Where in Equestria Did This Come From!?

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Feldoran: Thank you very much for your constructive criticizim. It was quite helpful. I understand the point that you made and would like to say that I'll try to follow your advice. But just so you know, I'm only 12, and am in 7th grade honors language in my Jr. High, so now you know what skill level I'm at and can base your critizism on that. Thank you for being my first ever real reviewer! I squealed with joy when I read the review.

.58: Thanks for your review it made me so happy to know that somepony thought that my fanfic is awesome enough to have OMFG in front of it in all caps, my cheeks are rosy red right now.

Man of Harmony: Thanks for your review as well, I want to make everypony feel that way about Pikachu and sympathize with him. But I must admit, that last part about continuing the story for Pikachu's sake really got me. You see, I was intending on waiting some more for more reviewers but that one part there about doing it for Pikachu's sake gave me a surge of inspiration, and the exact words that popped into my head were, "I have fans, real fans, and I'll do anything to please them so I'm ready to start a new chapter to make them happy!" I would have dramatically said that out loud had my younger brother not been in the room practicing his division facts with a timer turned on. So I just made a dramatic face and used the "TRADITIONAL ROYAL CANTERLOT VOICE" to say it in my head. BTW this would have been up sooner if not for my household's no electronics during the week thing, and how busy my weekend was, my fingers were literally itching to type all weekend and week long.

otherrealmwriter: okay, less author's note, got it. BTW thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer master: Well then, I'm happy I got your attention, as you can see I am continuing. Thanks for reviewing.

VERY IMPORTANT INFO TO UNDERSTAND STORY.

Everypony has their own writing style, something that makes the way they write unique. Being 12, I haven't quite found mine yet, so I'm trying something new that will hopefully add more humor to the story. Imagine that this is not in writing but in a movie type format, that will make this info make more sense. One of the characters in the story basically… pauses the story to add their own input or to argue against what is going on. It'll make more sense in the real story part, but words typed in italic print and underlined are the character's talking to me, the author, words typed in italic bold are me responding to what those character's are saying. It's basically a mini conversation, just think the movie Lion King 1 ½ , that's a good example of it. Please tell me your thought on this idea in the review. Sorry this took so long, but let's get started!

So everypony, please review again, and without further ado, the story!

Prologue (continued) Part 2

"Come on out everybody!" Ash Ketchum yelled as he sent his Pokèballs flying into the air. In brilliant bursts of light, each Pokèmon emerged from its Pokèball. Some of Ash's Pokèmon, like Frogadier, the evolved form of Froakie, were totally ready to come out of their Pokèballs. Others, like Munchlax had to yawn, stretch, eat, go back to sleep, then yawn, stretch, and eat again before being ready to have some fun! Clemont and Sabrina did the same. Ash smiled. It was the perfect day and place for a picnic. The sun was shining, there was a light breeze, and practically anywhere in the Kalos region was perfect for a picnic. Pikachu jumped off of Ash's shoulder and played with Dedenne, Bonny giggling nearby.

Ash loved this day. It was perfect. After playing around for an hour or so, it was time for the picnic. The Pokèmon went gaga for Sabrina's PokèPuffs, while the people went gaga for her normal cooking.

Pikachu was loving this day. He was just having a good time with Ash and his fellow Pokèmon. Everybody was. Little did they know that their happiness would be short-lived.

Chapter 2: Two Friendly Pegasus

When Pikachu woke up, he was alone. And surprisingly, sticky. Why was he sticky? Where was he? Was he in an old Pokèmon center looking for ghost pokemon with Ash? Wait a minute, where was Ash. Then it hit him, and all of the previous events came flooding back into his memory. And he was probably sticky because he had been crying so much.

Then something else hit him, literally. One, light, as suddenly he noticed all the Pokèmon-like creatures around the room, two, a squeal of "It's awake!", but the squeal wasn't loud, it was soft and quiet, and lastly a carrot, yes, a carrot. Standing beside him on, a couch, was a rabbit. And this rabbit did not look happy, in fact he was glaring at Pikachu.

"Oh-no, Angel. We don't throw carrots at our guests," that same voice scolded the rabbit. The owner of the voice then came into view.

It was a winged pony, with a long, breezy/flowy light pink mane and tail, a light yellow body, cyan eyes, and… pink butterflies on the side of the rump area. Pikachu didn't know why, but this pony made him feel comfortable and safe. The Pegasus swooped down on the rabbit and scooped it up in her arms, carrying the rabbit, who stared at him in a way that practically screamed, 'I'm watching you, Buster,' to a nearby table.

'Yeesh,' Pikachu thought. Then the flying pony came back and nealed down on the floor so that she and Pikachu were at eye level.

"Hi there, I'm Fluttershy. I'm a Pegasus. But I have no idea what you are." Fluttershy said sweetly.

"AWWWW…" three voices said in unison.

"Girls," Fluttershy said, whirling around to face them. "I told you three not to stay, it, this little adorable ball of cuteness that is, could be dangerous."

"But Fluttershy," Applebloom whined, "we thought that by helping you we might earn our cutie marks."

"Yeah," Sweetie Belle added, her and Applebloom both making puppydog faces at Fluttershy.

Scootaloo, however, was on a completely different topic. "It?" she asked.

"Well yes, it, I don't know if it's a boy or a girl yet." Fluttershy said, smiling broadly.

"Really," Scootaloo asked, skeptical. "are you serious Fluttershy? He's obviously a boy, not a girl."

"And how can you be so sure, Scootaloo?" Fluttershy asked.

"Simple," Scootaloo said and pointing her hoof she added, "Just look at tha—"

Fluttershy: STOP!

Me: UGH, Fluttershy… (groan)

Oh no you don't. You cant write that! This story is supposed to be for little, tiny, innocent-minded, girls. You can't just… RUIN their innocence with this! How dare you! Such young, sweet, minds. I won't allow it!

Fluttershy, Fluttershy, Fluttershy, I've told you this already, yes, the original and main target of the show was a bunch of 6 year old girls, but there are a lot of fans called Bronies when you're a boy, and Pegasisters when you're a girl, that are NOT innocent, or under that age group. Okay? They are teenagers and adults. This story that I'm writing is not for 6 year old, innocent, little girls.

Bronies? Yeah right, Adsdragonlover. You're just saying that so I'll let you keep writing this, well I won't let you.

Fluttershy, you do know that you were about to interrupt Scootaloo anyway, so you are basically interrupting yourself interrupting Scootaloo. So will, you please just let me keep going? I know your adorable, but everyone who is reading this is either trying to keep glaring at you without being stopped by your adorableness or shaking their head, disappointed.

Fine. But not for you, for the readers.

Thank you. (Finally) Now where were we? Oh right.

Scootaloo was interrupted but Fluttershy putting her hoof over her mouth. "What? All I was gonna say was his bald head. It's really smooth, one time I stared at it and imagined a little chick popping out. Peep, peep, peep. Well, that or his tail."

"Oh," Fluttershy said.

Suddenly, Pikachu's stomach growled. Loudly. "What I wouldn't give for a PokèPuff right about now." Pikachu thought.

Everypony gasped, and so did Pikachu.

"I—I … it can talk." Fluttershy said, awestruck.

"Don't you mean, he can talk?" Scootaloo asked.

"Now he's even cuter!" Sweetie Belle squealed.

"I just can't believe he can talk!" Applebloom added, amazed.

"I can talk?" Pikachu asked, confused.

Then everybody started talking. Angel, still on the table, he'd been tapping his foot impatiently, covered his ears. The noise was interrupted by a loud crash, and then a voice saying "oops, forgot to open the door."

The door opened and a different Pegasus flew in. "What's a PokèPuff?" the Pegasus asked.

"Hard to explain, but then again so is the fact that I can talk." Pikachu replied.

"Ooh, is it anything like muffins? I like muffins!" The Pegasus asked, smiling so wide, she made a sound like a squee.

Author's Note

Hi everypony! Sorry this chapter took so long to post, I was really busy. I'm super happy you guys didn't give up on me and this story. I would never give up on you guys because there was this one fanfic that I liked so much that I became a member of this website just to participate in this wonderful community, but in the middle of the story, the author just… stopped. I was really disappointed, so I know how it feels to be let down by a fanfic, so I won't ever do that to you guys.

I'm sorry the chapter was so short, it had to be in order to get typing and posting into my schedule. I'm gonna try to make these author's notes smaller. But I hope everypony enjoyed this chapter, remember to review (constructive criticism is always welcome ), tell others about this fanfiction, comment on the new writing style/idea, and when I post new chapters I will try to inform those of you reviewers with accounts by PMing you, if you don't have an account, just follow and/or favorite me and this story and hopefully you will know somehow(it would work better if you followed me and this story, but it would make me happy also if you favorited it, too). I hope I'm not wrong about being able to follow and/or favorite things if you don't have an account, it's been so long.

So I hope everypony enjoyed this, and I'm officially too old to go out trick-or-treating, but I'm gonna take a big step as a Pegasister and be dressed up as Derpy Hovves while I hand out candy. (Derpy, by the way, is probably my favorite pony in the whole show, but Discord is my favorite villain of all time.)

Peace out my fellow Bronies and Pegasisters!

Adsdragonlover out!

(yeah, I know that part was kinda lame, but, such is life)