This fanfic was inspired by "Demonkid"'s 'Kireki tenshu' and Yuyu hakusho of Yusuke and Raizen and fanfics where Naruto transform into a 100 feet creature.
I do not own Naruto except for some things that are not created by the "Naruto" author.
Disclaimer i will never own naruto or anything else except these storys.
A/n: remember! this is a GOD Naruto fic! A super Naruto.
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Chapter 2: Rampaging god
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--------(KONOHA-Hokage office)-----------
Jounins (minus Kakashi) and chunins are standing shoulder to shoulder, whispers of confusment and alarm filled the Sandaime's office and infront of them was non other then Sandaime Hokage who was peering at them with wise, aged teal eyes. A sound of poof and a puff of smoke appeared in the middle of the room making everybody jump and in battle stance around the intruder.
The smoke slowly dissolved to reveal...
"Kakashi!"
"Your late!"
"Be on time Hatake, jeez." Genma smirked at the porn reader.
"Sigh...now he's going to make an excuse like "black cat blocking the way" or "road of life" again."
"Not I'm suprised though..."
"WHAT HAPPEN TO YOU!?" Yelled Anko who spotted a red spot leaking from Kakashi's bandaged side.
"Er...I...got lost in the...ugh...road of life?" Kakashi's lame excuse again. except there was a slight strain in his voice which didn't no unoticed by everybody.
"Kakashi, no seriously...your injured...WHAT HAPPENED!?" Asuma yelled as he grabbed him forcfully. Kakashi sighed knowing he can't simply run out of this one.
"I...well...I was training Sasuke for the chunin exams." He scratched his head hoping that they will all leave it alone.
"Oh? And what kind of training that would leave the copy ninjainjured that badly" Sandaime narrowed his eyes at the nervous silver haired cyclops.
Kakashi mumbled something like. "Teeeeaching...Sasuke...thlaa chidooooli..."
"What was that Kakashi? Speak louder so we could all hear." Demanded the 3rd lord his voice was of seriousness.
The genius one eye sighed again and replied fully."I was training Sasuke for the Chunin exams finals" he waited for any "thats it?" or "The Uchiha got you good Kakashi!" Then he felt something slither around his legs and knees, he looked down to see two purple snakes entanling his legs together and hissing at him with their forked tounges out.
Anko who summoned the snakes from her sleeves, was not satisfied with Kakashi's answer growled."What was that Kakashi...?" She grinned sadisticly at his sweat-dropping look"...You were just mumbling"
Kakashi restrained himself from sighing again.
"I was just teaching him the 'Chidori'" (One Thousand birds) He stated in a all oh so casually voice.
"WHAAAAAT!!!!???"
"Kakashi, what the hell your teaching a genin Chidori!?" A random Chunin exclaimed."From what I heard, Chidori shouldn't simply be taught so recklessly! Even if it's Uchiha-Sama, he coul-..." But he was interupted by a growl from Kakashi.
"You don't think that Sasuke couldn't pull it off Yechi... (I made the name up, probaly mean nothing what's so ever because i can't just simply name a random chunin "Bob") ...or should I say...Chunin?" Kakshi glared at the now sputtering Chunin.
Gai however also agreed with Yechi and added a few cents of his own."I agree with Yechi, Uchiha or not It's still reckless to teach a genin such a reckless move...!" He scolded, for once he wasn't going on about "youth!" or doing any good guy pose.
Kakashi scoffed at this. "Like you have the right to criticize me Gai." Gai uncharacteriscily scowled. "Bah!"
"So what happened Kakashi?" Said Iruka, he and other other academy teachers had a day off so he's free to hang around.
"Well...I was having Sasuke to practice his Chidori and have him strike evenly with my own Chidori until an massive earthquake erupted but me and Sasuke were still too focusted to notice..." He stopped when everybody gave him a look of 'how the heck you do not notice an earthquake!?' "...But then a huge pillar of yellow chakra shot out into the sky. I was so shocked at the power intesity that it distracted me so that Sasuke accidently grazed my side with an incomplete Chidori." He finished with pride and pain. Pride for his student to learn the Chidoriso fast and pain from his lightning grazed ribs.
"Yeaaah...about the earthquake and the sudden chakra that made me crap my pants...anyone know about it?" Asked the chunin proctor Izumo his cheeks blushing from humiliation from saying it out loud.
Now everybody is remembering the terrifying moment and the feeling of dread and chakra that washed through them.
Soon many questions were thrown around the room. They were asking like "Yeah! What happened!?" "Where did the earthquake come from!?" "Nevermind that! What about that inmense gold colored chakra!" "I'm hungry..."
Sandaime who was waiting patiently tried to silence his shinobi citizens.
"Ahem...!" He coughed, trying to get their attention.
"What if it's the Kyuubi!?"
"No you fool! Kyuubi has RED chakra not yellow!"
"AHEM!" He coughed louder.
"What if it's a another demon like blah blah blah" "Maybe your right! It could be Blah blah jab jab blah."
Sarutobi had enough. "SILENCE AND LISTEN TO ME OR ELSE D CLASS MISSIONS FOR A WHOLE YEAR!!!" He roared, this time he got EVERYBODY'S attention.
"Ahem...Alright, I know every single one of you are worried about what just conspired awhile ago." He paused for them to listen and to check that everyone is listening to his word.
"The shockwave created a panic throughout the village, I fear for my people. What's ever happening can't be good." He paused again for them to get the message. "I want some or most of you to find out who or what is behind all this." He gazed at them with great intesity.
"Well...I can't go. Shikamaru needs someone to train him" Asuma said, half of him wanted to check it out, his other half says no because of the power that radiated from the pillar scares the heck out of him.
"I can't either, Shino is also one of the passing contestants so he need my help as well" Kurenai said calmly but her motives were also like Asuma's.
"Gomen Hokage-Sama, but this pain in my ribs are killing me...and I need to train Sasuke...so I can't so I can't go..." Replied Kakashi with a fake "ouchy."
Sandaime pleadingly stared at his other available shinobi/kunoichi' s but they all instantly mumbled and grumbled excuses of this and that of how they can't go...and each excuse was getting lamer and lamer.
(RANDOM EXCUSES FROM RANDOM JOUNIN,ANBU, AND CHUNINS)
"Gomen Hokage-Sama, but my kids are blah blah blah...so I need to live"
"Gomen Hokage-Sama, but my wife needs me at home...so I need to live"
"Gomen Hokage-Sama, but my boyfriend is taking me out for dinner...so I need to live"
"Gomen Hokage-Sama, but I need to change my pants because I crapped my self from that power oversirge...and I don't wanna run with a "crappy" feeling on my ass" (At this everybody took a wiff of this person and stepped away in disgust)
(END OF RANDOM EXCUSES FROM RANDOM JOUNIN,ANBU, AND CHUNINS)
He sighed wearily as he took a drag from his smoking tabbaco pipe.
"Very well...You are all dismissed..." They all greeted their leader with goodbyes and shunshin away and Kakashi was the last to leave,."...Kakashi!" The said jounin snapped his head to his leader.
The 3rd stared at the silver haired cyclops streaght in the eyes before saying. "Be careful of what you teach him" His voice carried seriousness.
Kakashi stood still before saying "hai" and telaported with the rest.
Sandaime stared at the place where the last jounin once was stood there before leaning back on his chair and massaged his throbbing temples.
"Sigh...I'm getting old for this crap..."
"Then why don't you retire...sensei..." Sandaime jumped as he reconized that voice.
"Jiraiya?" He asked with uncertainty.
The door opened and revealed...Jiraiya.
"Jiraiya! It is good to see you my good friend, it's been...what the,... WHAT THE BLUE HELL HAPPENED TO YOU!?" He yelled at his former student's condition.
Lord Jiraiya, the toad sage, the super pervert was now standing disheveld, muddy, and annoyed. His hair was sopping wet and matted with mud. His cloths were also muddy, wet and a few rips from there and there. He had multiple cuts on his face and had an irritated look on his face.
"Er...well you see..." The sannin tried to think of words to his former mentor. "It started like this..er...umm..."
"Yes yes go on" said an annoyed Hokage.
"...It started when I pushed Naruto off the gorge's Cliff" He scratched his muddy hair before he was tackled by the 3rd.
Sandaime's face was at rage. "You...WHAT!?" He snarled, but paused a little before resuming to it's original rage."You pushedhim...off a cliff...?" His face trembled with more rage and more fright to Jiraiya.
"I..." The Gama Sanin swallowed a feeling in his throat. "...You see I was trying have Naruto gain acces to the nine-tails chakra...by..."
"By throwing him off a cliff!?" The older man scolded.
"And then a massive earthquake then a massive chakra pillar rose from where he fell...""WHAAAAT!!!??"
JIraiya winced at the volume of his mentor' voice but couldn't help to have a chibi version of himself smirk.
'Heh...I haven't got him to raise his voice like that since I used him as a decoy at the womens bath' His face twiched as if he was going to smile but calmed it into a frown. 'NO! This is Naruto were talking about...now to think of it...where is that giant hulk if a boy?'
Sandaime took a few breaths before glaring at his former student.
"What...Happened...?" He said slowly, and both word were in a tone of 'lie and you die' kind of voice.
"Sigh...well it started when I pushed Naruto off the cliff and..."
-----------------------(FLASHBACK!) ----------------------(47 MINUTES AGO!)---------------------------
Jiraiya kept staring in awe/fear at the itimidating, yet majestic golden glowing beast infront of him. The creature was at least over 100 meters, which was the size/mass of Gamabunta or Kyuubi!
(warning! Naruto thunder god description! Also, I suck at writing descriptions, so again,cut me some slack, and I'll be "borrowing" some parts so you get the idea)
The The creature's upper body half was of a body of a crouching hulking man, it has a healthy glowing pale, ebony skin that seems to glow in either day or night. In addition, black markings went around the heavily muscled body, like torso, arms, and shoulders. (In Yuyu Hakusho, think of Mazaku Yusuke's demon form markings and add some more if you want.)
And attached to his back were wings that were twice as long as the "new" Naruto, it was GIANT slightly yellow looking wings that were rather bat-like and at a wing span at 210 meters.(like GODZILLA's Destroyah wings, except in a scary, vicious gold color)
The lower body, (meaning waist down) the waist, hips and thighs were hidden in a giant blue pants(think of raizen's pants in yu yu hakusho) that was in deep dark blue and was outlined in gold and with it was a loincloth tapestry that was also in dark blue with gold outlining.
The knees, shins and feet were worn by beautifuly made gold metelic boots. (Warcraft 3, the gold boots Archimonde wears)
And sticking out from the rear were two long, reptilain tails with gold fur. (Godzilla's king ghidora's kind of tails except furry.
"It's" hair was like the Yondaime Hokage, gold and shiny. Except the bangs in the front were touching "It's" nose and everything else was longer and reached in the middle of "It's" back.
And to completes it's appearance was a feral looking face, It was indeed a human looking face alright, framed by the curtains of molten gold spiky, silky hair. Eyes were entirly white and void of any pupils or iris and elongated canines were visble from a snarling, grimincing mouth, which made Jiraiya think it was a miracal that didn't puncture the lower lips. And to complete the "face," three
At last but not least, three large horns emerged from both sides of his head, two were on both temples and curved down to his 'whiskered' cheeks (Like the dragon Gandalf fought in "lord of the rings LOTR" first movie) and the last horn was spotted on the top of the head and was slanting down to the back.
(Sorry if i sucked at descritpions and "borrowed" so many things from movies/games and idols so you can identify what i have in mind. Also, I do not own them.
There was silence. Silence so quiet it was unnerving and they were outside for fanfiction sake!.
Then a low, but loud growl from "It" shattered the fragile silence, making Jiraiya twitch a bit before calming down to a taijutsu stance.
He looked at the beast with uncertainty.
"Naruto! Is that you? can you hear me!?" He shouted so the "beast" could hear him. Another silence passed by before the creature nodded it's head slowly and with rumbling a low, gruff "Yes"making the toad sage to release the breath he was holding for who knows how long.
Jiraiya was about to sigh in relief before a sliver of "WTF!?" went to his aged but still perverted mind.
'He spoke...but he didn't even open his mouth to talk!?' Jiraiya pondered in curiosity. Many questions invaded his head at once, making a slight headache, much to Jiraiya's displeasure.'Ugh...after this, i'm going to need sake...lots and lots of sake...and a womens bath place for my "Inspiration." He thought, although he knows that he won't be thinking any of those 'thoughts' tonight.
"Naruto...OY NARUTO!" capturing his transformed student's attention. "Tell me...what the blue fuck happen to you? How can you talk without opening your mouth?...And why the heck are you even like that anyway!?" He hissed loudly at him, so many questions and yet no answers.
'Naruto's' giant pupiless eyes glared at Jiraiya, his mouth snarled showing his purly white fangs made him flinch a bit.
"I don't know Ero-Sennin...But your right, why am I talking to you with my mind instead of my mouth?" The said person face-faulted at the stupid hinted reply but one thing went throught the sage's mind. 'I see...he's a bit of a psychic or telephathy, he uses his mind to talk...And still he doesn'tt respect me!!'
"Sorry...pervy sage..." Naruto's grumbling thoughts interupted Jiraiya's, it sounded strained as if he wasn't refusing to do something."...must go...explore,...this feeling...is too great...I...can't...CAN'T...R-RESIST...I'll...I'll see you later."And with that Naruto lumbered away from his new mentor and his gold bat-like wings started to open up.
Jiraiya's eyes snapped open in resignation and started to roar at the retreating behemoth. "Naruto NO!" He began chasing the soon -run-away-god. "Naruto stop! stop!!" The "god" ignored him "STOP! JUST LISTEN TO ME!!!" But his voice no longer reached him, the "boy" is now lost in the sea of his newfound power and was now overwhelmed by an instinct to soarinto the air.
He cursed and started handseals when the creature's feet was starting to lift off the ground. "Damn it! Yomi Numa! (Swamp of the Underworld!)
He summoned a vast swamp appeared right beneath his target and with hope that his jutsu will trap his runaway student instead of killing him.
But his plans were unuseful as the glowing creature kicked off higher, much higher then he expected.
"Grrr...Sorry Naruto, but it's for your own good!" He just completed a chain of handseals and puffed out his chest. "Katon: Karyuu no jutsu!" (Fire release: Fire dragon jutsu)
A large stream of fire erupted from his mouth and soon it molded into a shape of a dragon as it headed to the apposing gold haired behemoth.
'Hopefully this should knock him down!' He thought as fire kept stewing from his mouth.
But his plans were once again stumped as soon as his fire jutsu to even reach his tail, a barrier of lightning in a shape of a globe surrounded Naruto. So his fire just been cleaved by the electrical barrier, no damage to "it" at all.
Soon the great beast stiffened and slowly, SLOWLY tilted his head to the left so his left eye glared at the sannin.
Jiraiya gulped at the itimidating look that his newfound pupil was giving him.
"Uh...Oh..."
The beast roared as he shifted his position and with one flap of it's wings caused a slight whirlwind at the unlucky Jiraiya.
The whirlwind wasn't huge, but it still packs a quite punch.
"NAAAAARUUUUTOOOOOO" Jiraiya screamed and blacked out from the now muddy, wet, damaging twister that surfed on him.
Jiraiya groggily opened his eyes to see blinding sunlight and forest destruction. He looked around some moew and noticed that his literaly giant student was no longer here.
"Sigh...I guess this is the time to go to Sarutobi's office huh?" He got up to inspect his muddy, wet self.
"My clothes! My hair! Is my 'inspiration notes' still there? Thank god it's here!...Little wet though, but oh well!"
He tucked his slightly wet notes and dishevledly walked to back to Konoha and into the Hokage tower!.
------------------------FLASH BACK END)----------------------(47 minutes later)-------------
Now two old men were pinching there noses in experation,
"So...sensei..." Jiraiya said capturing his old teacher's attention. "...Do you have any idea wh-"
"My apologies Jiraiya...but I'm confused as much as you are" At this, they sighed wearily.
'Naruto...What happened to you?' The older shinobi thought, a small tear leaked in one of his eyes.'Minato...who is Uzumaki Naruto? I know he is you son...but that doesn't solve of the mystery of what and how he become'
-----------------(Otogakure territory)-----(Sound village)----------------
It was raining softly, whcih was a suprise because the vlllage hidden in sound rarelyrains. But most people shrugged it off as a mere weather problem.
A sound ninja was now standing infront of a sound kunoichi with waist lenght red hair and a flute in her hands.
"Hehehe...com'on little girl just come with me and have a little...fun" The Oto nin smirked lecherously behind his mask.
"Fuck no you piece of shit and leave me the fuck alone!" Said the redhead.
"Awww...don't be like that...just...hey...what the hell this storm come from!?" Indeed the small rain drops began to increase as they kept talking and now it was a full blown lightning storm!
The confusion wnet on when the oto citizens started to point and shout to the sky.
"Look over there!"
"It's a monster!"
Indeed a monster has suddenly appeared in the sky, it was flying, large, yellow glowing aura and hulking. And to the trained eye, it seem like the storm cloud are traveling withit.
Everybody was too scared to do anything, the size and power that the beast was enmitting was mind bogling!
And soon the village was left scared and wet as the creature continue to hover above them and head west.
Soon the creature hovered out of sight and the storm with it, leaving a sunny day to the troubled citiznes of Otogakure.
-------------(Lightning country borders)--------------
Yugito was not having her day then again she never had her days. Yugito nii was a highly respected ninja in Kumogakure and the second strongest of her village besides the Raikage.
And why wasn't she having a troubled day?
Because the Nekomata no nibi (two tailed catdemon)within her wouldn't stop badgering her!
and 2: it started to rain and as time passes by the rain seem to cats and dogs.
It started 20 minutes ago, her tentent suddenly began pestering her about a 'huge threat' coming this way. Yugito was annoyed but knew her inner demoness was right, but that still doesn't stop her annoyance in check.
Her musings were sharply interupted by the frightened voice of her people.
"Look up there! It's huge!"
"Oh my god...It's a monster!"
"Everybody on your position! Yugito in position!?"
The said Nibi jinchuriki stared at the being who captured fear to her and her village.
The thing was huge! Tri-horned, hulking and musculer, wings flapping and the thunder clouds seems to travel with it as well!
"What the-Is this some kind of god of our country of something!? Yugito snarled with sacrastic tone.
A random Kumo jounin shouted orders. "Everybody stop it in it's track, ready!? O-k 3-2-1, Raiton: Rairyuudan! (Lightning Dragon Missile)(not mine it belong to the author of "Fawning hearts")
Soon 20 to 30 beams of lightning at a shape of a dragon shot to the flying beast in front of them.
Everysingle of those dragon shaped jutsu hit dead on. Everybody cheered at the smoking figure.
But all good most come to an end.
Everybodies happiness were cut short as a deafening raor echoed throughout the village.
Hovering infront of them was the same creature they thought they had destroyed. It stood unmoving and undamaged as it glared at them like a fly that wouldn't leave him alone.
Seconds passed by before the beast grumbled and opened it's mouth. Very soon, lightning started to from around it's gigantic body and to his horns. The lightning traveled to a shape of a orb, which was in front of his face.
"Hey Human!" Nibi's feminine yet demonic voice called out to her vessel.
'Not now furball!' The vessel shot back. 'If you hadn't noticed...I'm kinda busy here!' Her eyes locked on to the beast position.
"no you fool! I'm warning you that he's going to fire his own version of 'Raiton: Rairyuudan!' and booooy it's gonna be big!!"
Yugito eyes widen in horror, if the monster unleashes it's attack, the destructive force will...!
"Raitiki!" She barked at the same random jounin who called out the attack. "Nibi told me that the creature is going to fire it's own lightning missle...And it's gonna be catastropic!" This got everybody on the roll.
Meanwhile the thunder beast has finished the orb of lightning and swallowed the it. Soon, his torso and stomach expanded and said one jutsu that made everyone in Kumogakure stiff.
'Raiton: Rairyuudan!!!' And with that, it's body deflated and an enormous dragon shaped missle erupted from his snarling mouth.
"Raiton: Rairyuudan!!" Now 30 to 40 dragon shaped missles combined into one huge lightning dragon and matched evenly with the monster's own blow.
A huge, HUGE explosion rocked the land, everybody was covered their eyes from the incoming dust that headed their way.
Meanwhile the hulking lightning creature lost interest in them and decided to head south, but not before grunting in satisfication that he lost some of his chakra.
Everybody was now tiredly getting up except for Yugito who wan't knocked down like the others.
'Nibi...just what was that thing...?'
"..." Was all the cat demon said.
Yugito sighed.
---------------(103 miles away form the lightning village)-------------
Meanwhile for the beast itself was now talking to the himself, or rather...with another powerful being.
"Why...why did I just do that...?" Naruto, who was at the moment, regained some of his humanity. "I...I'v felt like of was being controlled..."
"Because brat...that is the 2nd sequance of your transformation...the thirst for a strong opponent..." Naruto's head snapped up as he reconized the demonic voice of Kyuubi.
"KYUUBI!!! WHAT THE HELL YOU DID TO ME!?!?!?!!?" He roared in his mind making the demon lord cringe
"Calm down human...or should i say, demigod..." He smirked at the now "demigod's" confused expression. "All I did was awaken your powers to a full bloom and well...you are now tasting your ancester's power."
"But lool at me!!...I'm a monster...I can't go back home looking like this...CHANGE ME BACK!!!" He roars echoed through out the clearings and also in his mind.
"OW!! not so loud bastard! But anyways all I can say is...I merely unlockedthe power that flows in your vains and as for changing you back...you have to do it yourself because I don't have your body." Kyuubi bitted out.
Naruto's head dropped lower and lower from every word, a few tears leaked from his large blank eyes.
Seeing the now pathetic form of his gigantic vessel, Kyuubi franticly called out.
"Hey! Hey! Now that I think about it...there isa way to turn back to a human form" At the end of his sentence, Naruto immediantly begged how.
"Really!? Are you sure sure!? If your lying I'm gonna-"
"Yes, yes and no I'm not" The fox declared his pure but still doubtfull truthfulness.
Silence...
Silence...
Silence...
Naruto decided to shatter the quietness. "Soooo...How do I turn back?"
Kyuubi stayed silence for a moment before answering. "Well since I'm not a species like you so you'll have find...him..." He ended with a huge dramatic tone.
"Who..is it?"
"..."
"Well?"
...Your...Ancester...Raizen."
END of chapter 2
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Sorry for the late chapter! now that i think about it...this is the longest chapter that i ever wrote!
As for the name "Raizen" I borrowed it for this fanfic and as you know very well from Yu yu Hakusho. This story was kinda like a Yusuke and raizen thing. Seeing Yusuke reborn from his demon blood and reading "Demonkid"s hireki "tenshu" made me think to all this.
I would LOVE to update "Pity from the white origami" but I'm kinda stuck at that story so I'm gonna put Pity from the White origami on "haitus."
