I just read the first part, and it's kinda sounding like Lion King (Scar is Crocodile and Samba is Viven, and so on). Thanks for the reviews, they are very nice to read :)
There was once a house full of dwarfs and one baby. But over the years, they grew older and their baby grew up. The baby was very different from the rest of the dwarfs, one thing was he was a normal human, not a dwarf. Second thing was, he was the heir to the throne, taken care of by the dwarfs because of a flavor, and his hair was unusual blue.
This human was Viven and he never thought much on the lines of being different. He knew he wasn't related to anyone in the house, he never seen another human before, and the dwarfs are being nice by letting him live. To repay them for their kind deed of raising him, he would do chores around the house, helping as much as he could. Robin would tell him that he doesn't have to go all out, but he wants too. The others don't mind since it's been a while since the house been clean.
Viven was doing a chore, cleaning their clothes, in the garden. The animals surrounded him, and he would sing; this was the only contact he have with others outside of the house. "Hello there, Carue, how are you today?"
"Quack, quack" the duck said, nipping at Viven's shorts. The duck very much wanted to play with him.
"I'm afraid I can't play with you right now," Viven said gently. He was busy getting the water from the well to pay attention to Carue.
"QUACK!" Carue quacked, his bill turning into a pout. He left Viven at the well and went searching for something to do, anything to do... He waddled up the hill where he heard noises.
"Hancock should been here..." said a girl's voice. "I wonder what she..." Her voice trailed off into the wind.
Carue ducked (pun intended) behind a bush, peeping on the girl. The girl had long black hair, unruly, and simple villager's clothes. Carue had a evil aura around him, maybe messing with this girl would be fun since Viven's busy. He lowered his head and turned around. He faced backwards to see if the girl could see him.
"Quack!" he said, his tongue was out. Luka, the girl, spotted him as he shook his butt in the air, mocking her. "Quack quack!"
Luka stomach growled, her face lighten up, it was time for lunch. Carue ran when he heard that sound, Luka was chasing him. This was more than he bargained for.
"Come here, ostrich! I'm not going to hurt ya, just want a bite" Luka yelled at him.
Now this game wasn't as much fun as Carue first thought, since his life was on the line. He had to get to cover, somewhere to protect him from the hungry girl. A light bulb lit up over Carue's head, he knew what to do.
Carue started running back to the well, hoping his busy-friend was still there. "QUACK! QUACK!" He shouted when Viven came into view.
Viven looked up from his chore, surprised by the sight. There was another human, the first one he seen, chasing his beloved animal friend. The human was a black-haired lady, rumbles came from her stomach.
"COME BACK HERE OSTICHY! HOW DO YOU TASTE?!" The girl screamed at the poor, evil duck.
As Carue came to Viven, he stepped behind him, hiding from the girl. "What are you trying to do?!" Viven asked her.
"Eat him, come on he's right between ya."
"He's my friend! Not food!"
*"That's like a shark saying fish is their friend," Luka joked.
"He's been with me since I could remember!" argued Viven. "He's my friend, so please stop chasing him for his dear life."
"Okay, okay...who're ya?" Luka asked after a moment of thinking. "I'm Monkey D. Luka!"
"I'm Viven," Viven replied, he didn't know his last name so he kept to that.
"LADY! LUKA! WHERE ARE YOU?!" shouted Hancock so probably just gotten on top of the hill. "COME ON IT'S TIME TO GO!"
Luka turned her body around, a smile planted on her face. "HANCOCK! I BEEN WAITING FOR YA!" She started running up the hill, but after a moment of thinking she turned her head and said goodbye to Viven.
"BYE, LUKA-SAN!" Viven called back.
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Viven walked inside the small house with a pile of clothes. It was so high he couldn't see the objects in front of him.
"Let me help, Viven-bro," Franky said, offering his hand to take half of the pile.
Viven was grateful for his help. "Thanks, Franky-san."
"No problem, bro" he said back.
Each of them walked into the next room, the living room. Viven sat her pile of clothes on the chair, Franky sat his next to it.
"How was your day, Viven-san?" asked Robin. He was reading a book when Viven walked in. RObin was sitting in a big red chair by the fire pit, a large, yellowed book was in his hands, it might have been older than everyone in the house put together.
"It was good, I was able to get the clothes done faster since it was great weather today. I also met a..."
"What did you met?" asked Chopper as he walked into the room. Soon others followed him.
"Who did you met?" asked Brook, not letting him answer the first question.
Viven sat down in a chair, "I met another human, a girl."
"A GIRL! She must be an angel! From the heavens!" cooed Sanji, who was holding his chest.
"Did you sneak a peek at her panties?" asked Brook, he took a slip of his tea.
Viven blushed, "No, no, no, I would never."
"Why would she be in these woods?" asked Usopp. "It sounds like a trap..."
"I guess she's been waiting for a...Hancock I believe. She was chasing after Carue."
"Hancock? I believe I heard that name before, what was the other girl's?" Robin asked as he leaned up in his seat.
"It must be another ANGEL!" declared Sanji.
"Um, she said it was Monkey D. Luka," Viven replied, a finger was placed at his forehead as he remembered.
All of the dwarfs gasped, leaving Viven to look confused.
"Did you tell her your name?" asked Zoro.
"Yes, I-"
Zoro swore, making Viven more confused.
"Don't worry, maybe she wasn't here for that?" suggested Chopper.
"We all are going to die! Run for cover!" screamed Usopp, sweat was flowing down his face.
"This is so not super!" complained Franky.
"Just relaxed, she probably doesn't even know," said Brook, who was the second calmest in the room.
"Yes, Brook you could be right. They would have came by now..." said Robin.
All of the dwarfs stopped to listen to Robin.
"What are you talking about?" asked confused Viven.
"WE ARE TALKING ABOUT YO-" Usopp started by Zoro cut him off.
"Shouldn't we tell him, he's old enough." said Chopper.
"Yes, you are right, maybe it is time for him to know," said Robin.
"Me to know what?" questioned Viven.
"You know you ain't related to anyone in this house," said Brook.
"But we are close like a family!" said Chopper.
"Yes, I do know that," said Viven.
"Stop being around the bush! Viven, you're the heir the throne!" complained Zoro.
"Heir?"
"Yes, Viven-san. You're related to King Cobra Nefertari," said Robin.
"But there was super trouble at the castle," started Franky.
"And someone left you here at our doorstep," completed Sanji. "Leaving your butt in our hands," disgusted was in his voice as he remember taking care of another man. The diapers, throw up, crying...
"So I'm the Prince?" questioned Viven, he was looking more and more confused than ever.
"Yup, but everyone thinks you're dead, or missing for forever," said Usopp.
"And we were trusted to keep you safe," said Chopper.
"Out of sight," said Zoro.
"So I wasn't suppose to tell anyone since they all think I'm dead?" asked Viven. He was trying to get the hang of the matter. First they were frighten of the news of talking to Luka, now they are telling him about his birthright.
"Yup" agreed Usopp and Chopper.
"That's what we been keeping from you,"said Sanji.
"Why do they think I'm dead?" asked Viven.
"Well you went missing from the castle, and appeared at our house. No one knew where you were, so they thought that you been dead for years," said Robin.
"Why am I here? Not at the castle?"
"That part wasn't given to us," said Brook. "Someone left a note, signed by Mr. Eight. We would ask you who's Mr. Eight, you were just a baby at the time," said Brook.
"That's all the information we have," said Usopp.
Viven leaned his head down, holding it with both hands. This was too much for him to take, how was he suppose to believe all of these things; but he did trust his caretakers, they been here for him while they could dump her into the forest leaving him to fight for himself.
The meeting of Luka! I think the characters were a bit OCC, but I'll let you be the judge of that. Please leave feedback on how I'm doing, or a review.
* Talking about Finding Nemo ("Fish are friends...")
