ishani, priya, Bhumi, shalu, Padmini, X, Ms. Srija, Rai, Push23, D, Hamdard Duo, Abhirikajaan, Naina Mallik, anhaal, jyoti, shalu, artanish, purba, ABHICHARM, rukmani, neha, dnafan & all of my guest reviewers….. a big thank you all for liking the starting.
Sorry, mai kisi kaam se thora busy hoon. Is liye individually reply dene ka waqt nehi. Hope I can talk to you in next chapter.
Nida muneer: sorry. I can't understand what you want to say…. Even if anything you wanted to say!
Dear guests, raj & shaina: dear aap log Tarika se itna khafa kiun? bechari ne aisa kya kar di, joh aap ek bhi scene pe use bardast kar nehi sakoge! Baapre kitna gussa….. naam bhi sunna pasand nehi karoge! I mentioned earlier that I am not a romantic story writer. Isn't it? Duo is my comfort zone. So it's for sure agar koi Abhirika scene hoga bhi, fluffy romantic toh hoga nehi. Aab yeh toh aap logo pe depend karega, further aap log is story ko padhenge bhi yah nehi. Chalo mai kya kar sakti hoon…koi reader agar chut jaye, dukh toh hoga hi. Lekin on story line demand, I must put Tarika in some places. Thank you
Dr. Bonu: ami khub taratari story ta form korechi re. Tai hoyto thik- thak otota hoyni. Sorry :( :( tor expectation fulfill korte parlam na. ai chapter ta pore obossoi bolbi, kemon holo…. Vul gulo to age bolbi :'( love you
GD: ji mai bilkul mind nehi karungi…kabhi bhi nehi. jin writers ke story padhke mai likhna start ki hai, agar unhi me se koi mujhe praise kare zaroor mujhe achha lagega, actually I'll be honored….. thik wayse hi kuch galat lage toh aap mujhe dant bhi satke ho… bejhijak. Warna mujhe meri galati ka ahsaas kayse hoga! Constructive criticism should always be welcomed!
GD, mai yeh story DELHI-AGRA-MATHURA whole 3 episodes ke adhar pe likhne ki koshish kar rahi hoon. kiunki CID team at a time yeh tin sahar ghumke tin alag alag cases solve kiye the. Bich me whole team Mumbai lautne jaisa kuch dikhaya nehi gaya. Aur mai kab kaha sirf Mathura me hue case ki adhar pe yeh likhi hoon!
Ji, mai yeh soch kar first chappy likhi thi ke…. Abhijeet sir ko airport me kahan blood vomiting hua? Woh toh tab bas bahat tired the vomiting ke wajah se. dekho, jab hume kabhi unexpected vomiting hota hai, pahela sawal dimag me ata hai,,, khane me koi ulta- sidha toh nehi hua! Digestion problem toh nehi? Hai nah? Toh ek- do bar vomiting se ek lamba safar se aye thaka hua admi turant kayse doctor ko dikhana chahega? Aur meds toh headache ke liye hai… thori na vomiting ke! Hum bahat baar aise sochte hai, chalo thora sone ki koshish kiya jaye…. Especially jab hum kuch der se rest karne ka waqt nehi nikal pate… tab dawai se jada hume rest ki padhi rahti hai…. khas kar safar se lautne ke baad. Lekin haan… woh blood drop wala mamla thori gadbad kar di mai. Thik se bana nehi nah? Mujhe bhi lag raha tha, lekin aur kuch is khopri se nikla nehi :P sorry….
Aap bilkul sorry na boliye. Mai apni point dikhane ki koshish ki. Sayad aap mere point of view samajh payenge. Anyway mujhe ratti bhar bhi bura nehi laga. Instead of, I must say thank you for pointing the loopholes. Jahan pe bhi apko kuch thik na lage meri story me…. Aap zaroor mujhe dantiyga. Aur haq se dant dena. Okkkkk. Is chappy ka bhi review chahiye :)
Angelbetu: dear yeh tragic story nehi hai. Aap befikar raho. Thank you. Lots of love from ur Adi
A.S Anjaana: dear, Abhirika part katota thakbe, akhoni bolte parchi na. Romantic type likhte try korechilam…ato funny lagchilo, ki bolbo! Seshe story line tai paltate holo. Tarika ke positively katota represent korte parbo, jani na :( Tao ami try korbo! Thank you
palak96: it's my third story & one of my dream writers reviewed it….. Lastly! Dear I'm really honored. Thank you. Apke accident ke bare me pata chala. I am really worried. Hope you are stable now. Get well soon
A special prayer for my Di (one of the awesome writer, our beloved Kriitika di). Get well soon di.
NOW HAVE A HAPPY READING…..
Daya's home
Daya descended from the cab and stood infront of his house…. Ahhh haa haa….. ghar se achhi jagah dunia me aur koi ho hi nehi sakta. Abhijeet sahi kehta hai, ghar ka khana aur ghar me hone ki ahesas kuch alag hi hota hai.
Are haan, Abhijeet ko ek call karta hoon….. nehi sayad aab shower lene gaya hoga. Baad me karta hoon. Aab chalo Daya ji, tum bhi apne bhai ke tarha fresh ho jao…. He made his way straight to his room.
After an hour long refreshing session he peeped into that food packet which Abhijeet bought for him.
Bread, milk and some fruits were there.
Daya made a weird face…. pet me idhar chuha daur raha hai, aur fruits laya hai bhai saab! Kya yaar Abhijeet….. he looked at Duo photograph hanging on wall.
Aab kaun coffee banaye…. Doodh hi pi kar soo jata hoon. Yeh flight ke chakkar me thik se soo nehi paya raat bhar.
He arranged toast and milk for his brunch and dialed his buddy's number.
Abhijeet's phone said switched off…areeee iska phone bandh kayse…. Kahi sach me kuch gadbad toh nehi? Bartaw bhi kuch ajib hi tha uska... Daya worried a bit.
But in next moment he thought, may be Abhijeet went to take rest and may be his phone's battery was low.
Koi nehi, do- char baar aur koshish karta hoon. Warna ghar hi sidha chala jaunga.
He searched his bag for his tab and find Abhijeet's medicine….. Shit! Yeh subha se meds liya nehi. Mai kayse baton baton me kaal raat mere hi bag me daal di yeh? Shit!
He was very much angry on his own… lekin aab? Aab kya karun? Subha ka dose toh miss ho gaya.
He tried again his buddy's number. Again it said switched off.
Haad hota hai. Dekha bhi hai ki nehi…..sayad soo gaya hai, woh bhi kahan soya kal raat. Pankaj sach me kitna masti karta hai! He smiled remember last night's some childish act of Pankaj.
He called watch man of Abhijeet's society and make sure Abhijeet did not go outside….ajib insaan… bahar bhi nehi gaya. Phir bhi phone off, dekha tak nehi! Kar kya raha hai yeh?
Thik hai, ek message bhej deta hoon. Adha ghanta aur dekhte hai. Agar reply nehi kiya… mujhe nekalna hi hoga. Sayad meds ke bare me bhul gaya.
He sent a message to his brother & trying to call again and again.
After 10 minutes Daya's eyelids started to betray him…..Yeh kamwaqt nind…. Yaar nahane ke baad itna nind kiun ati hai... he attached his headphone with his ears in order to make himself awake but unknowingly drifted into deep sleep in that just position due to exhaustion.
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Daya waked up at nearly 4:30 at afternoon. He at first checked his phone if Abhijeet made any call or replied his message. But nothing was there. He shocked….. subha se sham ho gaya, lekin Abhijeet ek bhi call nehi kiya! Aur mai bhi itna der tak sote raha!
He quickly got up and tried Abhijeet's number….till now switched off!
Daya frighten this time… pakka kuch gadbad hai. Woh aisa kar hi nehi sakta.
Instantly he got ready & after collecting his badge, gun, wallet, Abhijeet's medicines & car key… rushed to his buddy's place.
He covered half an hour distance in just 10 minutes in bullet speed and reached Abhijeet's home.
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Daya rang 4 to 5 times the calling bell but Abhijeet neither opened the door nor response for once.
He became panic now. He removed his key of his second home (i.e. Abhijeet's home)….. & entered with a loud call…. Abhijeet….. Abhijeeeeet….
None answered him.
The whole house was in a pull of darkness as Abhijeet didn't open the curtains earlier. At 5 in the evening, it looked like night hours in the rooms.
Daya quickly made his way to his brother's room. Due to darkness he at first can't understand & tripled over something.
Somehow he found the switches & lit light.
But what he had seen….. Abhijeet fall flat on his back unconscious, his trouser showing some blood stains & his head also showing some injury!
Daya shocked hell.
He sat on his knees in a jiffy & tried to get back Abhijeet in sense by patting his cheeks. But his primary efforts went in vain.
Daya brought Abhijeet in bed & splashed water on his face.
After some moments Abhijeet gained back his sense…. Daya felt a great relief in heart seeing his buddy's open eyes.
Kya hua tha Boss? Tum behosh kyse ho gaye? He continued in worried tone….. pata hai, mai subha se kitni baar call ki tumhe…. Tumhara phone bhi off aa raha hai. Mujhe bahat tension ho gaya tha.
Abhijeet stared at Daya for some moment….. pata nehi yaar. Mai kitchen jaa raha tha aur sar chakra gaya aur phir mai gir gaya. Uske baad aab tumhe dekha.
Daya: kab hua yeh sab? Tabiyat thik nehi tha toh mujhe batate tum…
Abhijeet: kya bataun? Tum bhi itne dino ke baad thik se rest kar rahe the. Aur kaal raat bhi tum soye nehi. Mai tumhe disturb nehi karna chahta tha.
Daya's face color changed within a second. He said in a rash tone….. achha! Tum mujhe disturb karoge! Abhijeet, humare bich tera- mera kab se aa gaya? Aur kyaaa….. mai bachha hoon ke thori der agar na soya toh bimar padh jayunga!
Abhijeet tried to say something. But Daya made him stop loudly…
Nehi… tum kuch mat bolo. Mai hi hoon pagal, joh subha se tension le raha tha…..tumhara meds mere pass rahe gaya. Tumhara phone bandh aa raha hai. Tumse koi contact nehi ho raha tha. Airport me kahan gayab ho gaye the tum? Kitna tired lag rahe the….
Abhijeet shocked & instantly looked downwards.
Daya: aab nazar kiun chura rahe ho? Aur he pointed at blood stained trouser of Abhijeet yeh khoon phir se kayse baha? Tum dressing change nehi ki…wah! Na hi sahab khana khaya subha se, na hi medicine yaad raha… bas behosh ho kar mujh par meherbani kiye….aur aab mera mu kya dekh raho ho…. haan!
Abhijeet was smiling continuously on his brother's sweet scolding.
He said almost an inaudible sound….. yaar, aab toh bas bhi karo. Galati ho gayi meri, mai tumhe bataya nehi. I am sorry…. He made a puppy face.
Daya looked at his innocent brother & smiled internally. But maintained angry face….. Yes, yes Abhijeet, you must be sorry. Because I am your brother…. I am your buddy & I have full right on you.
Abhijeet didn't want to give more chance to Daya to continue lectures. So suddenly he dramatically said….. yaar bahat bhukh laga hai. Tumhara dant se mera pet abhi tak bhara nehi. Please kuch khane ko milega, agar tumhara izazat ho toh?
This time Daya smiled broad….. tum mujhe kehte ho. Lekin mejhse jada nataunki tum ho. Idhar hi baytho. Mai aata hoon.
Abhijeet: tumne kuch khaya?
Daya smiled on his brother's concern…. Haan yaar. Subha mai thora kha liya. Tumhara phone off dekh kar mai idhar hi ane wala tha. Pata nehi, kayse ankh lag gaya….. he made a sorry face.
Abhijeet starched his hand in a smiling face… idhar aa.
Daya: nehi. Wo… tum baytho, mai khane ke liye kuch lata hoon.
Abhijeet: pahele idhar toh aa… he pulled Daya in his side.
Daya while hiding his gaze from Abhijeet…. Kya hai?
Abhijeet: mai bhi wohi puch raha hoon. Kya hai? Soo gaye the tum, isme itna guilty feel karne ka kya baat hai?
Daya: agar mai adha ghanta tumhara reply ke liye wait na karta, turant hi chala ata… toh yeh sab nehi hota nah? Mera hi galati hai. kab ankh lag gaya, pata hi nehi chala.
Abhijeet said in a naughty tone…. Ho gaya? Galati ki hay jab, punishment toh milna hi chahiye. jao, mere liye kuch halka khana pakake le aao.
Daya's mouth opened wide…. pakake le aao matlab?
Abhijeet winked at him…. Mujhe bread nehi khana. Kuch banake lao. I mean cook something light by your own holy hands!
Daya jerked his head in complete irritation and went to kitchen…. Baythiye zanab!
Mujhe Daya ko batana chahiye ki nahi khoon ke bare me? Sayad nehi. Woh panic ho jayega bahat. Lekin agar baat kuch serious hua toh…. Abhijeet absentmindedly thinking all this looking at his medicines which Daya brought some times ago….. Bhukh bhi laga hai zabardast. Pahele kuch kha leta hoon. Phir dekhte hai. Agar phir se vomiting hua, doctor ko dikhana padhega….. he signed & laid again on bed.
After sometime Daya came back to room but didn't found Abhijeet.
He just went to call, then heard sound from bathroom. So he placed food tray on table & sat.
30 minutes had passed but Abhijeet didn't come out. This made Daya worried… kahin phir se ise kuch hua toh nehi? Ek dose miss karne se itna complications! Lagta hai, phir kisi doctor ko dikhana padhega.
He called loudly… Abhijeet…. are you ok?
With his call Abhijeet came out & sit on bed with a thud.
Daya supported his friend & framed his quarry….. kya hua Abhi…. jada kharab lag raha tabiyat…doctor bulaun?
Abhijeet nodded merely.
Daya: Achha pahele tum thorasa kha lo, phir ek bar hospital chalte hai.
But left Daya in shock, Abhijeet fainted in his hand.
In next chppy….. tensed Daya & entry of Tarika
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Mistic Morning