Well sorry its late but kinda busy lately I work weekends and sometimes weekdays and I'm a student full-time. I also wanted to see what the opinions of people were and thinking up where this will go and other elements. Just like my last chapter I'm thinking of editing this later to read better. But it won't be anything drastic. just grammar and flow
I guess i'll answer some of the reviews i got (In no particular order:
1.I think theres been some confusion due to the prologue. This happens AFTER campione. We see crap like wireless com-sets,tvs, and other high-tech things in Naruto which are remnants of a past era. Since there have been no campione since before Rikudo, gods have been trashing shit up for a long time and this is the end result: elemental nations forming and why the world reverted back to more natural setting with less tech. I may change prologue later to stop this confusion for new readers. I'll announce if i do
this time no DA or fallen goddess. I don't want to use Guin or athena due to personal taste and when looking for another candidate...it devolved into finding the most Yandere goddess...so yeah
due to me. to me DA are mother earth goddesses who have lost their memories and divinity while fallen goddesses are goddesses who have lost a part of their power or have it sealed (memories and divinity still there)
4. as for how jutsu are to him: imagine ninjustu and chakra usage as just a branch of magic taht is based on more eastern myths. it uses the five elements and instead of spell words it uses hand seals to "pray" to a god. same with fuinjutsu which is writing "praises" to no justsu can affect him BUT a chakra enhanced fist will still work or a blade with wind chakra. explosions indirectly caused will work and barriers may work(depending how it works).
reserves are bijuu level
for the killing ten gods thing, i had not finalized his authorities yet so i was giving myself some room(still haven't finalized)
check the end since it will answer other questions and have some important points
I don't own campione or naruto
On a certain incomplete bridge shrouded in mist in Nami no Kuni, we find a fight between two groups occurring. In one group we have Momochi Zabuza and his accomplice Haku attempting to kill the bridge builder, Tazuna, protected by the other group consisting of Hatake Kakashi and his genin squad comprised of Uchiha Sasuke, Haruno Sakura, and Sai.
The reason for this conflict is that the bridge was a risk to a businessman named Gato who was currently ruling the country's economy with an iron fist. As a result, he hired the missing nin to dispose of Tazuna.
Currently both groups were at a stalemate with Zabuza and Kakashi in a deadlock and the three genin holding off the masked accomplice. That is until a powerful gust of wind blew the mist away and all fighting halted at the sudden change in environment.
"My mist….is it Kakashi's doing? No, I would've sensed him building up something like this….then who?"
"Who could have done this? Neither Zabuza nor his partner would've done this…couldn't be one of my students. Someone else is out there."
"The mist is gone…I have to hurry up and help Zabuza-sama now that the mist is gone"
"Finally the mist is gone…..now I can fight better."
"Thank God….it was scary not seeing anything"
"The mist is gone…now our chances of winning have improved….. but who could have done this?"
In the few seconds after the mist was blown away, all the more experienced or quick thinking shinobi instantly went on alert for the new possible threat while others relaxed now that they could see.
"Phew. Glad I'm not late, would've been pretty bad if someone died before I stopped the fight." At this, everyone looked to where the new voice came from and saw a boy standing near one of the edges of the bridge.
The first thing they noticed was he was young, very young. He looked to be around the same age as the genin give or take a year. His clothing was nothing that special, a worn looking brown cloak that reached to mid-shin, navy blue pants, and a black shirt.
On the belt he wore were a few pouches or bags, he wore shinobi sandals, and was carrying a weapon by its sheath in his left hand. It was a sword but of a less used make, being straight and double-edged from what they could tell.
His features were far more noteworthy, blonde hair, vibrant blue eyes, and slightly tanned skin.
"He looks like a younger version of Minato-sensei…could it be Naruto? But this boy doesn't have whisker marks; still it's been 7 years so maybe."
"Is he the one who blew away my mist? Doesn't matter, just have to know if he's an ally or not." Similar thoughts went through the minds of others, gauging if the newcomer would help them or not.
The youth merely casually looked around without a care for the tense atmosphere before he focused on Zabuza. "There's no need to kill the bridge builder anymore or for you to continue fighting the Konoha nin. Why risk your life when you're not going to get your end of the bargain isn't that right….." He looked to one end of the bridge. "Gato?"
Everybody looked in the same direction to see Gato and a large group of armed mercenaries. "Well, seems we've been found out boys. Too bad, I was hoping they'd wipe each other out before we stepped in. Oh well they're all tired anyways so no matter."
"Gato, you backstabbing son of a bitch,I'll gut you like a pig for this!" Zabuza was already preparing to charge.
"Well something like this was bound to happen; after all you are a shinobi. But what are you going to do about it? Look at you; all of you! Tired, injured, and outnumbered, how do you expect to beat this many people now?" Gato laughed at his self assured victory and army started joining in.
"Not good, he's right. I'm running low and hurt. My genin can't hope to beat this many people fresh or not. Zabuza's arm is injured and his accomplice is exhausted."
Among the shinobi, similar thoughts went through their minds as they looked at the small army of mercenaries behind Gato and were getting ready for what might be their last stand.
"No choice, guess I have to fight them now..…shouldn't be too hard to beat'em." The blonde calmly replied as he strolled by the shinobi while unsheathing his sword.
"Is he insane?! How could one guy beat that army?!" The thoughts of the bridge builder were reflected in the genin's minds.
"Is this brat serious? Well at least he'll make it easier for me to kill Gato."
"I don't know what he is capable of but if he can help us then it's better than nothing."
"Look boys! This little kid thinks he can beat us, what the hell do you think you can do against hundreds of mercenaries you cocky little shit!?" Gato and his army were laughing mockingly at him while the blonde walked closer to them.
The blonde smiled cheerfully at them and pointed his sword straight upwards above his head. "Well it's not enough to use that but I think this suits beating scum like you. Sinners repent! For I am the sword, slaying all evil before mine eyes! Believers rejoice! For I am the light, guiding all good in my presence! He who stands before Paradise, burn all and pass judgment!"
As his those words were said, everybody couldn't help but stare as a flame appeared on his sword. Their gaze fixed on the beautiful flame, clear and crystal like while being the color of molten gold. The sparks that flew off glittered like stars in the sky. Nobody could deny that these were special flames and the presence they exuded only reinforced this feeling.
"What kind of flame is that? It's gold…a Kekkei Genkai?"
"A gold flame? I've never read anything like that in the clan records…"
"It's…..it's…..beautiful."
These were just some of the thoughts they had but all that changed when suddenly the flames engulfing the blade suddenly swelled and created a pillar….no a blade of flame that was easily over a hundred meters tall.
It was awe inspiring, seeing such a giant blade being held with such a small handle single-handedly.
At this point the villagers came to see help in repelling Gato's forces but became mesmerized. By the end of his words, the flames took on the shape of a sword and stopped growing but now the blade was nearly a kilometer in length and half as wide as the bridge.
"Any last words?" The blonde asked in the same relaxed tone he had since appearing. It made the scene just more shocking.
Gato, who finally got over the shock of the giant flame blade, replied, "N-n-now l-let's not be hasty now. I'm s-sure we can come an agreem-ment."
"Sorry but there's nothing I could want from you."
"W-wait! I'll give you anything you want! Money, women, anything you could desire!" At this point Gato was panicking in fear.
"Goodbye." With that, the giant flame blade swung down and hit Gato and his army.
The flame blade disappeared but all the people it hit were still on fire and their screams could still be heard. Some tried to run to the water, others rolled around, and others were unmoving. In a matter of seconds, the flames dispersed and nothing was left, not even ash.
Nobody moved; everyone was silent at what they just witnessed. "Well guess that solves the problem." The blonde just looked back at them all while smiling radiantly.
That broke the spell over them all and everyones' minds were racing.
"S-such power and he's the about our age." These were Sasuke's thoughts as he watched and thought back to his teaher's words: " …there are people younger than you but stronger than me….". "Is this what he meant? Wiping out hundreds like it's nothing? Can Itachi do the same? Is this what I'll have to fight if I want to avenge my clan?"
"He's strong but what's his objective? I must stay on guard."
"M-my god! H-he killed them all like it was nothing!"
"He's strong but is he friend or foe? I'm not sure if I would be able to aid Zabuza-sama against such an individual."
"This brat….the hell kind of power is this? Not even winded or a bead of sweat after something like that."
"That flame…there were rumors about them….but nobody was sure if they were true or just exaggerating. So he's the 'wandering daimyo'?"
"You guys can come out now." The blonde was looking to the side and everybody was confused as to who he was talking to.
Suddenly a group of Kiri hunter-nin appeared around Zabuza and Haku.
"Shit! I can't beat them or run like this!"
"No! Zabuza-sama will be killed!"
One of the hunter-nin took off his mask revealing a familiar face to Zabuza.
"Ao is that you? Why are you here and not fighting in Kiri?!"
"I was given a mission. Momochi Zabuza, by order of the Godaime Mizukage, you and your accomplice are to come with us back Kirigakure where you shall be re-entered into the service of the village."
All the shinobi couldn't believe what they just heard. None more so than Zabuza.
"What? Re-enter service…you mean go back to working as a Kiri-nin but what about my crimes? And Godaime Mizukage? Who's that? What happened to Yagura? What about the civil war?"
"Correct. You were originally a fugitive due to an attempted coup against the Yondaime Mizukage. Since the entire rebel faction basically committed the same action it has been decided that you as well will be pardoned. As for who the Godaime is, she is Terumi Mei leader of the rebel faction which won the war. As for what happened to Yagura…that man killed him." Ao shifted his gaze to the blonde while emphasizing 'that'.
"…..and what if I refuse? What if I don't want to go back?"
Some of the hunter-nin shifted at this but made no move to attack.
"We will let you go BUT unless you want to remain labeled as a nuke-nin, you are to relinquish your sword to us as well as never give out any of Kiri's secrets. If there is any suspicion that you have given our secrets, you WILL placed back in the bingo books and made a nuke-nin immediately."
Zabuza thought about which would be the better option and replied, "I'll go back, and no way I'm handing over my sword and going around doing dangerous shit for crap pay."
"Well I've heard worse reasons but it's fine. We'll stay here for the night so you and your companion can rest before we head back to Kiri, is that acceptable?"
"Yeah, whatever..I'm too tired to care right now. Haku, looks like we don't have to run around anymore."
"Y-yes, Zabuza-sama." Clearly Haku couldn't believe such a scene was happening.
"Well now that your talk is over, hey old man!" The blonde was looking at Tazuna when he spoke.
"Y-yes!" He was still in disbelief at how Gato died and was nervous speaking to the blonde.
The blonde just threw two scrolls at the old man. "Take it, it's all the money and stuff Gato took from everyone. Just ask one of the ninjas to unseal it all."
The inhabitants couldn't believed what they just heard. This blonde was giving back everything Gato stole from them? Everybody started cheering, slowly it got louder as more joined the chorus.
"Th-thank you! You don't know how much this means to us! First Gato then all our possessions… How could we ever repay you…..uhh I'm sorry but we never got your name?"
Everybody stopped cheering as they eagerly waited to learn the name of the man….no HERO that defeated Gato and gave them back everything he stole.
"My name? Ah..sorry I forgot to introduce myself. My name is Kazuma Arashi, daimyo of Ta no Kuni."
(Sometime later)
After leaving the bridge, everyone started celebrating the end of the tyrant and having their possessions returned. Everyone was praising or cheering who made this all happen: Kazuma Arashi. He was the center of the celebration and nobody could help but be view him as their saviour. In the end, everyone tired, or drank themselves, to sleep leaving only a handful civilians and the shinobi.
The Konoha-nin were all looking at the blonde daimyo who stopped Gato, wondering just how he was so strong. Eventually Sasuke got up and started to approach him when Kakashi stopped with a hand on his shoulder.
"Don't even think about it Sasuke."
"What, I was just going to talk to him."
"I know that look, Sasuke. You are NOT going to fight him. You'll be in serious trouble if anyone learned you attacked him even if he wasn't a daimyo."
"He's a daimyo I understand that but it should be fine if it was just a spar right?...and what do you mean 'even if he wasn't a daimyo'?"
"Sasuke that man is famous for his deeds and before becoming a daimyo, was known as the 'wandering hero'. Haru no kuni, Tori no kuni, Oni no kuni, Na no kuni, he's saved all those countries and dozens of others."
This brought a shock to all the genin and looked back at the blonde not believing someone so young could save a country not to mention dozens.
"He is officially recognized as a national hero in several countries and considered one in several others. People from all over the Elemental Nations consider him a hero, saviour, whatever and some even worship him as a god. If they learn you attacked him, spar or not, your status as last of a noble clan won't save you from the political fallout."
"People from all over will be demanding you be punished and if we don't, Konoha will suffer since we would lose an untold number clients and trade agreements. Even our daimyo will demand it; he once saved the daimyo's daughter and granddaughter after they were kidnapped. If you attack him Sasuke, the best you can hope is be labeled a criminal and sentenced to life in prison, worst is that you be labeled a traitor to the leaf and be publically executed for high treason."
Sakura and Sasuke were stunned, not believing what they just heard. Sai just remained silent thinking over what he was just told.
"S-sensei, y-you're kidding right? They wouldn't demand S-Sasuke-kun be executed for sparring against him would they?"
"Sakura, I've seen temples built in his honour with people worshipping him. I've seen giant festivals celebrating him. Hell, I've seen countries have national holidays to celebrate him! This conversation is over! This is an order,understood?!"
"Yes,sensei!"
(With the Kiri-nin)
"So how'd he do it? Kill Yagura I mean."
"It was…god-like. It wasn't a fight between shinobi, it wasn't even a fight between Kages, it was a fight between two forces of nature. Everything Yagura threw at him, he returned effortlessly. Eventually Yagura used his bijuu but…..he competed with a bijuu head-on like it was nothing. The way he fought….it was like some god commanding nature itself to attack. I realized just why so many worship as a god if they witnessed something like THAT." As he kept on talking, the look in his eyes became more distant, reminiscing about the battle he witnessed.
"So he's really that strong? You sure you're not …..exaggerating a little?"
Ao looked at Zabuza and his eye hardened slightly. "Zabuza I saw him a person trading blasts with a bijuu. Hurling wind and lightning with such ease that even Kage could never hope to match. Some in Kiri even consider him a god made flesh now while others just see him as their saviour in our bleak war."
"Okay okay. No need to get angry. I'll admit if he can do stuff like the flame blade all the time I'd probably think he's a god too."
Eventually, everyone returned to bed as there was still much work to be done tomorrow.
(Next Day-At the bridge)
On one side was Arashi along with the Kiri contingent about to return to Kiri and on the other were the citizens of Wave and the konoha-nin who still had to guard Tazuna until he finished the bridge.
"We'll never forget what you did for our country, please come back anytime you want and we will welcome you with all our might, daimyo-sama."
"No need for the 'daimyo-sama', just call me by my name. I'll be sure to come back later after you all get back on your feet. Let's all party again, okay?" The smile he gave look even more radiant and everybody couldn't help but be drawn into his words.
"O-of course, Kazuma-sama!"
"Well we should start heading back to Kiri, we've been gone too long. Let's go everyone." With that they started walking away admist a giant chorus of cheers, farewells, and other well wishes from the citizens.
"Oh right! Konoha-nin, please tell the Hokage I'm gonna visit sometime soon! Maybe during the exam so make sure I get a good room!" The blonde yelled back while waving to everyone.
I remember once how everyone thought the fourth/naruto's dad was called Kazama Arashi don't know how that started but i thought 'i'll use it as an alias'
So he basically left Konoha since (as some1 pointed out) a god and campione fighting is like two bijuu fighting. so naruto left since he knew eventually gods will come after him and wreck konoha in the ensuing battle.
When i was thinking of goddess candidates it devolved into yandere competition. with pele (who threw magma and shit at everyone she fought might fall in love with her lover including her own sister and kills her lovers when she thought the were in love with someone else), brynhildr (sigurd's wife who stabbed him to death when she found out he lied), and morrigan (who killed anone she was interested with if they didnt recognize her when she was in disguise) being choices. i decided that this wouldnt end well so no goddess companion
I'm also wondering if i should publish his the various adventures he goes through in those seven years as flash backs or as side chapters. events include battling Yagura, becoming daimyo, saving oni no kuni, killing gods, etc
For those wondering about the weird phrasing and how people worship him:one of his authorities
Authorities he has(not all of them and subject to change) and that he has named:
Odin- [Odin's Gift]:a wisdom authority that odin willingly gave. it has two aspects to it. one is {Mimir's Eye}which gives him an ability similar to athena's to access memories of the void(gives him knowledge on what campione are among other things) the other is {Wise Ravens} which is two ravens,Hugin and Munin that fly around the world collecting knowledge for him(uses this for his travels and running from konoha)
- [Gungnir]: the authority that he naturally received. its not the always hitting spear odin has since its based on naruto's skill with it.
Indra- [Storm of War]: Allows him to create and control all aspects of a storm: Rain, wind, lightning, etc. There is a limitation due to how powerful this authority is: it can only activate only when there is a certain level of conflict in his presence or when is engaged in conflict. So one bandit:no activation. Also the strength of this authority depends on how intense the conflict is. If its a group of bandits he can make a small breeze or channel some lightning onto his fists. At the other extreme he can make downpours, lightning rain, etc
Hou Yi- [Solar Wrath]: manifests a bow that can shoot arrows with the flames of the suns. each is as strong as a four-tailed imari(when he went four-tailed against orochimaru) and he can only have max 9 at anytime. He must wait one full cycle of sunrise and sunset to recharge one arrow.
Achilles- [Champion of Steel]: grants him a body of "steel" but the stronger it is the more steel like it will look/become. also has a passive effect of making him look more "heroic" to everyone and the effect is more potent when people witness his deeds or his actions. in the manga he inspires and awes the crap out of people so now that side of him has been turned up to 20.
Inari-[Kitsune Servants]:self explanatory
Loki-[Many Forms]:transformation/disguises
Uriel-[Flame of Judgment]:golden flames that burn anything that is sinful,impure,evil,or corrupt. Can be used with a sword to become an attack for combat.
Also there were other authorities i decided not to use like [Twelve Labours] which wouldve been like a copy of godou's