Hi…I'm so glad that I finally create a great story (hehe…I meant a story that earned review) I knew that I made TONS of mistake in the first chapter and some of them are unfixable, so in this chapter I'll try not to make any mistake and also fix some old mistakes(I hope…). And I believe you were being confused by my timeline (hehe…) so please think it like this, Hime is 6 years old, Hanabi and Karasu are both 12. I knew it's confusing and incomprehensible, but please try to understand without minding the confusing timeline. Oh, and also please review! (And I promise I'll continue this story quick, or this story ends here!! )
Chap 2: Diversion
"T-The real test?!!!!" Shouted all three of them together. "WAIT A SEC! If you said so then what the heck that you did to us before?!" Karasu complained, "Hime-chan, before you explained that before we officially become a genin, we'll be tested by the squad leader, and somehow the test depend on the leader. I didn't understand your speech completely though, but I'm sure that the point is that he tested us at that moment. " He stopped
Hime looked at him both curiously and annoyed. She HATES making mistakes. It was some kind of mentality trauma that she got once she knew about his father's death. Mistakes can lead to death, and death lead to failure ness in live which can last for eternity. She had mistaken translating Ibiki's words, and she HATES it. She curled up her palms and clenched her teeth. "Hime-san, calm down. We haven't heard the real test yet." Hanabi comforted.
She just can't admit when she created mistakes, even the slightest ones. Different than Hanabi who knows her own limit, Hime always seeking perfection, no matter where she is. Even before in the academy, she ever cried and almost kills someone who called her name in class if Iruka-sensei didn't stop her. The reason is simple…
'She made a mistake in the test, just one number'
"Karasu…"Hime called. Karasu rised an eyebrow, "To be honest, I really wish to kill you right now, Karasu. However, Shikamaru-niisan ever taught me about teamwork. Why we were divided into squads; why do we, such different kids need to be united in a squad system--" she paused.
"Teamwork, right?" Hanabi continued. "I ever had a talk with my dad. He told me the importance for us having divided into squads like this—"
"Enough chit-chat kids. I have told you before; we will begin the test NOW. Follow me to the northern forest,"He ordered. "Oh, and those who were left behind during the trip will face their consequences…" He threatened with a horrifying aura and that was also being displayed on his face. All the temporary squad 13 members immediately do as he said.
----During the way there----
Hanabi and Hime were chatting with each other about their training and daily lives. They weren't friends or enemy during the academy years, and in this case since they'll be subordinates sooner there is nothing wrong to become knowing each other first, right??
"Sniff, sniff… I smell… BARBEQUE!!!!" Karasu yelled happily. They were actually only 10 meters away from the barbeque shop, and whom else has the best nose…Karasu turned to where the smelt came from, almost like flying until-…
"Wait!" Hanabi said suddenly. "I don't really think you should go there, and at the same time…Where is our sensei??"
They looked around them. Their sensei had disappeared!! But when?? And at the same time, Karasu disappeared as well!! Oh, can it be worst than this?!
"Oh no…Hime, what do you think we shall do first? Shall we looked for Karasu or shall we looked for Ibiki-sensei ahead and leave him?" Hanabi asked, hiding a slight of panic ness.
Hime thought deeply while staring blankly at her comrade .If we immediately rushed to Ibiki-sensei, we will break the team work rule, however…
"I think it's the best if we separate for now. You will head straight to the meeting point and explain this situation while I went--"
"No. I prefer it otherwise," Hanabi interrupted, "I have byakugan, so I can find him quicker than you."
Hime nodded before she continued her way to the forest, leaving Hanabi alone. "BYAKUGAN!!"
Meanwhile, Hime barely ran for a half mile when she met him, the one she least expected for now. "Ah…sensei..??Why did you stop?"
That man turned at Hime, "Where are Karasu and Hanabi, Hime-chan?!"
Ah finally! My final exam has ended and I finally can continue this story! I know this story isn't very good(even I know that I can't write well T.T) please review…(and again, this time I expected more than 2 reviews, or I might not continue this story)
