Ok I must say thanks to BJQ thanks for what you said and I will warn all readers that I have a grammar problem but I am working on it also the words in the BIG I will either be the characters walking away or talking to them selfes.

Mia's first case involved a man that was stabbed to death and boy was it gruesome to see, the medical examiner said that the man was stabbed 54 times and detective Taylor said that this was a guy that had some long time anger in hi to stab his victim 54 times and that if we don't catch him then he way strike again and this time it may be a lot more bloodshed then his last attack.

At NYPD station

Mia: But Flack for all we know there is a man that is killing people just for the fun of it.

Flack: No Pinson ok we will wait for whatever Mac and his team have come up with.

Mia: well you could do what you want and starts to walk away but stops and turns to him and said oh and by the way I am part of Mac and his team so I will go and that part of my job. Then walks away.

Flack: (to himself) man I wish that I did not have a partner she just does not understand what I am going through.

Young Detective: Ummmm Detective Flack

Flack: he turns to the detective and says "what"

Young Detective: I was told to tell you that you are too meet Detective Pinson at your crime scene to talk to witnesses.

The crime scene

When Flack gets to the crime scene he sees Mia by a pool of blood looks focused and can't help but think wow she looks so cute when she is trying to figure stuff out then snaps out of it what am I thinking I just lost Jess and now I am falling over this new girl who thinks she can call me when ever her schedule has an opening no I don't think I will.

Flack: Pinson he says she gets up and goes over to him

Pinson: hi she says it took you long enough to get here you took your sweet time didn't you?

Flack: no but I don't appreciate being told by a detective that I am to meet you here and not told by you

Pinson: I am so sorry but I kind of known that if I went with you I wouldn't have been able to collect any evidence plus you don't want a partner so why should you care that I did something without you.

Flack: just because I don't want a partner means nothing ok Pinson, Chef Sinclair says I have to have you so try to pretend that we get along.

Pinson: yeah you try and focus on that and I'll catch the bad guy and right as she says that she sees a guy come out of nowhere has his face covered and a gun in one hand and starts to aim and shoot at Flack she moves him out of the way and gets shot in the chest as she goes down she sees Flack shot the guy and run over to her and starts to put presser on her wound she looks at him and then closes her eyes.

What will happen to her well you must read on to find so R and R please I like those tell me what you think.