They don't sound nice." I said.
"Go on. If the kids want to ride the Spacey Zoomer, then I can operate the gravity console." Angie then looks at her coin.
"Angie!" Artie yells already almost out the door. We then headed back to the Spacey Zoomer ride. Artie and Angie were enjoying being able to fly around in microgravity. Me and Clara were taking pictures with our phones.
"Wow!" Artie exclaimed.
"Smile! Say, Spacey Zoomer!" Clara said.
"Having a good time?" The Doctor asked. Porridge then turned off the anti-gravity.
"I think that was the most fun I've had in my whole life." Artie said.
"It was…okay." Angie said.
"Clara, I think outer space is actually very interesting."
"Right well wonderful day out, Doctor, but it's time to get the kids home." Clara said. The Doctor was scanning stuff with the sonic screwdriver.
"Yeah. Er, no. Not actually ready to leave." The Doctor said looking at his screwdriver.
"Why not?" Clara asked.
"Reasons." I said.
"What reasons?"
"Insects. Funny insects. I should add them to my funny insect collection."
"You collect funny insects?" Me and Clara asked.
"Yeah, I'm starting to, right now." We then headed back into Webley's room. Angie and Artie laid down on the couches ready to sleep.
"How long do we have to stay here?" Angie asked.
"Not long. Have a nap. I'll wake you when we're ready to leave." The Doctor said.
"Comfy?" Porridge asked.
"Sleep well." Clara said.
"Don't let the bed bugs bite." I said.
"Good night." Porridge said. The Doctor turns the lights out as we leave.
"Don't wander off. Now, I'm not just saying wander off, I mean it. Otherwise you'll wander off and the next thing you know, somebody's going to have to start rescuing somebody."
"From what?" Angie asked.
"Nothing. Nobody needs rescuing from anything. Don't wander off. Sweet dreams." We then started having a walk. Clara and Porridge were conversing, while me and the Doctor were walking behind them.
"So, I have many adventures with you?" I asked him.
"Yes many. I've known you through all my regenerations. You just keep popping up with no real explanation. It's alright though. I don't mind having you around." He said putting his arm around me.
"I don't mind being around you either. Then the Doctor noticed something and ran up to Clara and Porridge.
"Clara, did you tell Angie she could go to the barracks?" He asked her.
"You know I didn't. She hasn't." Clara said.
"She's just gone in there."
"Come on." We then ran off to go to the barracks.
To be continued….
Well there you go. There is the first part of Nightmare in Silver. I hope you guys enjoyed! Please give me requests for what doctor to do next. I think I'll do nine next because I have an idea for him. So give me a ninth doctor episode to do. I hope you guys have a wonderful day!
