Ok if you haven't noticed I have updated chapter 1.

Authors Note: ok so I have changed the story a little. Instead of just one girl there will be two. This story is going to be mainly about two girls who are sisters and are taken into the wizarding world and find friendship, adventure and much more.

It's a good thing that Sirius was standing behind the girls otherwise they would have fell and hit the floor.

"James, you want to come over here and hold one of them for me" Sirius said. It wasn't that they were heavy or anything. It was because he couldn't hold them both at the same time. So James went over and picked Danielle up bridal style. Once James had Danielle Sirius held Janelly the same was James was holding Danielle.

"Professor, I thought you said they knew we were coming. Why did they look shocked?"

"I don't know Harry. I remember sending them a letter. Maybe we should take them to Poppy and have her look over them." Dumbledore said

"Ok, I'll go and get the principle out the closet." Harry said. After Harry revived the principle, they apperated out of there before he could remember anything.

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"Oh James who are these little ones" Poppy said

"these girls are my daughters Poppy and…."

"Yep there my sisters. My sisters. MY sisters. My…"

"OK HARRY WE GET IT" Ron, Hermione, and Sirius yelled

"Sorry I just can't get use to saying that" he said while glaring at his parents who were trying to look innocent

Soon the door opened and Fred and Jacob walked in. Jacob was an old friend of Harry's and Ron's. Their parents had all sent them to the same muggle school. Jacob was a year younger than Harry and Ron, but they where such good friends they couldn't just ditch each other, especially ever since they found out that they were all wizards.

But anyway, both Fred and Jacob walked in

"hey Harry, Ron, Hermione, everyone's been looking for…" and he seemed to end right there after just noticing the two girls in the bed.

"Hey who are the hotties" both Fred and Jacob said simultaneously

"those, Fred and Jacob, are my daughters"

While James was lecturing Fred and Jacob, nobody but Harry seemed to notice Janelly shaking.

"Umm, Mom, Dad what's happening to Janelly?"

Every one turned to look at her. She was twitching. Everyone gathered around her bed.

"what's happening?"

Suddenly Janelly's eyes flew open, but instead of those warm hazel brow eyes, they where blood shot red.

Hey how's the story so far. I know this chappie is kinda short but at least its something. Was the story good, bad , what. I NEED TO KNOW. PLEASE PLEAS PLEASE REVIEW!