Thank you so far, for reading my story! Yay!
SnowcrystalofThunderClan- I guess you could say that, but Luna and Blaze are certainly NOT a medicine cat.
RandomWarriorThatLikesStuff- Thanks for the tip!I was never planning to make the Clans friendly.
Silverstar345- I definitely will.
Candymouse22- Why thank you! I was hoping to be different than other stories. I hate stories that just copy other plots, you know?
Rainstorm of ShadowClan- I'm so glad you like my story! I'm trying to be different but honestly, Leafpool is just so boring! She's pathetic so I'm trying to toughen her up...
Luna crept up on a vole. Eyes unblinking, nostrils flaring she snuck closer.
"REEET!" It squealed as she pounced on it.
Quickly Luna killed it and brought it back to Blaze.
"Thanks!" He mewed and bit into the vole.
Luna heard paw steps approaching. She shot to her paws. A patrol of cats were racing towards them.
"Blaze, this must be the Clan cats!" She murmered excitedly.
"I know, but they look hostile."
"Who are you?" Growled a gray she-cat.
"My name is Luna. This is my brother, Blaze." Luna mewed, trying to keep her voice steady. "We want to join the Clans. Crowfeather sent us."
The gray she-cat's eyes lit up. "Crowfeather? You've seen my kit?" She asked.
"Yes. We would like to join Lightn- ThunderClan." Blaze mewed.
Luna shot a warning glance at her brother. Something told her not to tell these cats about their Clans. The gray she-cat waved them across the border with her tail.
"Okay, but if you try anything we will not hesitate to drive you out." She mewed.
Luna and Blaze exchanged a glance. They could have a Clan again!
"Who are you and what are you doing here?" A hostile cream tom growled.
A brown tom shot his Clanmate a glance. "I'm the leader of the patrol, Berrynose. Now, who are you and what are you doing here?"
This time Blaze stepped up. "My name is Blaze and this is my sister, Luna. We wish to join ThunderClan. Two loners, formally from the Clans told us to find you."
A bright ginger she-cat stepped up. "Was one of them called Leafpool- er Leaf?"
"Why yes." Luna mewed.
The she-cat sighed in relief. "She's okay, then."
"Why should we trust you?" The brown tom asked.
"Dustpelt, they've seen Leafpool! They can't be bad." She turned to Blaze and Luna. "Was anyone with her?"
"His name was Cro- Crowfeather." Blaze answered. "Can we join Ligh- ThunderClan?"
Luna shot him another glance. He had almost slipped up... Again.
Dustpelt nodded quickly. "Squirrelflight, get behind them. Berrynose, you too."
The ginger she-cat, Squirrelflight padded behind them and Dustpelt led them to ThunderClan's camp.
"Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather here, beneath Highledge!" A ginger tom yowled. He was obviously Squirrelflight's father.
Cats begain to pour out of dens. Young-looking cats popped out of a den while stronger cats padded out of another. A cat with a bad scar across the side of her face emerged alone from a crack in the hollow and a fluffy white tom sat next to her.
"Dustpelt, Squirrelflight, and Berrynose found two loners on the edge of our territory today. They wish to join the Clans." He mewed.
Yowls of protest immediately rose up. "Every rogue, loner, and Clan cat we have has only made us stronger. I am willing to accept these cats. They will be apprentices-" The tom started..
"I'm sorry to interrupt, but my sister and I, we already know how to hunt and fight." Blaze mewed. Mews of shock rippled around the Clan.
The tom gave a quick nod. "If you can defeat my strongest warriors, you may join the Clan as full warriors."
He beckoned two cats forward. One was Dustpelt and the other was a dark tabby tom. He had amber eyes and strong, sturdy shoulders. "Luna, you will fight Dustpelt and Blaze, you will face off with Brambleclaw. Blaze, you go first. Remember, we are using sheathed claws"
Brambleclaw studied Blaze. Blaze studied Brambleclaw. He had put all his weight on his right side. Blaze trained his eyes on Brambleclaw's right side and pounced. At the last minute he went for Brambleclaw's left side and knocked "him over. Brambleclaw fell over, stunned and Blaze used his moment of confusion to pin him to the ground. He beat Brambleclaw.
"Enough!" The ginger tom yowled. "Blaze has won. Luna, it is your turn."
Instead of studying her opponent like Blaze did, Luna lept right over Dustpelt. Dustpelt spun around but Luna was faster. She scurried under his belly and use her paws to lift him in the air. He fell to the ground and she pinned him, just like Blaze had done with Brambleclaw.
"That is it!" The tom mewed. "Luna has won."
Dustpelt and Brambleclaw glared at the two loners but Blaze and Luna didn't care.
"These two loners had proved themselves worthy of warrior names. I, Firestar, leader of ThunderClan call upon my warrior ancestors to make these loner warriors. They are strong and clever and I commend them into a warrior in turn. Blaze and Luna, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and protect your Clan, even at the cost of your life?"
Blaze and Luna looked at each other. "Yes." They mewed together.
"Then I shall give you your warrior names. Blaze, from this moment on you will be known as Blazeheart. Luna, from this moment on you will be known as Lunawing." Firestar place his chin on each of their heads and they licked his shoulder. "Tonight you will keep your warrior vigil. Until then I suggest you get to know the Clan."
The clan cheered. "Blazeheart! Lunawing! Blazeheart! Lunawing!"
Blazeheart closed his eyes and soaked up the cheers, ready to become apart of a new Clan. Hopefully his history wouldn't repeat itself or else he would be in trouble...
Well... What do you think? I know this chapter was kind of boring and slow but I hope you enjoyed it anyway! (: Do you like the names? There wasn't much I could do with Blaze and Luna... Anywaaaaay... I would like to do a riddle and a QOTD every chapter. I need some riddles though.. You can PM me or write them in the reviews and yes, there will be points (;
QOTD- What would you have named Blaze and Luna?
Riddle- A 16 year-old boy wants to join the military. You have to be 18. When he filled out the form and it asked how old he was, he said he was over 18 WITHOUT lying. How did he answer truthfully?
Good luck! I look forward to seeing your answers. Don't bother to look it up... I created it myself.
