So I decided to write the next bit of my story, My chapters come out fast generally because I plan the story out in my head a lot before writing it although I have not finished the ending so I want to hear suggestions! So please read and review so that I know somebody's reading my story.
Chapter 2: To the World of the Living
Knock. Knock. Knock.
"Leana, can you go get the door I'm wearing a mud mask right now." Hinata begged, I swear he spends more time in the bathroom in one day then I do in a week.
"Yep." I breathed, when I opened the door this lady with ginormous boobs was standing there with a very bald man, and this guy with blue hair and some weird yellow and red thing hanging from his face, or maybe it's a girl.
"Wow, she's so cute!" The girl bubbled.
"You think everyone's cute" coughed the bald one.
"Shut up Ikkaku" rang the girl and punched him in the arm.
"The girl does show an immense amount of beauty, she has perfect face shape, and a proportional body." Finished the other guy with blue hair, I had concluded that he was male just because of his voice but it was still debatable. I mean the guy was really pretty…
"Umm…" was all that I could come with as I stared at this interesting group of people.
"Oh right… I'm Lieutenant Rangiku Matsumoto!" sang the girl with the big boobs. "This is third seat Ikkaku Madarame" she babbled pointing at the bald one, who just nodded. "And this is fifth seat Yumichika Ayasegawa" she said pointing to the guy with the red and yellow ornaments on his face who was now touching his hair.
"Hi… Can I help you?" I questioned still trying to be polite.
"Well, you see we came here because you're invited on a mission to the world of the living" Exclaimed Rangiku, with a bright smile like she was going to hug me or something although I'm afraid I might get lost his her boobs.
"Why" I stuttered "Why would they pick me?"
"You were teacher's pick for well rounded in all areas, and one of the academies top students!" she bellowed.
"Really? That's amazing!" I chirped, I can't believe this is happening I mean I've always done well but I've only been in the academy for not even a year yet. "So when is this happening?" I inquired.
"We leave in two hours." Said the bald one Ikkaku, who was just smirking probably at the reaction I gave him.
"What?" I bellowed "Well I guess I better start packing" I giggled nervously, I started to run around the room. "Wait, what do you pack on a trip to the world of the living?" I asked out loud although it was more to myself.
"Don't worry I took the liberty of getting you world of the living cloths already, so your good to go." Rangiku smiled at me.
"Really, thank you so much!" I squeaked, and headed towards the door, but I quickly remembered, Hinata. He was in the shower so I just left him a note; he doesn't like his shower to be interrupted.
We approached the gate to the world of the living, I was so nervous but also so excited. I mean students almost never get to go on a mission to the world of the living this is big, really big. We went through the gate; it wasn't as exciting as I thought it would be. I was actually kind of disappointed. The first thing we went to do was get me a gigai, and I must tell you these things are uncomfortable. It's like being in clothes that are five sizes too small or like those pants that you love that don't fit and every move you make is almost check mate to your butt.
"Thanks for the gigai Mr. Urahara." I thanked the man who made the gigai for me. It was weird to meet him. I've read about him, he was captain of squad twelve. Now he runs this weird shop in the world of the living, its funny how things work out for certain people. I put on the clothes Rangiku had got me for my gigai; it was pair of dark wash jeans, and a white lacy top.
"Lieutenant Matsumoto this is so pretty, you have impeccable style." I complimented, she had really out done herself.
"No problem, I just thought it was cute so I bought it." bubbled the Lieutenant. "And call me Rangiku."
"Alright" I stated, today feels like a dream, I mean I'm hanging out with lieutenant this is so… awesome!
We left Urahara's shop the day was turning into night, so we were going to need somewhere to stay. Rangiku was going to stay at her friend Orihime's or something like that, which leaves me stuck with the guys. Although I'm not complaining I generally get along with guys better anyways at least at the academy.
"So where are we staying?" I asked trying to sound nonchalant since I was dealing with guys.
"We're staying at one of Ichigo's friends' house, I can't remember his name. They're on Vacation or something." uttered Ikkaku walking towards where ever that was. Ichigo, wait he doesn't mean Ichigo Kurosaki! I mean that guy is a legend; I heard he has orange hair and is super powerful. I wonder if I will get to meet him that would be so cool!
"Nice" I spoke trying to stay calm even though I was jumping inside. When we got to the place, I got the sisters room, Yumichika took the master, and Ikkaku took Ichigo's friends room. I turned off the lights and was ready for the next day of the world of the living. I also really want to meet Ichigo Kurosaki.
Don't worry Renji is coming soon there will also be more in his perspective but it just works out better in hers for the beginning. I was wondering what type of personality Renji should have towards Leana?
-Flirty
-Prude
-Like shes too young and he doesn't want to take advantage.
I haven't quite decided yet so please R&R if you wan to help my decision. Or if you have any other idea let me know. Also post flames if you must they will help me become a better writer. :) -Bri105
