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Lily opened the note cautiously.
it read:
dear Lily,
hopefully you've heard of our parents blossoming friendship, no?
Well, I just thought that we shold make a sort of peace treaty over this summer.
Would that please you, O fair maiden?
Yours truly,
James Potter
p.s.- I do hope your mother is a good cook! :)
Lily could imagine his greasy, sarcastic voice saying those words. She read the note over and over again.Was she a fool to think that it would be anything more than a peace treaty, or was she a fool to let her heart leap when she read, O fair maiden... fair maiden? She didn't even know if that was a compliment or an insult for God's sake! Was she feeling so foolish to think it might be... NO! she wouldn't become James' slave! Or would she? It didn't seem like that bad a life... living with the man of her dreams...the man she loved... the MAN?! James Potter a man?She chuckled at this. It was funny how stupid she could be sometimes.
"Ah! Yuki! Where did she go?!" It was always hard to find Yuki among all of the toys. "Toys, how childish..." Lily had probably thought this about every day that she could remember. Then reality hit her. HARD. In the form of a stuffed panda toy. Petunia pushed Lilly onto her bed.
"Hey! Petunia! Why did you do that?!" Lilly yelled, outraged.
"Well Lily," Peunia sneered, "I've put 2 and 2 together and now I know that you and that Potter boy, James know eachother! Don't you?! You were both at school together at the exact same time, no? You're both FREAKS! Fucking freaks! You don't belong here Lily! I bet all of the Potters are like you! Mutants! But they aren't going to be our friends for long! No, not after I deal with them! I'm going to make sure that they never come back! Because I hate you and I hate everyone like you Lily! From this point on- I have no sister!" Petunia yelled before storming out of the room.She stuck her head back into the doorway and sneered, "That Potter boy won't like your room little miss stuffed animal! How immature!"
"Pe-Petunia..." Lily stammered. Lily had known that her sister had a problem with her being a witch, but not this strongly...
* * *
dear James Potter,
Fine. You have to guarentee that you'll be a perfect angel,
or at least a not so horrible human in your case.
And in case you were wondering, my mom is a good cook.
-Lily Evans
p.s.- My little sister Petunia is planning on making your life a living hell.
That seemed okay. The perfect angel part was a bit sketchy, but she passed it with the following sentence.Should it have been longer or short and simple? Straight to the point or make him read on and on until I get to the point? It was just a note! Why was she making such a big deal out of it? Or was she not making a big enough deal out of it?
"I'm really starting to annoy myself with these dumb questions..." Lily thought to herself.
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Yuki had left with the note an hour ago. Lily was brushing her hair, even though there was no need, as she didn't seem to ever get tangles in her hair. She was pretty much just brushing her hair to keep her mind off James and Friday night. It was 1 am. Thursday morning. She was trying to stay up until Yuki came back, or was it that she couldn't fall asleep?
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James Potter examined himself in the mirror. His parents were depending on him to be well behaved at the dinner party.It wasn't just any dinner party, one with muggles, and not just any muggles, The Evans.The parents of Lily Evans.Lily Evans was in his year at hogwarts. She wasn't exactly eye candy, but she wasn't exactly ugly either. He had never given her a second glance, but he didn't like her. At all. In fact, to him, a world with no Lily Evans seemed like a big improvement. Yes, it was true, he was a prefect,but he had a certain passion for rule breaking. He didn't like Lily because she was the one who always caught him playing pranks and always gave him the worst punishment of the marauders. The marauders consisted of Sirius Black, Remus Lupin, Peter Pettigrew and himself.
Sirius Black was the same height as him, with charcoal eyes and hair that honored his last name. He was always the one who had something to say to get you really pissed or laugh your ass off.
Remus Lupin was by far the most caring and without even trying, ended up charming the pants off half the girls (and gay students) at Hogwarts. He had sandy blonde hair, and chestnut eyes.
Peter Pettigrew was a few inches shorter of Remus, with short brown hair and chocolate brown eyes. James wasn't quite sure why they hung out with Peter, they didn't even like him that much, what was the word for it... pity, that's why they hung out with him.
James went back to looking at himself in the mirror. Tall, scrony, a messy mass of jet black hair, cerulean eyes, that was him. He tried to comb his hair, but that didn't exactly help. Instead, it became even messier. It would have to be good enough for the Evans. And with that, james retreated to his bed, into a deep, dreamless, slumber.
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A/N:
Yumiko: Second chapter! Hope you liked it! Email me if you think I should change anything or if you have any ideas for the next chapter! Okay people? Thanks!
Love always,
~Yumiko
Thank you...
Bunni chan: You get an extra coconut meringue cookie for reviewing!
Min : My first review!Yippee!
Princess Evil: review #2! Thanks!
Hestia: I really liked your story too!
G.D. Jade: Gracias!
Brigadoonia: ee! You're right! Thanks for correcting me!:)
HPMystery: Thank you, hehe... the plot thickens...
Thank you all soooo much! I love you!!!
Here's your reward for all the lovely reviews!
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Lily opened the note cautiously.
it read:
dear Lily,
hopefully you've heard of our parents blossoming friendship, no?
Well, I just thought that we shold make a sort of peace treaty over this summer.
Would that please you, O fair maiden?
Yours truly,
James Potter
p.s.- I do hope your mother is a good cook! :)
Lily could imagine his greasy, sarcastic voice saying those words. She read the note over and over again.Was she a fool to think that it would be anything more than a peace treaty, or was she a fool to let her heart leap when she read, O fair maiden... fair maiden? She didn't even know if that was a compliment or an insult for God's sake! Was she feeling so foolish to think it might be... NO! she wouldn't become James' slave! Or would she? It didn't seem like that bad a life... living with the man of her dreams...the man she loved... the MAN?! James Potter a man?She chuckled at this. It was funny how stupid she could be sometimes.
"Ah! Yuki! Where did she go?!" It was always hard to find Yuki among all of the toys. "Toys, how childish..." Lily had probably thought this about every day that she could remember. Then reality hit her. HARD. In the form of a stuffed panda toy. Petunia pushed Lilly onto her bed.
"Hey! Petunia! Why did you do that?!" Lilly yelled, outraged.
"Well Lily," Peunia sneered, "I've put 2 and 2 together and now I know that you and that Potter boy, James know eachother! Don't you?! You were both at school together at the exact same time, no? You're both FREAKS! Fucking freaks! You don't belong here Lily! I bet all of the Potters are like you! Mutants! But they aren't going to be our friends for long! No, not after I deal with them! I'm going to make sure that they never come back! Because I hate you and I hate everyone like you Lily! From this point on- I have no sister!" Petunia yelled before storming out of the room.She stuck her head back into the doorway and sneered, "That Potter boy won't like your room little miss stuffed animal! How immature!"
"Pe-Petunia..." Lily stammered. Lily had known that her sister had a problem with her being a witch, but not this strongly...
* * *
dear James Potter,
Fine. You have to guarentee that you'll be a perfect angel,
or at least a not so horrible human in your case.
And in case you were wondering, my mom is a good cook.
-Lily Evans
p.s.- My little sister Petunia is planning on making your life a living hell.
That seemed okay. The perfect angel part was a bit sketchy, but she passed it with the following sentence.Should it have been longer or short and simple? Straight to the point or make him read on and on until I get to the point? It was just a note! Why was she making such a big deal out of it? Or was she not making a big enough deal out of it?
"I'm really starting to annoy myself with these dumb questions..." Lily thought to herself.
* * *
Yuki had left with the note an hour ago. Lily was brushing her hair, even though there was no need, as she didn't seem to ever get tangles in her hair. She was pretty much just brushing her hair to keep her mind off James and Friday night. It was 1 am. Thursday morning. She was trying to stay up until Yuki came back, or was it that she couldn't fall asleep?
* * *
James Potter examined himself in the mirror. His parents were depending on him to be well behaved at the dinner party.It wasn't just any dinner party, one with muggles, and not just any muggles, The Evans.The parents of Lily Evans.Lily Evans was in his year at hogwarts. She wasn't exactly eye candy, but she wasn't exactly ugly either. He had never given her a second glance, but he didn't like her. At all. In fact, to him, a world with no Lily Evans seemed like a big improvement. Yes, it was true, he was a prefect,but he had a certain passion for rule breaking. He didn't like Lily because she was the one who always caught him playing pranks and always gave him the worst punishment of the marauders. The marauders consisted of Sirius Black, Remus Lupin, Peter Pettigrew and himself.
Sirius Black was the same height as him, with charcoal eyes and hair that honored his last name. He was always the one who had something to say to get you really pissed or laugh your ass off.
Remus Lupin was by far the most caring and without even trying, ended up charming the pants off half the girls (and gay students) at Hogwarts. He had sandy blonde hair, and chestnut eyes.
Peter Pettigrew was a few inches shorter of Remus, with short brown hair and chocolate brown eyes. James wasn't quite sure why they hung out with Peter, they didn't even like him that much, what was the word for it... pity, that's why they hung out with him.
James went back to looking at himself in the mirror. Tall, scrony, a messy mass of jet black hair, cerulean eyes, that was him. He tried to comb his hair, but that didn't exactly help. Instead, it became even messier. It would have to be good enough for the Evans. And with that, james retreated to his bed, into a deep, dreamless, slumber.
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A/N:
Yumiko: Second chapter! Hope you liked it! Email me if you think I should change anything or if you have any ideas for the next chapter! Okay people? Thanks!
Love always,
~Yumiko