Disclaimer: Stephenie Meyer owns the characters.
I wish I owned Edward =]
I was awoken by the sound of someone talking to me.
"Hey, are you okay? Please wake up!"
Now that's a beautiful voice. I didn't even now such a voice was possible to mankind. It was so smooth and rich. O gosh I sound like I'm talking about some sort of creamy soup. Well anyways, I wonder who this person is? I guess it's now or never, so I opened my eyes. I met a pair of sparkling green eyes. They were glorious and shining like two emeralds.
"Are you okay?" the man to whom the eyes belonged to spoke again.
"Oh! Ya I'm fine, I just seem to attract danger. I have horrible luck," I babbled.
I blushed then, as I realized he was smiling at me and looking at me strangely. As I focused on him, I realized how beautiful he was. His face was perfectly angular, and he had a dazzling smile, though it was crooked. But that made it better. I also noticed he had a great body too, and he was only wearing board shorts. I blushed deeply, something I've been doing a lot around him, and I realized he had noticed me checking him out.
He stepped back and put his hand out in front of him. "Hi, my name's Edward. Sorry about the frisbee, my friend has bad aim." He smiled that sweet, crooked smile at me. I felt like melting.
"Well, I'm Isabella, but I prefer Bella. And it's fine, like I said, I have horrible luck so it was bound to happen," I stuttered out, trying to seem as though I wasn't nervous, and failing terribly.
He looked at me and let out a chuckle. Even his laugh was beautiful! Well, I guess it sounded beautiful, because you can't see a laugh. Well, I guess you would see his mouth move? Ugh, I'm rambling again. I'm not fully coherent around this guy. That's going to be a problem.
"So what are you doing in Cancun?" he asked me. I guess he was trying to be polite by making small talk.
"Oh well I'm on vacation with my family. It's me, my parents, and my brother. How about you?"
"Me too! Except I'm with my sister, her boyfriend, who also happens to be a good friend of mine, his twin sister and our parents."
"That's cool." I stated. Well, that wasn't lame at all!
I couldn't believe it though. That's a lot of people. I wonder what they're all like.
I know this is short. The chapters will get longer!!
I just wanna get some feedback.
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I wanna know if this sucks lol.