CHAPTER 2
Here is the next chapter this time its longer and tell me if i made any mistakes plus this is my oc Amberfur. critize if you want to.
I OWN NOTHING ERIN HUNTER DOES
Leafkit and Squirrelkit finally opened their eyes and now were getting ready to meet father.
"what is he like does he like us" asked Squirrelkit.
"of cross he likes you and wait till you see him" replied sandstorm with a purr. "Well now can you sit still so I can wash you properly. You're getting on my last nerve Squirrelkit."
I guess I was so caught up in my thoughts I didn't realize that my father came until he sat right next to me.
I freaked out
What should I do?
Should I say "good mor…
"hello Amberkit" said Firestar.
slowly I turned my head to the side to gaze at a fiery pelt and scars running in various places and emerald eyes piercing through my skin.
"h... hello Firestar "I mumbled between my teeth.
He purred really hard until I realized my fur wasn't clean and I was trembling to the bone. I did a quick cleaning and clamed myself down.
"are you Firestar" I turned around to see Leafkits amber eyes gleaming with interest.
"yes I am and you must be the famous Leafkit" said Firestar.
"I'm not famous like you, mother told us all sorts of things about you".
"yeah she did she also told us how defeated scourge" Squirrelkit squeaked.
Then an angry growl appeared out of nowhere and said "Amberkit I've been looking everywhere and I find you ungroomed in front of your father".
I squeaked and said "I was just thinking and then he appeared out of nowhere and frightened me".
Sandstorm picked me up by the scruff and carried me away to wash me. Now this is a life lesson I learned always groom your pelt nicely for everything. After that wash I was tired to the bone and Went to sleep in the nest I befriended and sleep crashed over like a wave.
next chapter coming soon!
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