Slavers are having a bad day

Thank you Archer and Envirosuit's for your support and idea's! You have really helped my model my characters abilities and personality's.

This one is for you Chris! I rushed it for you! Also Kasumi will name Collector Apexis

The guy has had time to collect his thoughts so now it is calmer now. Also it might take a while to get to Shepard. I don't know whether he should appear on a random planet or Freedoms progress or Horizon.

Poll ideas; Romance Tali/Kasumi/None (VOTE)

Warning: Implied Rape, gore and death

So far 2 for Kasumi. Also Shepard is either going for Asari lady or Tali (If she doesn't get Romanced by Collector.)

Disclaimer: I do not own anything apart from my OC Vengeance.

Half as long, twice as bright

Zeke Dunbar

I walked past the dead bodies on the cold hard floor of metal. Four eyed faces forever placed upon the dead. I had killed them. They were like the Collectors but more hated. They had other non-Prothean. It was an interesting to see the races vary.

Flashback 1 Hour ago

I had drifted into the big machine, the tool of the Controllers, the ingannatore. Its long prongs and large smooth metallic rings had somehow mistaken me for a small ship. It was very…interesting to travel through the relay. Nothing had phased me it was rushed and painful. My body felt like it was going to fall apart slowly. The journey had lasted for ages. Taking ages and burning. Suddenly a rise in the atmosphere. One last painful spike and a blast. It stopped. I opened my eyes to see a ship floating towards me. It was bulky and big. Painted black with dark red stripes going down the middle and the sides. Something was painted onto the side, a name perhaps? I could see some weapons hanging from the ship, windows dotted around with yellow and black stripes painted onto the sides. I smack into the side making me groan. I reach out and clamp on a bulk. Lady Luck seems to be with me now. I am near a window. I hold onto the side and carefully reach up and climb. It takes agonizing time. Everything seems to now. I finally reach it.

I hold my arm up and smash down with all I could possess. It does nothing. I do it again. Nothing. I feel anger. Why does the universe seem to hate me? Slowly my rage builds up. I keep on smashing my fist on the window. During my rage I feel a prickle going along my arms. I roar in frustration and smash down. My hand breaks through destroying half of the window. I feel happiness. I look at the arm that broke through. Red swirls comb around the whole arm making it seem deadly with the feral claws and spikes that are there. (Look at the picture!) I feel happy and see the red swirls crawl away to be replaced with green. Hmm, emotions link to the… damn what was it called. Bitoric? Biomok? I don't know anymore. I go to climb through before a bulkhead slams half the window shut. I blink. I blink again. "You have Got TO BE FUCKING KIDDING ME!" I scream. I look at the other half of the window in frustration. I drift above it. Right now to get the red power to slam. Slowly I think of all those people, dying, losing their children and transforming. I roar out in anger and smash down with my legs. The window smashes as I fly through.

The bulkhead door slams down on my arm making me scream from the pain. I look at the door. It is trying to break my hand in half. I put my legs on the sides and pull. I give a screech before realising there might be passengers.

"You hear that?" A voice says, making me jump and hurt my hand even more. I keep pulling making it hurt.

"Nah man you're going crazy!"

"I'm not crazy there is something in that room." I hear the voices get closer.

"Jeez if it shuts you up for five minutes then yeah ill check." The door slowly opens…

-POV Change-

Ragonark was a terrible Baterian, he had plundered and killed across the whole galaxy yet he was an extremely annoying Baterian to help. He had a bad habit of putting forks in the murder victim's eyes. FORKS! He was known as the devils hand for his torture techniques. Me on the other hand, I was silent, I choose to sneak through and leave no evidence. I had all the time for patience. I kept thinking that the man would get himself killed.

"Jeez if it shuts you up for five minutes then yeah ill check." The door opened…

"See you sir are definitely going crazy there!"

"Screw you let's check inside. The bulkhead doors up."

"Dude we are in an ASTEROID FIELD! Of course there is going to be bulkhead doors going up you idiot!"

"Well sorry for not checking, Mr Ninja who can somehow detect the world and everything in it!"

"Oh you did not just say that!" I dropped my gun and charged him out the room trying to hit him."

-POV change-

Ooooookay….. I gently lower myself from the rafters and land. I walk to the door casually. I put my head to the door. All I hear is girly screaming and shouting that is slowly drifting away. I open the door and look both ways. Wait maybe I should take out my gun. I reach behind me and pick the CAR.(Collector Assault Rifle) I look left to right. Maybe, left. Suddenly I hear girly screaming and two figures run past, one looking like it was going to murder the other one. Okay not left. I turn right and aim my gun. I walk down marking the doors. Suddenly a door opens up and a figure walking out. We look at each other for a minute. It looks confused.

"Mush has been myyyy drinsh." It says before walking away. When I say walking I mean really bad walking. As in 'how the hell is he standing up walking?' yeah that walking. I continue walking. At the end of the hallway there is a double door. I walk towards it and an orange hologram pops up… I put my hand there. Then the fire orange light is replaced with sparkling green. I jump back and wait. The door slides open to reveal a horrible stench. I walk through to reveal a warehouse full of…people. Some are crying, some are just sitting there with no expression.

-Play song on YouTube Last Resort by Papa Roach-

I jump down making the four eyed slavers turn and the people look at me. I pull up my gun and fire. The slaver in front of me gets bullets going up his chest red blood runs out. The rest of the slavers click a button on their arm. Suddenly blue shields appear. I fire killing one reaching for his arm. His head explodes in a shower of gore making the creatures take a step back. The red is back making all of them confused; I pull up my arm and point towards one. His arm slowly builds up as he screams. I clench my hand into a fist making his arm implode. The slavers pull up their guns to fire. I duck into cover as the bullets fly over me. I feel dirt rise from my cover. I look up at the ceiling noting some scaffolding right over the slavers. When the bullets stop I rise while turning. I fire.

"Ha he can't even aim!" One of them says pointing at me. I smirk and point up. They turn at the groaning noise of metal. The scaffolding slowly falls down. "Oh shi-" was all he got to say. Red blood bursts out. The rest fires at me as I jump backwards. Two bullets hit me making me roar in pain. No I will not let those people be kept here! They shall be free, they WILL BE FREE. I feel a prickle and look down. A green barrier slides around me. I chuckle. I stand, turning. I aim my gun at one. I start firing. His shields seem to stop. I take the chance as half his face blasts away. I feel the green shields run out so I duck but to late. Three bullets run through me. I groan in pain. NO I WILL NOT DIE HERE I WILL HAVE VENGEANCE! I jump up and over as I roar. Red snakes slide over me. I reach my arms out. The snakes burst out and jump at two. They try to scream but it is just gagged screams. The snakes go inside them and burst out the sides.

"INTRUDER IN THE SLAVE QUARTERS I REPEAT! INTRUDER IN THE SLAVE QUARTERS!" I smirk. Time for payback.

-POV change-

The Baterians chuckle at us. They look at my sister and mom lustfully. I growl at them but they just glance at me. They look at each other and smile evilly. The Baterians go to open the cell door. Suddenly a great bang rings out. Everyone turns to see… something. It has four eyes, clawed hands with spike going along the arm. Everyone flinches at the evil it emits. Dark red flesh going along in-between the cracks of the never-ending darkness of armour. Its head is big with four eyes that glow white stare at the slaver. It pulls up a weapon shooting making one fall. Then it shoots another reaching to power up the shields. I smile and start cheering. "We are saved!" I shout making the other slave look at me, questioningly. We hear muffles screams and metal groaning. We turn to see scaffolding fall on some of the slavers. The last two, the ones who looked at my mother and sister turn and fire. It gets hit three times. We hear the slavers chuckle. Roaring it jumps up with red flying around it. Snakes shatter out and grab two of them. They scream before the snakes go inside then burst out the side. The alarm goes off. The creature seems to laugh. It goes. It stops at the door and turns to us. Many slaves gasp in horror and wait for death.

Metal groaning makes us open our eyes. The creature lets it arm falls to its side. The cage is bent making it big enough for two people to get out. Then it turns and leaves.

-POV change-

I walked past the dead bodies on the cold hard floor of metal. Four eyed faces forever placed upon the dead. I had killed them. They were like the Collectors but more hated. They had other non-Prothean. It was an interesting to see the races vary. I shot another slaver that had walked around the corner. It didn't even scream, it just dropped. I came to a door. I clicked the button. Instead of glowing green it went red. I hiss. I look around before seeing a vent. I climb into it and smile at the thought of the deaths of slavers. I crawl though seeing most of the crew aiming at the door. I smile and drop down making the snakes explode. I fire at them killing most of them before I get tackled. The slaver shouts while cursing with the knife slowly being lowered. I hold the knife while looking for my gun with the other hand. He smiles revealing yellow teeth with sharp curves at the end. The knife gets closer to my eye as I hiss. "BANG." His body slumps as I hold the gun to his head. I breathe heavily. I throw the body off me. Nothing seems to be moving I slump down realising I was tired for some reason. Why is that? I slowly drift off to sleep forgetting the wounds.

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