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I'm glad you liked the story.
With that as the story is written much I can do. I'm from a country where English is spoken. In the Czech Republic speaks Czech and English is not taught at a scale which would be needed.
Yes the story will Redleaf and Snowflake. In a few chapters will begin to appear at the end will have a big role this particular relationship. :-)

Milori went through the woods.
Way was bad and unmaintained. He went slowly. He went a five minute. He came next to the rock. He looked around. Nobody here on this place. "Nobody." he smiled.
He turned to the rock. He touched the ice.
In the rock opened the secret door.
Milori went to cave. The door closed.
In the secret cave was torches.
Milori took one torch. He went on to cave.
After a few meters, the wall began recede.
At the end of the wall was big, empty room.
In the room was light to enough. Milori put the torch.
At the end of the room were big, old clock.
Clock began chime the all hour.
Milori's eyes changed colors.
One eye was red and the second eye was green.
Green light flooded the room.
Green light early disappeared. Now there stood elf.
He was as tall as Milori. He had brown hair and empty eyes. He had a black trousers and shirts and red cloak. He had a green amulet around his neck. On his right hand he had gold ring with a green stone.
Elf smiled at Milori. "I'm here, my lord." Milori nodded.
"We need to increase tempo." announced elf.
"Yes, my lord - I'm working on it. It isn´t easy - fairies don´t believe me." Milori said apologetically.
"I trust you. If anyone would worry too much trouble - get rid of him!" ordered elf "Most problems might be with Clarion, Hiacint, Sunflower and Redleaf. Do you realize that? You have to destroy them."
"Lord, I can not. Clarion is my wife." Milori protested.
"Yes, I know. But you can do it. You did remove Snowflake, or not?"
"Yes, but I was drunk."
"So you get drunk again. You destroyed Snowflake in one day. And - she was strong - and you win. With other problem - You'll have to deal!" elf shouted.
"It is true, my lord. Maybe now I left. They will finding me. Immediately - I going to start working on it."
"Okay. Go and be careful. Do not forget that time is quickly running out." elf said and disappeared. Milori´s eyes again was brown.
Milori took a torch and left the room.
He went out of the cave.
He walked quickly back to the library and from the library to the border.
Headed to the Pixie Dust tree.
The guards at the main gate let him go.
He went to the room of his wife.
Without knocking, opened the door and entered.
Clarion sitting on the bed and reading book.
Milori came to her.
She closed the book.
Clarion was startled. She smiled.
"Hello, my love." Clarion greeted him.
"Hi, honey."
"What was it in the library?" she asked politely.
"As always - nothing new." kissed her passionately.
She kissed him immediately retaliated.
They kissed.
She pulled back and looked at the Clarion´s hours.
"It's late. I have to go - I have a meeting with health fairies. Bye sweetie."
"Bye." Clarion went to hospital.
Milori came to a large balcony and smiled "This will be my- everything - my - only my! My lord will be thrilled when it's gonna our." he laughed at the sight of a large kingdom, ruled by his wife.

Milori šel lesem.
Cesta byla ve špatném stavu a zanedbaná.

Šel pomalu.

Šel pět minut.

Přišel ke skále.

Rozhlédl se kolem.

Nikdo tu nebyl.

"Nikdo." usmál se.

Otočil se ke skále.

Dokl se ledu.

Ve skále se otevřely tajné dveře.

Milori vešel do jeskyně.

Dveře se zavřely.

V tajné jeskyni byly pochodně.

Milori vzal jednu pochodeň.

Šel dál do jeskyně.

Po pár metrech se stěny začaly rozšiřovat.

Na konci chodby byl velký, prázný pokoj.

V pokoji bylo dost světla.

Milori položil pochodeň.

Na konci místnosti byly velké, staré hodiny.

Hodiny začaly odbíjet celou hodinu.

Miloriho oči změnily barvu.

Jedno oko bylo červené a druhé zelené.

Mísnost zalilo zelené světlo.

Zelené světlo brzy zmizelo.

Nyní zde stál elf. Byl stejně vysoký jako Milori.

Měl hnědé vlasy a prázdné oči.

Měl černé kalhoty a košily a červený plášť. Měl zelený amulet kolem krku. Na pravé ruce měl zlatý prsten se zeleným kamenem. E

lf se na Miloriho usmál.

"Jsem tu, můj pane." přikývl Milori.

"Musíme zvýšit tempo." oznámil elf. Ano, můj pane - pracuji na tom. Není to snadné - víly mi nevěří" řekl omluvně Milori.

"Věřím ti. Pokud by někdo nědal moc problémů - zbav se ho!" přikázal elf "Nejvíce problému by mohlo být s Clarion, Hiacintem, Sunflower a Redleafem. Uvědomuješ si to? Musíš je zničit."

"Pane, já nemůžu. Clarion je má žena." zaprotestoval Milori. "Ano, já vím. Ale můžeš to udělat. Odstranil jsi Snowflake, nebo ne?"

"Ano, ale byl jsem opilý."

"Tak se opiješ znovu. Zničil jsi Snowflake za jeden den. A - ona byla silná - a ty jsi vyhrál. S ostatnímy problémy - se budeš muset vypořádat!" vykřikl elf.

"To je pravda, můj pane. Teď bych možná odešel. Budou mě hledat. Okamžitě na tom začnu pracovat."

"Dobře. Jdi a buď opatrný. Nezapomeň, čas se rychle krátí." řekl elf a zmizel.

Miloriho oči opět zhnědly.

Milori sebral pochodeň a odešel z místnosti.

Odešl ven z jeskyně.

Rychle se vrátil ke knihovně a od knihovny k hranici.

Zamířil ke Stromu obrození.

Stráže u hlavního vchodu ho nechaly jít.

Šel do pokoje jeho manželky.

Otevřel dveře jejího pokoje a vešel dovnitř.

Clarion seděla na posteli a četla si knížku.

Milori přešel k ní.

Ona zavřela knihu.

Clarion byl překvapen . Když zjistila, že její manžel udělal, usmála se.

"Ahoj, lásko." Clarion ho pozdravila.

"Ahoj, miláčku."

"Jak bylo v knihovně?" zeptala se zdvořile.

"Jako vždy - nic nového." vášnivě ji políbil.

Polibek mu okamžitě oplatila.

Odtáhla se a podíval se na Clarion's hodin.

"Je pozdě musím jít - mám schůzku se zdravotními vílami. Ahoj zlato."

"Ahoj."

Clarion šla do nemocnice.

Milori přišel velký balkon a usmál "To všechno bude moje - jen moje! Můj můj pán bude rád, když to tu bude naše." smál se při pohledu na velkou říši, které vládla jeho manželka.