Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto, no matter how much I want to pouts… ok I'm over it…
Kyuubi's
speech
Thought's / flashbacks
Normal speech or
just normal text
Kyuubi's thoughts
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Anyways I don't know what the pairing is so well we're guna get it put to a vote… when I think its time for his relationship to start, the vote will be over. (Unless its someone like Tsunade or Shizune who he meets later of course…) You can suggest other parings of course, any female from the show will pretty much do, don't think that these are the only choices… anyway votes as of now are…:
Naruto/ Ino: 4
Naruto/Temari: 5
Naruto/ Tenten: 8
Naruto/ Anko: 2
Naruto/ Kurenai: 0
Naruto/ Shizune: 1
Naruto/ Tsunade: 8
Naruto/ tsunami: 1
Naruto/Kin: 1
(I
WILL NOT DO HINATA OR SAKURA… AND NO YAOI SO DON'T VOTE
THOSE!)
PLEASE CHOOSE ONLY ONE, IF U VOTE FOR TWO AS IN "Person
A or Person B" then ur vote will not count.
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A/N: YAY! A Forbiden Life leads to a Forbiden Love has reached 100 reviews! Yay!
And uh… here's chapter 1, so seems like people want Tenten or Tsunade right now… don't worry I will change ur vote if u want me to (just put "VOTE CHANGED!" then from what to what) I will make sure no one votes twice so don't even try, lol… U guys are guna make me read all the manga chapters with Tenten in them again arnt you. Just so I will have to write her, like her… and u do all know that she wont meet Naruto till chuunin exams, just reminding u, that's when they meet… so will have a few chapters b4 they even see each other, so ya, anyways… time to start chapter 1…
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InuyashaMaster – Nothing like that, I have the story pretty much all ready set out, so if its Tsunade it's the 53 year old one… so if u guys still want her then ok, if not then ok… it will be a 53 year old Tsunade with the 13 – 15 year old Naruto… so well… ya…
Malhavoc – this one most likely will, I'm hoping it will… if it doesn't means my writing hasn't gotten better and that's no good, lol.
Dragon Noir – Lol, my editor called u a pansy (sorry…) anyways: He will grow quicker than most of the other genin, but will not be like more powerful than Itachi right after hers out of the genin exam, that'd be dumb, lol… Also I'm Naruto's going to seem very OOC because well he will be trained and raised differently. Also as I said b4 no Tsunad becoming younger, no back in time, no fountain of youth, no random jutsu… no.
anti-thule – 1) I just wrote it in. 2) Kyuubi did it :P. 3) k
Hyou – Ya, Naru/Ino is my fav paring also, I just love it, lol.
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Chapter 1:
Each morning Naruto would be woken up at the crack of dawn, the Kyuubi never letting him sleep in, not even for one minute. Naruto had learned quickly that an angry female is never good… ever. The Kyuubi needed a strong container, she wanted the strongest container and she would make it happen. He would then eat his breakfast and, before most people were up besides the wall guards, he would slip into the woods to train.
Naruto's training was slow. The 7 year old had almost no chakra control what so ever when he started training, and worst of all he didn't even know anything about it, or about jutsus. The boy was confident, a fast learner, and had much spirit. Those qualities didn't make an amazing shinobi but they helped… somewhat.
It had taken weeks for Naruto to learn his first jutsu, he was so proud when he completed his first perfect henge jutsu. Naruto's first sucessful transformation was of a boy who had said hello to him once, before the boy's parents took him away... that was one of naruto's fondest memories.
That did not impress the Kyuubi though, she wanted a powerful container, but her container was 7 and could do a simple henge jutsu. She despised the humans for what they did to her, and she despised her container. She pretended to like it, she pretended to be nice to it, but she hated it, it couldn't protect her, it was still so weak, so useless. "Good kit. Now, go and increase your chakra reserves and train your chakra control, the next jutsu I will teach you will be hader than this one, ok."
The Kyuubi started to call Naruto kit just after she
started to train him. She found out that he thought of her as his
only family member, and she thought that if she treated him the same
way he would listen to her more.
Hai, Kyuubi-Sensei. The
cheery boy replied through his thoughts to his teacher, his mother,
his only friend.
Although unable to use many jutsus, the child had picked up water walking and tree climbing quite quickly, he could control chakra better, not perfectly but enough so he could do more than one jutsu without getting tired, and his chakra reserves grew exponentially. The Kyuubi was getting happier, her container was beginning to take form, and it was being shaped perfectly.
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On Naruto's 8th birthday the Kyuubi let him have his first taste of ramen; it was the only thing he had enough money for, and instantly he was hooked. She would regret that decision for the rest of her days. She also let him get ramen whenever he completed something extraordinary; that didn't happen very often.
Although he had accomplished much in a year, it wasn't anything special, he knew the basics of being a shinobi, he could use henge jutsu and kawarimi no jutsu, but his bushin no jutsu was still lacking, and that made the Kyuubi angry. How could in a year the boy not learn the most simple of skills? How could he not have perfect chakra control yet? How could he not be capable of using my power yet?
At 9, he knew all the basic jutsus, and could complete them efficiently, and effectively. He also started to learn to use his shurken and kunai. Although not very good with them the boy could use them somewhat in a fight.
He was growing quickly, and becoming more powerful. The Kyuubi was getting excited but was still mad that her container was still so weak. She wanted her container to be all powerful, she didn't care that he was only a child, and that no one loved him, she needed power, and she wanted it now.
All of Naruto's time was spent training. He never got any friends, he was up too early to feel the wrath of his village, and in bed too late for them to wait around for him. His life was good, he was getting strong, he was being molded into what the Kyuubi wanted.
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On
Naruto's 10th birthday, something different happened.
"Kit, kit, wake up, I have something special for you."
Slowly the boy opened his eyes, the voice in his head keeping him
from sleeping. Something special, WOO-HOO! RAMEN!
"Kit,
not ramen… something better… now, just get ready ok." The
boy was ecstatic, he'd never gotten anything before; besides a
beating, and he also wondered what a demon fox locked in his head
could give him.
Once Naruto left his apartment, the Kyuubi started
talking again. "Kit, you need to go buy new clothes… your
clothes are… destroyed." The Kyuubi was right, her containers
clothes were ripped and muddy, barley held together. He needed new
clothes badly.
Yay new clothes! Orange, orange, orange,
orange! The boy had a continuous chant for his favorite colour,
it reminded him of happy nice things, things he rarely received.
"You can have some orange, but not a lot, you're going to
be a ninja, a ninja cannot be seen, or they will die, and you don't
want to die." The boy thought the Kyuubi had a good point, so
he reconsidered his wardrobe choices; but he still wanted orange.
The
boy neared the store he was going to buy his clothes from. "Kit,
stop, and put up a henge ok." The boy was confused as to why.
Why?
"Kit, the people in your village hate you,
and if you just walk into their story they most likely will kick you
out. Understand." The boy didn't, but he did as his "mother"
told him too. "and uh… sorry for being so harsh… especially
today."
Naruto walked into the clothing store, in his tattered garments, looking as if he had just been mugged. He looked a lot different, his blond hair was now blood red, his scars were gone and his eyes were a dull brown instead of his tell tale sapphire blue. "Kit, just do as I tell you ok, now…" The Kyuubi told Naruto exactly what to, the young boy protested, saying that lying and stealing were bad, but the cunningness of the fox demon won out in the end, using the boy's dream of becoming the Hokage as her main selling point. "Kit, ninjas lie, they cheat, they steal, and the Hokage is the greatest ninja of all. To become the Hokage you need to be able to lie the best, steal without being caught and cheat without anyone noticing, ok."
The
young boy walked right up to the counter with tears in his eyes.
"Wa-ha-ha-ha, s-s-s-sooo-m-m-e…"
"Calm down and tell me
what happened…" The clerk was trying to sooth the crying Naruto,
trying to understand what the hell was going on.
"T-t-two,
b-b-b-igg-er k-k-k-ids came up and they beat me up." More tears
began to flow,
"and, and, and, th-th-they too-k-k all the, the,
the money I got from my mom to buy some new clothes." Naruto
finally got through his speech.
"It'a ok, do you want to come
and pick something out, on the house." The clerk felt bad for the
child, so young and yet already been through so much violence.
Taking advantage of the clerk's kindness, Naruto picked out a new out fit. He chose a somewhat expensive one. An orange mesh t-shirt, black pants, a black vest, some black sneakers, and a belt and pouches for his shurken and kunai. The woman asked if he wanted to get something different, but he insisted he wanted this outfit. The woman didn't complain, she had already said she would give him any thing he chose.
"Ok, now that you've gotten your new clothes, it's time for the second part of your present." The boy couldn't wait, if what the Kyuubi was letting him get, was as good as his new clothes, then he wanted it so badly. "Ok, well… for what I'm going to give you, you will need your strength, so well, I guess you can get some ramen…" Instantly the Kyuubi had regretted her decision. Ramen, ramen, ramen, ramen, ramen, ramen YAY! RAMEN! R-A-M-E-N that's what I like to eat, RAMEN!
Slowly
Naruto made his way towards his favorite ramen stand, Ichiraku ramen;
it was also the only place that would serve him. He dispelled his
henge before arriving at the ramen stand. "One Miso ramen please."
He was sad that he could only afford one bowl, but it was better than
nothing.
"Every time you come here, you look so happy, so what's
the occasion this time?." Naruto looked up at the man, and stopped
eating for a second.
"Birthday." His answer was simple, a
single word.
"Well then… I'll give you a free small beef
ramen then." The old man knew the boy had no parents and how he was
being treated, but he wasn't a bad person, and he never thought
that a child could be evil. Also he never thought that one bowl of
ramen was such a big thing.
The Kyuubi was getting a little impatient, she had something important to give to Naruto, and he was spending a lot of time eating. "Hurry up Naruto I want to give you my present." Usually the Kyuubi wouldn't have said anything, so the boy knew that what she had to give him was very special and that it was better and most likely more expensive than his other gifts. He quickly finished his ramen and was off towards his training spot.
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The boy's training area had been decimated from his rigorous workouts. The once dense lush forest was now a perfectly cleared grovel. In the middle of this hole in the woodland, stood a blond boy in his brand new black and orange clothes.
Now, what did you get me? Is it a new jutsu? Is it a different training schedule? Is it a new taijutsu? What is it? The boy was curious, and extatic. "Shush boy, I will give you your present in due time. Now first I must tell you that this will alter your life exponentially, more than most likely anything ever has, and most likely ever will. Do you still want it?" The Kyuubi wanted the boy to understand that what she was going to do to him was special, and that it would change him, that it would change everyone's perception of him. Hai Kyuubi-chan! I want my present, if it's from you, I know it will be good. The boy was grinning, he wanted to know what she got him, what she was going to do to him.
"Ok Naruto, what I'm about to do is very special, you are the only person ever, to have been able to do this, consider your self lucky." The Kyuubi still was a little unsure, How would his body take it? How would his mind take it? If he breaks then I'm done for too… Come on Kyuubi-chan give me my present I want it soooo badly! Please! I want to know what it is… The boy wanted it, even though he didn't know what it was, she wanted to do it even though she didn't know if he could handle it.
"Ok Naruto, I'm going to make you more powerful ok?" She wanted him to be sure, if he rejected her… he could get hurt and worse, she could die! If it'll make me more powerful then I want to do it! First question was down, she didn't know how many more she'd ask before she was sure that the 10 year old understood. "Ok, good, now I want you to know that this will hurt… a lot…" This would most likely be the hardest thing for the boy to accept. If it will make me stronger, if it will help me become Hokage, if it will help me be recognized then I will do it, even if it hurts… now what is it? The boys demeanor changed rapidly, she was convinced she would do it, she would taint the boy.
"Ok Naruto-kun, your present is some of my chakra… we will start training you in it. I will lend you as much as you can take, then you will use it until you get used to the power, then I will give you more." She didn't know how the boy would take it… extra chakra, the demon foxes chakra, more training, so much to think about. Hai Kyuubi-chan, I will do it.
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In the Hokage's tower, an old man looked over a young boy who stood in the middle of a clearing, perfectly still. Hmmm… he is up to something, but what? Suddenly the boy started to glow red, and screamed in pain, his body slowly burning from the chakra. Easily visible burns covered the boy. The Hokage watched as the boy began to train, gritted his teeth through the pain, and just kept going.
PoofSuddenly 4 anbu appeared in the Hokage's office. "Hokage! The demon foxes chakra has been sensed, a team of 8 anbu have been sent to stop the demon from escaping." Poof and suddenly they were gone. Naruto… they are going to kill him I can't let them do that, we can just seal the fox more! poof as his thought ended the Hokage used a jutsu to teleport him self to Naruto.
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Naruto had trained for some time, he was getting exhausted, and he burned all over. Oh god this hurts… but I have to do it! The boy pushed on, training until he collapsed. As he hit the ground, the red chakra recessed and he was left, lying at the edge of a clearing covered in chakra burns.
poofAppearing in front of the boy, the Hokage gently picked him up. What has he been doing? The Kyuubi's power is gone and the boy is… sleeping!
An old man carrying a burnt child slowly moved towards the hospital, the anbu late as usual.
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A/N: And that chapter 1… hope you liked it, review please, and keep voting, so far it seems like tenten or Tsunade… so the weapons specialist or a 53 year old woman, woot! (lol) Anyways, only about... like 6 more chapters till he meets tenten, and like… 10 before Tsunade, weeeeee! How fun… anyways… ya…
Also why I wont do:
Naru/Saku: I hate Sakura, she is a bitch and I really do hate her, I want her to choke and die, lol. She's so mean to the man that loves her, and wants the guy who doesn't. She can't see that Naruto's stronger, nicer, and loves her. Also she doesn't like being treated like shit by Sasuke but she turns around and does the same to Naruto wtf, I hate her, what an insensitive bitch…
Naru/Hinata: there are just too many of this, I liked it for a while, then got very bored of it… sorry…
Yaoi: im a straight male, I don't like to read it why would I write it? I have nothing against it… just it isn't something that I wana do…