Saturday, May 28, 2011
Disclaimer: I don't own this. I just came up with the plot.
Chaper 1:
Knock,knock. Rachel had decided to visit a friend of hers named Michelle Bordin. She hadn't been to school for a few days, so Rachel thought she'd come by and see if she was all right. Knock, knock. "Michelle? Michelle, it's Rachel," she gave it a second,"Rachel Moseley from school. May I come in?" she asked. She didn't hear an answer so she decided to try the door-knob. It was unlocked, so she entered the main hall of the house. Michelle wasn't anywhere in sight. "Michelle?" she called. She knew her way around Michelle's house, she'd been here a million times. she checked the kitchen, then the dining room, there still wasn't any sight of michelle. There were only two more places left to check. The bedroom and the bathroom. She made her way down the hall leading to these rooms. She decided to try the bathroom first, "Nobody here," thought Rachel. She then made her way to the bedroom. "Michelle?" she called again. She paused for a second before opening the door. Rachel never thought about what she might find inside. When she opened the bedroom door she was shocked to see Michelle lying on the bed covered in her own blood. Rachel let out a terrified scream. Then not thinking of anything, but wanting to get out of the room, she ran out of the house and into the street. There she got control of herself and called the police. It seemed to take forever before they arrived, but finally they did. They soon had taken over. They kept going in and out of Michelle's house. There must have been at least twenty police officers on duty. Finally someone came over and asked her how she had discovered the body. She had to go through it for them, then they wanted her to go through it again, so they could make sure they had gotten it strait. By the time she made it home, Rachel was exhausted. She immediately went to her room and laid down, but instead of falling asleep, she laid there and cried.
I hope you all liked this. Sorry so short. Please review this chapter.