"Laurent," I gasped. What was he doing here? I thought he was going to Alaska to stay with the Denial's coven. I haven't seen him since the incident with James.
"What are you doing here?" I asked.
"Actually I'm here to do a favor for a friend," he replied taking a step toward me.
"For who?" I asked.
"Victoria," he told me. When he said that I felt like my heart stopped, it was like I couldn't breathe.
"What kind of favor?" I was staring to panic now.
"To see if your still protected," in a flash he was in front of me. I gasped and started to back up but he followed me. He raised his hand to my face and started to stroked my cheek. And inhaled deeply.
"Bella, you smell wonderful," he inhaled again and I saw his eyes go black.
"Why would she want to know?" I asked.
"Well, she's planning to kill you," my breath was coming in pants now; I was so scared my version started to blur.
"But you don't have to worry about that Bella because I happened to find you while I was hunting. And like I said you smell wonderful," he nuzzled his face into my neck.
"No p-p-p-lease," I begged.
"Shhh…. Bella you won't feel a thing, compared to what Victoria had planning for you, you should be happy," I gasped as I felt his teeth touch my skin.
I waited for him to bite me , but it never happened . I opened my eyes just in time to see him being throw across the clearing by a man in all black. No not just any man , but a vampire . Within seconds Laurent was back on his feet hissing at who ever in was. The man lugged at Laurent , pinning him against tree . He ripped Laurent head off , and continue to rip him apart and set them on fire .
Then he turned to me , my heart began to pound against my chest . I notice right away that he was the most beautiful man I ever seen. He was even more beautiful then Edward. He had black curly and bright red eyes; he had broad shoulders, and was very muscular. He walked over to me slowly, as if he was trying not to scare me. I blinked and he was in front of me. I looked up at him , waiting for him to kill me . But then he did something I would have never expected . He took my hand and kissed it .
"Hello. I'm Dimitri,"
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