Okay guys i know this is not an update. i already have chapter 3 written and done in fact but i just wanted to know what you thought of the new summary? it's a quote from chapter 3 and i wanted to know what you guys thought of it and if you liked it more than the old one?

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He seemed pretty calm but his face suddenly changed as the elevator shook a bit and then another large bang sounded as it suddenly seemed to all stop.

"Ok so um the lift is definitely stuck now". Austin stated trying to figure out what was going on.

"Yeah I got that much. But how do we get out of here."

"There's usually some kind of button right that calls people or something." Austin said whilst looking around the elevator until he saw the red button on the dial pad.

"Yeah press that and it should call reception or something." I looked up at the sign saying we were on floor 33. Great 33 stories to fall.

"You know were not gonna fall right." Austin had looked up from the wall and he genuinely seemed concerned.

"These things are pretty secure. Im sure it was just an electrical problem or something.'

"I'm just not great with heights I guess," I murmured as he gave me a reassuring smile.

"It'll be fine trust me." Austin smiled

"Hello you've reached reception may I help you?" a voice from the speak said

"Yes hi" I yelled in relief running over to the speaker. "We are stuck in one of the hotel elevators. It seems to have stopped at floor 33."

"OK which lift are you in madam and how many people are there?"

"There are two of us. And were in one of the lifts going up from the lobby. My name is Ally Dawson" I responded nudging Austin as he repeatedly prepressed the open button on the door.

"And I'm Austin Moon." He stated.

"Wait, I swear I know someone called Austin Moon. I recognize your name." I responded quietly as we waited for the attendant to respond.

"That could possibly be because you might of heard of me. Austin Moon the pop star? Started as a internet sensation? Ring any bells?"

"Wait, Austin Moon, The Austin Moon." I repeated to myself. "My best friends obsessed with you, I must say you're a pretty talented singer

"Haha yeah ' He smiled. "and thanks"

I smiled back and looked him in the eyes. They were gorgeous I had to say,

Beautiful hazel eyes you could just get lost in, I almost forgot what I was doing until the receptionist returned.

"Hello again. Hi so it seems there has been an electrical failure in the lift that you are currently in. You are perfectly stable in your position at the moment between 2 floors but in order to lower the lift we need to wait for an electrician to come. It could be a few minutes it could be a few hours but well try our best."

"Wait so we could be stuck up here for hours?" I yelled

"Were trying our best here and well get you out as soon as possible. She answered. "In the meantime I have notified both of your rooms of the problem and we will be keeping them up to date, but have assured them you're in no real danger. We'll let you know as soon as we have more details."

And with that we could hear the sound of the receiver being put down.

'So. I guess were stuck huh.' Austin said, slipping his bag off his shoulder and onto the floor with a thud.

"Way to state the obvious"

"I was just making conversation," he mumbled, pulling out his phone.

"Sorry. I didn't mean it to sound like that. Im just tired I guess and not too great with small spaces.' I replied. I felt bad he was actually trying to be really nice and he's just so adorable.

"There's nothing to worry about you know. Its just you and me in a room. It wouldn't really make a difference how big it is. Unless…"

"Unless what…?" I questioned finally looking up at him as he smirked to himself.

"Unless Im some creepy guy from the streets. You know this could all be one big plan,' Austin chuckled to himself as he leaned against the wall opposite me.

"Yeah right. I could take you out anyday." I laughed.

"You sure about that?" He grinned walking over to me. He placed one hand behind me on the wall and leaned over. "Im pretty sure im about 5 inches taller."

He had an amazing smile that I couldn't help but echo, and I had to admit he smelt pretty darn good. But this was too weird.

"Hey personal space" I replied ducking under his raised arm. I slipped my heels off and leaned against the far wall as laughed again and sat down.

"So where are you from?' He questioned after a minute.

'Technically I'm from just down the road but yeah I'm from Miami' I smiled as

Austin gave me a confused face. Id told this story to so many uninterested

people, I almost had a formulaic answer worked out.

"My family is from over here but my parents have moved back and forth ever since I was about 5." I explained, surprised at the fact he hadn't already tuned out. "We were here for 8 years at one point. And then just as Id finally settled in again we ended up back in Miami. So now were just over visiting family and old friends.

"Wow. I can barely handle being away from home for a 7 month tour, let alone years at a time." He was looking me right in the eyes. It felt so strange having someone actually care about the whole story.

"You're also from Miami right?"

'Haha yeah, how'd you know?."

"my best friends in love with you remember" I laugh

"Anyways so are you technically Cali girl then?"

"Yeah. I don't really know where I belong anymore. I mean I love Miami and all my best friends are there now, and my school, and I kinda fit in a bit better over there, but its hard having such a divided family. You get used to it though I guess." I smiled down at the floor thinking about everything. As much as I resented some of my parent's decisions at the time, I wouldn't change a thing.

"So what about you?'I asked raising my hands dramatically in a rock symbol.

"Living the whole rockstar dream eh."

'You know it!' He laughed pulling a grimace. 'No, in all seriousness its pretty awesome. Just travelling with my best friend and playing shows.' He was smiling. "Sure, there have been a few struggles but you get that with everything in life I think right?" Austin finished as his phone started to ring. I looked over at him as he stood up to answer it.

'Hey Dez. Yeah we're stuck in here. Don't know how long it'll take to be honest. No you can't. Go away you suck! Ok. Yeah. K bye."

Austin hung up the phone as I started to realise how cold it was. The vent on the ceiling was letting in a slow breeze from the shaft, making me start to shiver as the daytime heat vanished. I'd only worn a short summer dress for dinner, and I was definitely starting to regret it.

"You cold?" Austin offered peering up at the vent.

"Yeah kinda. But don't worry Ill be fine."

"Wait a sec." He answered shuffling through his bag, which seemed surprisingly full for its size.

"Here. Take this" He walked over to me and dropped a navy hoody on my head before sliding his back down the wall until we were sitting next to each other.

"Hey you messed up my hair." I pouted giving him a sad face.

'Oh. Sorry let me take back my kind gentlemanly gesture for the sake of your hair." He sarcastically replied while trying not to laugh and pulling the hoodie out of my hands. "No hoodie for you."

"Hey!"I looked him in the eyes with the saddest face I could pull and batted my eyelashes.

"Say please and thank you and you may have it back."

"Fine. Please Austin may I please have your hoodie?"

"And say Austin is the sexist man alive."

"In your dreams Austin Moon" I replied laughing at him.

Maybe being stuck in an elevator wasn't all that bad


so here is chapter 2! i hoped you liked it. im working on chapter 3 so it should be up soon.

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