Well here's the first chapter of the story I really hope it's okay , if you have any comments or remarks, please do tell them. I would love some critics so that I can improve my writing/storytelling. And thank you for the reviews! I really loved reading them!
Disclaimer I do not own Generator Rex, Ayame is based on my friend's OC (Kyarayukai)
Chapter 2
"it was a spring day color returned to the scene and slowly all the flowers began to bloom. It was noonish me, Ayama and Rayla went to the park to have our lunch. I had sushi, one of the things I learned to cook from Ayama's mom, she and her husband own this sushi restaurant quite close to my house.
My uncle and I visit it every Friday as a sort of bonding moment. He's been taking care of me since my parent's died in a car crash, not that I remember it, I was only four back then.
My uncle is a nice and caring person, though he is always busy with work, so we spend our Friday afternoons together to catch up what happened that week.
"So Moona, have you worked on your essay?" I sighed remembering my assignment, "Not yet."
Ayama looked quite worried about me. "Well you should, it's a lot of work!"
Rayla laughed "You're acting motherly, Ayama"
Ayama turned a bit red" Well what do you expect with two children like you"
I huffed "I'm not a child, besides what do you expect me to do just waltz right into Providence for an interview? I can't do that!"
Ayama looked towards me "You can't or you don't dare to?"
I sighed again " A bit of both I guess"
While we were absorbed in our conversation, we didn't notice Rayla running off, chasing a white rabbit.
It's not the first time she chased them, Rayla loved to read Alice in wonderland.
Which is quite the opposite of Ayame, she hated that book with a passion, people kept comparing her to Alice. Every time it happened she would go in a frenzy (for FMA fans compare it to Ed's fury when you call him small).
A moment later we heard Rayla scream, "Get away evil bunny of doom!"
Ayame and I both turned around, it had to happen one day. When bunnies want their revenge, now that would be a funny book. Perhaps it would turn out a bit like the birds.
So back to Rayla and her bunny of doom, a moment after the scream we saw Rayla being chased by an evo bunny, it was huge, white and not fluffy at all. He had these big teeth, I bet he could plow some trees over with it .
"I'm not sure if I should laugh or help her." My comment was awarded by a glare from Ayama.
She ran towards me grabbed my hand and so we gave chase to the Evo bunny.
When we finally caught up, we were in the center of the village. Rayla was running around in circles being followed by the rabbit who just joined along in the circles, why no one stepped in and stopped them was beyond my knowledge.
Ayama once again ran towards Rayla took her by her wrist and ran into a narrow alleyway, the rabbit, wouldn't fit in it but he still chased them. So I did the first thing I could think of and that was throwing rubble made by the rabbit during his earlier rampage.
Of course that didn't seem to help a bit, but I was hoping to stall some time until providence arrived. The minutes seemed like hours and it was as if everything went in slow motion, rabbit flew back with an enormous force and I find myself staring in front of me, to the alley where Ayama and Rayla were.
Rayla seemed okay, but Ayama she has changed. Her eyes were the same but her skin had scales all over it, if it weren't for those eyes I'm not sure I would have believed it was her. Ayama noticed me with the rabbit who was beside me, he was getting up fast, red eyes glared at me and I forze in fear. Ayame yelled at me to run. Her piercing eyes showed determination and I knew I couldn't refuse, I ran hoping as fast as I could towards our hanging spot, but even after hours of waiting I didn't see a sign of Ayame and Rayla not even a text message to say they were safe, nothing. I ran outside to look for them as I saw a jet from providence fly over my head. Then I heard Rayla yell at me, "They took her!" I immediately knew who she meant by her, Ayama she was gone, the jet still in sight. I know I could only do one thing, break her out.
"Providence HQ, how can we help you?"
"Um hello my name is Moona and I am currently writing an essay
About Evo's could we make an appointment?"
Step 1 of the break out plan was completed
