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Hinata's POV
I have been walking for almost two weeks now. I started to think I was going the wrong way, but I say a house. I walked towards it, and stopped right outside the gate. I activated my Byakugan, and saw many traps there. I stepped over all of them, and got to the door safely. I knocked on the door, and I heard stumbling. Then, there was a girl who had icy blue eyes, and white hair. She looked at me then she glared at me. I just retuned it right back at her.
"Who are you and what do you want?" she asked me rudely.
"My name is Hinata, and I was sent here by Tsunade." I told her. She seemed to know her, because a look of recognition flashed across her face.
"Tsunade sent you huh? Well, I am Toketsu Honoo. I am a master at ice Ninjutsu, and making poisons. My sister who lives with me name is Kurai Honoo. She is a master at darkness messing with darkness. She has more powers that you will discover." Toketsu told me. I nodded and handed her the scroll Tsunade had gave me. She took it and read it then nodded to me. She led me inside her house, and I took everything in. It was better than the Hyuga Estate in everyway. No complaints, no all seeing eyes, or arguing. She turned around and looked at me. She studied my body, and nodded in approval.
"You have a good body, that shows you're athletic." she told me. "But just because you have a good body doesn't mean you can slack off. Every morning we will workout. Going for five mile runs, and push-ups. Everything to keep your body in fit." she said to me walking away.
"Toketsu, where are you?" another voice asked aloud.
"In the kitchen, and we have a visitor." Toketsu called back. I heard footsteps and turned around to see a girl that flaming orange eyes, and black hair.
"Hi my names Hinata." I said to her.
"Kurai Honoo." she said back to me nodding. "Why is she here Toketsu?" she added on.
"Tsunade sent her." Toketsu said.
"Really? That's good, by the time you leave you'll be breaking necks from left to right." she said smirking at me.
"Good, because I can name a few people that need it." I said to her smirking back.
"I like this girl, how long are you staying?" she asked me.
"For a year, that's the most time I'll need right?" I said staring at her.
"That's the only time you'll need. We can each get six months to teach you. Who would you rather have first?" she asked me. I looked between the both of them, and tried to decide.
"Toketsu, I'll be more likely to learn ice faster." I said to them both.
"You can more than likely. But my ice is different, its so cold that it can melt your skin off." Toketsu said.
"Sort of like acid." I stated to her. She nodded and turned to her sister.
"We'll run every morning for five miles. Then, we'll do some push-ups, sit-ups, pull-ups, etc. Then, I'll teach her ice first." Toketsu said to me.
"What time should I wake up then?" I asked her before she got to far.
"Wake up at five in the morning, we'll be out until midnight." she told me, and I nodded my head at her retreating form. I looked out the window and saw it was starting to get dark.
"Where's the bathroom, I would like to shower please?" I said to Kurai. She moved her head as a silent way to say follow me. I walked behind her, and saw a room that had black walls, and a fuzzy purple carpet.
"I like it, and thank you Kurai." I said to her.
"You're welcome Hinata, have a good sleep." she said walking out and closing the door. I went into my bag, and got my scroll that had all of my things in it. I took some clothes out of it, and went into the bathroom. I took a long hot shower, and when I got out Toketsu was in my room.
"I hope you like the room, and tomorrow when we're jogging, there will be traps all around us." She told me like she forgot. I nodded and she walked out of the room. I sat there contemplating everything that happened.
"Huh, I managed to get kicked out of my clan, dragged to the Hokage's office for being accused of an imposter, left my village, and now I'm training with two powerful people. Not bad for a weak person." I said to myself, lying down. Then, I was out like a light.
I woke up to hear Toketsu yelling at me, saying I should've been up. I rushed to put on some running clothes. I went outside, and saw Toketsu waiting on me.
"Remember what I said last night traps are everywhere." she said starting to run. I activated my Byakugan, and ran with her. Dodging every trap that was planted around us. But I didn't see one coming from the side of me, so I had to drop and slide under the whole thing then get back up and start to run again. I caught up with Toketsu, and she looked surprised to see me with no injuries. I sped up, and finished the course with her. Then, we ran back again and I knew this was how every morning would go. I slowed down when we we're almost done, and started to catch my breath. Toketsu looked at me with some pride.
"Not bad at all Hinata. Now, 250 push-ups go." she said in all seriousness. I got on the ground and started to do just as she said. By the time I was on 136, the sun was coming up. I pushed myself to finish the rest that I had left. I finished in another 10 to 15 minutes.
"Sit-ups, 130" she said coming to hold my feet down. I nodded and rolled on my back. She held them down, and I started to knock all of them out quickly.
"Last but not least, pull-ups. Only do 100." she told me, and I nodded jumping and swinging myself on a tree branch. I started to pull myself up, and it took me longer to do this than the other things. When I was done, I dropped to the ground. I was really tired, but I had to keep pushing myself. I got up and looked at her, and she had a smile on her face.
"Good now I'm going to teach you the basics first. Like how to gather water in your hands." she said stepping on a river on their property. She stood there and I turned my Byakugan on and I saw her taking very little chakra around her body but, droplets of water formed around her. I went next to her, and started to do the same thing. I messed up quite a lot of times, but I got the hang of it. I looked at her, and she nodded.
"Now next step is to focus that chakra in that water, and it should turn to ice." she said showing me exactly how to do so. The water she had around her slowly started to freeze. And I tried to do the same thing but it wouldn't freeze mines. I started again, but then stopped as it wouldn't work again.
"Maybe you need to add a little more chakra, and that should do it." Toketsu said to me. I did exactly what she told me, and it started to freeze, but it was still water on the inside.
"Okay add a little more but not a lot." she instructed me, I did what she was told and the water froze. I smiled and she gave me a thumbs up.
"Okay, now the shaping it is a little harder. Well, not really just make the hands signs: Dragon, Tiger, Ram, Boar, and Hare. Then, you should be able to shape your ice as you want to." she said doing the hand signs, her ice turned to needles. I did the same thing, and kept repeating the hand signs in my head. I stopped when I was done, and peeked at one of the water droplets, to see them formed as needles. I gasped happily, and then froze.
"What am I suppose to do now?" I asked her.
"Simply say: Ice style: Ice needle Jutsu." she told me backing away. I did exactly what she said and the ice flew at the grassy area.
"You have completed your first ice jutsu. Congratulations." she said to me, I bowed respectfully at her. And she returned it back to me.
"Now, the next thing will be a step higher. it's a jutsu called Freeze Flame. The thing about it is that you gather as much water as you can around you. Then, make the hand signs: Horse, Monkey, Bird, Rat, Dog, Snake, and Bird again." she instructed me. I gathered as much water as I could around me, and started to say the names of the hand signs in my head. I made the hand signs and looked at Toketsu.
"Why is it called Freeze Flame?" I asked her. She simply smirked, and said: "You'll see."
"Ice Style: Freeze Flame Jutsu!" I said loudly, and all of the water turned to ice and went in one direction, then it hit a training dummy, but nothing happened.
"Toketsu nothing hap-" I was cut off by a burst of blue flames. I stared in amazement, and she smirked at my facial expression.
"Well, I know why you call it freeze flame now." I said facing her.
"Okay, now this next one will be a little bit harder. You see this jutsu will make a dragon form, and attack the person you are going against." she said making hand signs and putting her hand to the ground with a loud summoning jutsu. A dragon came out of the water, and it was made out of ice.
"Hinata meet Kori no Ryu. But you can call him Kori." she said to me. I nodded still looking at the dragon.
"How may I assist you Toketsu?" Kori asked her.
"I didn't need you to kill anyone just meet your new owner, her name is Hinata." Toketsu said to me.
"Toketsu, I can't take your dragon." I said to her. She simply shook her head telling me to stop.
"Yes, you can. I have another, her names Isis." she said to me, and I nodded staring at the dragon. He bent down to my eye-level.
"Hinata, I will be fully loyal to you. If you ever need me, just do the jutsu." Kori said leaving me alone with Toketsu again.
"Thank you Toketsu. I appreciated this really." I said to her.
"It's okay, let's learn another jutsu." she said to me. I nodded and she started to teach me the Ice Mist. It was really cool like a fog came, and it got colder and colder until you froze to death. It went like this for the next few weeks. Then, one day she told me she had her mastery jutsu that took her weeks to learn.
"Don't panic Hinata, it shouldn't be that hard with the way you're progressing. The name of this jutsu is called Ice Illusions. The thing about it is that, it creates three more of you like shadow clones. And they all act a different way so it messes with the persons minds and they'll have a mental breakdown. You store chakra inside and outside of you, so try that first." Toketsu instructed me. I nodded and tried, but this was a lot more difficult than it sounded. After my fifteenth time of failing, I started to lose my mind slowly. She looked at me, and looked at me with a 'you see what I mean' face. I got up and tried again, and then I stayed like I was after Toketsu shouted for me to stop.
"Now, do the hand signs: Boar, Rat, Snake, Dragon, Bird, Ram, Tiger, Hare, Rat, Boar." she said to me. I repeated the hand signs in my head and did them with the words going through my head.
"Ice Illusion." I said and opened my eyes, and saw three other me's. One looked really sad, while another looked crazed, and the last looked at you with a really scary face.
"Okay disband them by saying Illusion done." she instructed covering her eyes. I nodded and did what I was told. They melted and went away.
"Good job. I have more, but I only wanted to teach you those for now. Let's get started on the poisons." she told me getting off of the water. I followed after her, and she went into the house then came back out with a box.
"These are all of the poisons I have. But be careful of what you touch." she warned me, and I nodded at her. She pulled out a black thick substance.
"This poison makes you swell up, and then you'll end up foaming at the mouth. It stops your breathing. But for that to happen it has to go inside the person." she said sitting it aside gently. She pulled out another one that was and electric purple.
"This one is really deadly, the only thing you have to do is make it have skin contact and that part of the person's body melt off." she told me about that one. Next she pulled out a clear poison, but it didn't look like poison.
"This is my most famous creation, its odorless, colorless. If it makes skin contact then it paralyzes the person from the neck and down. They can't move a thing, and depending on the dosage that's how long they'll be poisoned." she told me. I nodded and watched as she explained the rest of the poisons.
In month two, we always sparred together. She would tell me how to position myself so it could help me out in the future. She showed me a new jutsu called Twin Dragon blizzard, to dragons made out of black snow will appear and merge and create a massive tornado. Another jutsu is Ice Prison, it collects ice out of the ground and freezes the person you are going against. It is strong enough to with stand any fire jutsus.
"Hinata, you have to be the best person I've ever taught. And this is only the first two months, I have much more to teach you." Toketsu said to me. I nodded and followed her into the house to eat with Kurai. Kurai has been busy with teaching herself new jutsus and taking care of the house. So, we didn't get to see her much. The only thing I knew was that these were the best two months of my life. Now, I just had another eight to go. I will prove to them that I'm strong they won't know what hit them.
That next day I saw Toketsu outside meditating, I went out and joined her. She opened one of her eyes two hours later, and stared at me.
"Come on Hinata. I have more jutsus for you to learn." Toketsu said rising from her seat. I followed her, and she told me to stand directly five feet in front of her. Then, she formed hand signs. I looked up and saw ice falling out of the sky. I dodged all of them looking at her as if she lost her mind.
"That jutsu is called Ice Meteor. They're big pieces of ice, and if the person gets hit by one of them, the weight is enough to break that entire bone." she explained to me. She taught me how to do it, and I mastered it in seven to eight hours. It wasn't the easiest jutsu, but it wasn't the hardest.
"I'll give you some info on all of the jutsus I've taught you. People will start to think you're a threat, if they see how powerful you are." she told me, and I scoffed a little.
"Toketsu, everyone in that village though I was weak. I couldn't go on one mission without people telling me to stand back. They're to powerful for you Hinata. So, maybe this is what I need." I told her, nodding slightly.
"Well if they did that then, you do need this. I can't wait for Kurai to teach you her jutsus. You'll have more fun with those jutsus. They actually scare people horribly." she said shivering a little.
"Well, I can't wait to learn those jutsus. Man, when I go back they'll be really surprised at how I've changed so much." I said to Toketsu. And I know they'll be shocked, my clothing style has gotten bolder, and I'm bolder. So, if they hear how I am. I can't even finish that without smirking at my thoughts.
"Hinata let's train, until dinner time." Toketsu told me, I nodded and started to get in my fighting stance. I decided I would show Toketsu something I taught myself. She started to do ice jutsus, but I didn't move. I stared at her with a smirk, and she looked confused. She simply shrugged, and her freeze flame came at me. I ran away from it, so I wouldn't get caught by it. She smirked thinking she had caught me, but I made a clone. I was actually behind her. I started to do the jutsu that I made up, and started my hand signs.
"Water Style: Acid Water Jutsu!" I said from behind her, and she moved away. Before it could touch her. She looked at me shocked that I could do that jutsu.
"Who taught you that?" Toketsu asked me with wide eyes.
"I did I just didn't freeze the water and then I added a little chakra. Next thing, I know the water was burning stuff around me." I explained to her.
"Well done, you took my element and changed it as your own." she said to me.
"Guys dinner is ready." Kurai called out. We nodded and ran towards the house. Kurai made some Rice Balls and Fish. We ate while telling our stories from the day. Then, when we were done eating we cleaned up the table and dishes. I took a long shower, and lied down in my bed it was a tiresome day.
Done this is focused on months one and two next chapter three and four. Then, five and six. And so on. Also keep voting. Let's go I need a winner by the eighth chapter.
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