I just wanna thank dpih for the support your one of the main reasons to why i wanted to do this your a excellent writer i'm never unhappy with your stories but I'm sorta unhappy with mine i don't know if it's because i"m a new author or something but I'm guessing not many people like it and i don't know if i should continue but i"ll post a couple more chapters and see how it goes thank you to anyone who read my story so far anyway's if you did please leave a review because i wanna know if you guys like it or not and if i should continue or just stop hope you guys enjoy
mean while in the car with scotty...
" so Lil what do you think about the case" scotty said trying to keep his eyes on the road and not stare at lilly to much
"well i think this has to be one of our hardest cases and it's so confusing "
"wow Lilly rush are you admitting that something is hard for you " scotty said a smile playing on his lips
"ha-ha scotty funny "lilly said sarcastically
"I'm kidding lil i know what you mean"
"yeah ?"
"yeah who would wanna kill someone so innocent and helpless"
"I know it's a cruel world "
"Why hurt someone who never did anythin to you ! she had a mental disorder for fuck sake ! as if her life wasn't bad enough" scotty said shouting tears filling in his eyes
"Scotty stop the car " she said seeing how angry he was
"why lil ?"
"because your pissed your never suppose to drive while your angry so stop the car"she said trying to keep calm last they needed was to get in a argument
"fine " he said parking the car unbuckling his seat belt and trading spots
"i'm sorry lil i never meant to get that angry" he said buckling his seat belt
"it's fine scotty i understand why you got mad but the only reason why i asked you to let me drive is because i wanna go to work
tomorrow in one piece" lilly said smiling
"oh so the only reason why you wanted to drive was for your well being "
"yup " she answered teasingly
"thanks lil your a true friend " he said sarcastically
"I'm kidding i actually wanna have a partner when i go to work tomorrow"
"that's still for your well being '' scotty said smiling
"no i need my partner because no one can do his job like he can ,no can be cocky or ignorant ,and be so love able at the same time"Lilly said smiling tenderly at her partner
"thanks lil that's sweet but how the hell do you insult someone and compliment them at the same time"
"because i was describing you"
" i am not cocky or ignorant" he said not all offended
"yeah you are scotty maybe not ignorant all the times but definitely cocky"
"i give you that one, but what can I say i'm crazy handsome i'm not gonna sit and lie about it"he said laughing
"what ever you think scotty" rolling her eyes
"hey your talking are you forgetting your my pain in the ass partner"he said teasingly
" your lucky were outside my house other than that we would have problems"she said seriously
"whatever"
"alright thanks scotty for...wait you didn't even drive me home because you were throwing a temper tantrum i drove my self ho...
"alright lil i got it you drove yourself damn "he said stopping her to go further
"but thanks for letting me drive you car "she said stepping out of the car
"no problem lil anytime"
"liar it"s the first time you ever let me drive your car"
"no problem lil " he said again laughing
"by scotty "
"wait you aint gonna invite me in
"you got a dollar"
"yeah but i ant gonna give it to you"
"then i guess your not coming in " lilly said laughing
" then i guess tomorrow morning I'll have to tell everyone about you giggling" he said testing her
"you wouldn't"
"i would "
"Fine Come In!"she said rolling her eyes
"thank's lil " he said entering the house
"don't make yourself at home"she said teasingly
"jee..thanks lil"
"welcome you want something to drink" she said taking her coat off
"beer"
"alright i'll be right back"
scotty didn't know what it was but lately they grew extremely close they both were slowly opening up to each other
God this women is just amazing knowing what shes been through how could someone still be so strong
physically and emotionally she so caring and sweet and so damn beautiful words could not describe where ever we go everyone has their eyes on her ...to little creatures interrupted his train of thought
"ummmm..LiL theres something in your living room!" he shouted from the living room
lilly walked in with two beers and handed one to scotty " what's wrong "
"those are whats wrong '' he said pointing at the cats
"hey leave tripod and olivia alone"she said hitting his arm
"they have names"
"shutup and stop being so rude"
"oh right sorry it's just there missing body parts"
"so you don't know what it's like to feel unwanted and unloved !"she said tears rolling down her cheeks
"oh lil i"m sorry i didn't mean to offend you"
"but you did " she said wiping the tear away feeling completely stupid letting scotty see her like that
after this scotty started to chuckle "what the hell is so funny about this valens!"she said furious
"i'm laughin cause you aint unwanted or unloved "
"how did you know i was talking about me"she said wiping away all her tears
"well lil i know you and i also know that your loved by so many people" he said holding her hand
"oh yeah like who" she said in a disbelieving tone
"well for starters the team, your dad ,and me "
"what" lilly said putting her head up
"well cause you know your my partner and my friend" he said quickly trying to keep from humiliating himself
"oh ...well then i love you to scotty"she said smiling up at him
"thanks lil "he said smiling back
"you know what lil it's gettin pretty late''
"scotty it's 6:00 "she said laughing
"ummmmm...well i'm suppose to meet frankie at my place tonight"
"Frankie? i thought you guys broke up"
"we did but were giving us another try"
"oh ummm...i guess i'm happy for you"she said almost looking disapointed
"you guess ?"
"I'm mean i am anyways like you were saying it's getting late you should go now" she said quickly trying not to show how hurt she was by this
"ummm...ok but before i go is everything with you ok lil" he said looking confused and concerned
"yeah just go i don't want you to be late"
"ok by lil sweet dreams"
"by you to"
"oh i will" he said giving her his cocky grin
"i'm sure you will by now scotty"
"by" he said going through the door
i think i just made a complete fool of myself not only did i cry in front of scotty but i was acting stupid and why do i care about scotty dating another girl were not together hes my partner i shouldn't care maybe it's just cause i don't want him to get his broken again by frankie uqqqqqqqqqqqq...i don't like her how could she do something like that to scotty? and why would scotty take her back? but i guess that's just the type of guy scotty is forgiving ,caring,sweet, wow! this is your partner lilly the only reason why your mad is because frankie broke his heart before and hes your friend and you don't want that to happen again your not jealous ...how am i going to go to work tomorrow with out punching her in the face tomorrow
okay so how was that? let me know please review should i continue this or should i just quit please review and let me know
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