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Chapter 2: Crimson Eyes

Mikan sat beside her in the passenger seat while her brother was driving. Since his classes were over they had agreed to go home so Mikan could wash up and take a breather. They had left Ryuu pondering at the café minutes ago.

"Don't worry about Ryuu." Tsubasa said, knowing Mikan was disturbed by Ryuu's action. Sure, his sister is beautiful but she was never good at socializing with boys. She was too shy but wayyy too loud when she was around family and trusted friends. " He might seem like a playboy… No, wait he IS a playboy but he's a good guy. Deep DEEP down in his heart. He just attacks every pretty girl he sees within seconds." Tsubasa grinned.

Mikan replied with a laugh, " Don't worry Tsubasa-nii, I was just surprised. By the how do you know Hiroki-kun? He is your friend?"

Tsubasa's smile faded. " Uhhh, Mikan? Remember when I said you coud stay at my apartment?" Mikan looked at Tsubasa curiously, her hazel eyes boring into his face. "Yeah, why?"

"I have roomates.. and Ryuu is my roommate." Tsubasa looked at Mikan apologetically. "WHAT?" Mikan screamed and Tsubasa flinched. His sister might look like a nice girl and all but if you piss her off., you're dead! " Are you saying that I am going to be staying at your apartment with another guy?"

" Uh.. Three actually." Mikan glared at him and he cringed. " You can have my room? It has its own toilet? They won't bother you. Seriously. Please, Mi-chan?" Mikan's heart thawed out when Tsubasa used her old nickname. She pouted and crossed her arms. "Fine!"

Tsubasa grinned and just for a moment let go of the steering wheel to hug his sister. "I love you Mikan!" The car turned sharply. "Whoa! WHOA! Tsubasa! Eyes on the road!" He did just that and moments later, the car stopped and Tsubasa parked the car. He took Mikan's luggage and lead to the stairs. In order to reach his apartment they had to climb two flights of stairs. Tsubasa panted and sighed while dragging Mikan's seemingly heavy luggage.

"Jeez Mikan! What the freaking hell did you put in these? Rocks?", Tsubasa wanted to know. Mikan smiled. " Lack of exercise, dear brother? You can't even carry a bag like that? What kind of guy are you."

Suddenly a guy with raven hair and crimson eyes stepped in between them and grabbed the luggage. "You're pathetic, Tsubasa." He said in a monotone voice. He brought the luggage up the stairs with profound ease. Mikan couldn't help staring. He was so hot. And so strong. He set the luggage down on his feet while Tsubasa fumbled with his keys. He swept his hair back and looked at her just as she was staring at him. He smirked, " Who's this chick? You dumped Harada already? Or did she dump you? She's your new plaything?". Chick? How dare he! Who's Harada?Plaything? WTH?

Tsubasa looked at the crimson-eyed stranger angrily and tried to hit him on his head. Amazingly, the stranger gracefully ducked her brother's hand away. " She is my little sister you moron! And no I'm still with Misaki!" said Tsubasa. Without so much another glance at Mikan, the stranger, to Mikan's utter amazement stepped into her brother's apartment.

Tsubasa frowned but pushed Mikan into the house along with her luggage. The stranger opened the refridgerator and took out a Coke. "Tsubasa-nii, who is that guy?"

Tsubasa sighed and pointed to the stranger. " Mikan, meet Natsume Hyuuga. My roommate. Natsume, this is my little sister. Mikan Sakura." Mikan stared at Natsume. He's my bro's roommate? Dang! The guy whose name was Natsume didn't even glance at her. Instead he went to the living room, ignoring Tsubasa and Mikan completely.

"Natsume!" Tsubasa yelled. Without looking at them he said, "Hn?" "God, Would you just be nice? And answer in WORDS, Natsume!" The latter glared at Tsubasa.

Tsubasa dragged Mikan to his room complete with his own toilet. "Okay, forget about that jerk. You'll be staying here. I guess everything you need is here." He smiled at his sister. "But Tsubasa-nii, where are you going to sleep?"

Tsubasa told her not to worry. " I'll sleep on the couch, it pulls out into a bed. Besides, how often does my baby sister come visit me, huh?" Mikan grinned and tackled her brother into a bear hug. " Good night, Tsubasa-nii. I LOVE YOU!"

"Okay,okay get some rest." He kissed Mikan's forehead and closed the door. Mikan changed into her pajamas and crept into her brother's bed. She was surprised to see her brother's room was actually neat. She smiled and not long after that, she fell into a deep sleep.

TO BE CONTINUED

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