I forgot to list the name of the person im working with last time. Its smolstealer. You probably already knew this because i wrote it as a review in the prologue. FIGHT ME Also it's going to get less terrible, Trust me.

Darkspots splashed her way to the riverclan camp. She had been the first one back from a

recent skirmish with thunderclan. Over sunningrocks, as always. A guy named Pikebelly that

was the deputy or something died in the battle. She hadn't paid attention to him much when he

was alive. Unless they were on patrol. Or he gave her orders. It suddenly occurred to her that

the next deputy could be her. Sure, my tail`s missing so i can't climb trees, but what kind of

Riverclan cat climbs trees?

Her wounds stung, so she went to see Mosscloud, the fluffiest medicine cat in Riverclan history.

"Scratches, yes? I have something for that." she heard Mosscloud`s optimistic mew.

"Yeh, because you're a medicine cat." she began plastering a stinging dark green poultice on

the scratches on her flanks and back. Darkspots saw the rest of the patrol with pikebelly`s

corpse arrive through the entrance. She sat up and scratched the ear that had been split down

the middle with her back leg. Riverclan`s leader, driftstar looked uncharacteristically solemn as

He came out of his den to deliver the eulogy for the fallen second-in-command. Darkspots did

not sit vigil for him for reasons *see two paragraphs up* instead she went to her den to sleep

like some other warriors.

"HEH?" she yowled/grunted as a thin paw prodded her in the face. "Oh, hey Coalfur." Darkspots

growled absently to Coalfur`s annoyed, tired expression. " Its moonhigh. Driftstar is about to

name the new deputy."