SUMMONING: THE FOUR HORSEMEN!
Yo happy readers. First off THANKYOU for the reviews. The reason I am writing this story has 2 reasons. 1) somebody sent me a heart warming message (private) that filled me with inspiration (you know who you are) and 2) I was day dreaming and all of a sudden I realized I was day dreaming a prolog/ summary for this story. Any who, ON WITH THE STORY!
=================CHAPTER 1================
"You training ends here Naruto." Ero-Senin said to me with a scowl on his face. "It is either you can't summon or you just aren't trying hard enough."
"WHAT! I have been busting my but every day we have been out here and when I ask for help or advice you just brush me off like Kakashi did. If you want me to do better then help me!" I Yelled at him.
Ero-Senin sighed and glared at me "Fine" he seethed "If you want help here is a test. You either summon a decent sized toad or you will die." with that said, he pushed me. The trees and plants were flying by a then they stopped. I looked down and sw myself above a giant chasm.
As I started falling I tried to grab onto the sides of the chasm with chakra but it wouldn't stick. It was at this point I realized that if I didn't summon something like Ero-Senin said to, I WOULD die. I tried summoning enough chakra to summon something big but all I got was a tadpole.
At this point I realized that I would die. I tried once more to grab the side of the chasm, but this time not only did I slip, I hit my head against one of the spikes. As darkness surrounded my vision I watched as the rushing river got closer and closer. Then as I hit the water on the bottom of the chasm, everything went black.
================Jiraiya Pov===============
I watched as the kid plummeted into the chasm, hoping that he would summon something big enough to get him out of there. 'Come on kid, anything, even Gamabunta.' I watched as he disappeared into the darkness and waited, and waited, and waited. I waited until the sun started to set and realized something, I just killed my godson. "SHIT!" I swore, jumping into the chasm, hoping to find something, ANYTHING! I summoned a traveling toad(1) and had him take me all across the sides of the chasm. I summoned a dozen tracking toads and had them search for him also. After an 3 hours of looking I had to face reality. Naruto had probably been swept away by the river into the underground tunnels.(2) There was no hope in getting him out. With that, I sucked up my pride and walked back to Kohna after my toads brought me to the top of the cliff. As I walked, I hoped that sensei wouldn't kill me when I told him what I've done.
==============OK… Back to Naruto==============
"Ugh…" I groaned in pain. I felt like I had been mauled by a pack of rabid fan-girls… many times. (3 and 4) I opened my eyes and found my self on a sandy bank, sopping wet, in semi darkness, with my face next to a rotting corpse. "AHHHHHHHHHHH!" I jump up and slipped on the sand and fell, right on top of another corpse. "AHHHHHHHHHH!" I jumped up again and this time I didn't fall. I looked around and finally got a good look around me. I was in a cave carved out of some sort of shiny black rock (Obsidian) and it had some luminous green rocks that were giving of a creepy light. Next thing I notice is the smell, it id dank and smells heavily of rot and mold. After that I noticed where the smell came from, the bodies. Not five, or ten, or even fifty. There were hundreds scattered in all sorts of uniforms. Some were skeletons some were blobs of half decomposed flesh and some looked like they were just recently killed. They were wearing all sorts of clothing from plant like clothing to metal armor. There were some shinobi in the sea of bodies but some of them had really old fashioned armor. 'This… is weird' I thought.
I got up and moved around the cave until I found a large black alter in the back of it. On top of the alter was a large piece of thick parchment paper that had five names on it. Along the top were four weird names written in four different colored inks and a title. Four Horsemen binding contract. 'Weird title' I thought. Underneath that were The names War, which was written in red, Pestilence, which was written in green, Famine, which was written in black, and Death, which was written in a pale white color. Below these names were about twenty lines, one of which had the name Lucifer on it written in something that seemed to be blood. "Huh, weird names." I murmured. I kept looking at the paper until I realized what it was. "THIS MUST BE A SUMMONING CONTRACT!" I yelled. "Since the stupid toad contract didn't work, maybe this one will." I slit open my thumb with a kunai and pulled out a senbon needle to write with because this contract seemed very neat, like it didn't want to get dirty. "NA-RU-TO-U-ZU-MA-KI" I said as I spelled out my name. "Ok" I said as I finished "Time to put this to the test." I said while jumping up and cutting open my thumb again. "Hmm, I couldn't summon last time, something that Ero-Senin said. Something about not enough chakra. Might as well use everything I have. Anyways, lets see, Boar, Dog, Monkey, Bird, Sheep. SUMMONING JUSTU: THE FOUR HORSEMEN!" I yelled while slamming my hand onto the ground.
The earth started to shake, knocking me over in the process, and I thought that the cave was going to cave in. Suddenly there were four poofs of black smoke and a braying of horses. There were four old guys on horses that were the colors black, red, white and pale-green. They opened their eyes and stared at me, as if expecting something so I jumped up from where I fell from the earthquake and said "Hi there, I'm Naruto Uzumaki, THE NEXT HOKAGE, BELIEBE IT!"
==============BREAK==============
Could have had a better ending, but, what ever.
1) There are a lot of different types of toads that I have seen summoned, so why not this kind?
2) There is an immense maze of tunnels created by the river underground. There are also little islands where people can wash up if they get stuck, but it is almost impossible to find your way out.
3) If you want to know what happened/ what he looks like at this point, watch episode 3 right after god (you know he is) makes Sasuke and Naruto kiss.
4) I had an amazing idea for this part from day dreaming, but when I went to write it… I forgot it. DAMN IT!
Alright, I have up to the middle of the third part of the chunin exams mostly planed out, so any ideas for after would really help.
By the way, if you don't like something, let me know, but do NOT bash me. I write because I enjoy writing. I write for my self, and I allow viewers to see what I write.
Also, if you like something, or want to see something happen, let me know and I will se if I can fit it into the story, and if not and I have time, I shall make… an OMAKE!
Anyways, if you like it, a quick review of "good job" or "I like" or something positive will make me smile. Anyways, tata for now.
VOTE! Who should Naruto's favorite Horseman be?
(depending on who, will decide on a special ability for Naruto.) (not telling what)
(can also be a combination of two or more)
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