I have the entire art cover of this fanfiction right here: art/The-Pink-Savior-659445515
Welcome to the next chapter, guys! Just so you aren't genderly confused about a certain character thats about to be introduced like me when I was when reading 'Blue Collar.' I'll explain before you read, (If you care, of course.) In Blue Collar, Undyne is a guy, there is no explaination why, he just...was. In my interpretation of it, there will be an explanation later in the story instead if it being randomly thrown into the story for no other reason than a 'hot guy' vibe like in Blue Collar. So yes, in this fanfic Undyne is male.
Based on the notes I've been taking about the future of this fanfic, it's going to get pretty dark...but I know the limits of ruining your favorite characters, don't worry. This can never get as bad as it was in Blue Collar, thankfully. The problems will not only revolve around Sans, but the surrounding characters too. In Blue Collar, there was an odd amount of kind characters for an Underfell universe, with basically one antagonist and one hero. I decided to switch around the characteristics and add more creativity with twists. That's how this fanfic happened.
There is alot of similarities this will have with Blue Collar so I suggest reading it to see what I'm going for, if you want. (Not the porn, though.) In this chapter, I'm going to see how well diffrent perspectives work with each character, I'll change the point of view when the character's name is shown next to 'POV' There is also going to be alot more information on Sans' 'plan' with Y.N., so be ready. Now, onto the story.
! ! ! !WARNING, RATED T/M FOR SEXUAL CONTENT, LANGUAGE AND VIOLENCE ! ! ! !
~Sans POV~
I sat at my dinner table, clacking my fingers against it's wood as I stared at the door. Undyne would be barging through it any second now. I didn't want the idiot to find out about the human, but of course, Papyrus just had to text him what happened and now he was heading this way. I sighed, burying my skull into my hands as I tryed to think of something that wouldn't piss me off.
I turned my thoughts to what the surface would be like once I killed the stupid human. I imagined countless humans staring at me in fear as I single handily demolished the barrier with the human's pink spirit entangled with my soul. I smirked at them all as they tremulously bowed down to me. My new upgrade from the human's soul caused me to be two times taller than I was before and two times stronger. My body shook with my power and laughter as tears rolled down my cheekbones in joy. I had never been so ha-
An uncountable amount of knocks were heard at the door in front of me, ruining my dream. I groaned in annoyance and stood up to answer it, before I could however, a a big red boot slammed on it from the other side and knocked it off it's hinges."undyne, I swear to god..."I muttered under my breath.
The fish monster invited himself in and gave me a toothy grin. "Hey Sans! Is it true that you have a impound human here?" He questioned, with his usual raspyish voice. "an impound human?" I repeated, thinking of the possibilities."nah, I doubt it. She appeared at my doorstep wearing regular clothes and has some kind of short term memory loss." I answered, my eye trailing to the wall behind him. "That's even better..." He growled and started to my bedroom.
I gripped his tanktop before he could get past and yanked him forwards to face me. "listen buddy." I started at him. "don't you dare ruin this for me. this is my first time having a human and I don't want to waste it." I paused a few moments for effect."yes, I will kill her...but not yet. I'm going to have 'fun' with her and since I'm nice, I'll let you join." I told him, he smirked as I released his shirt.
As soon as his feet hit the floor, he ran for my bedroom in excitement. I slowly followed behind, imagining what the surface would be like again. . .
~Undyne POV~
"yes, I will kill her...but not yet. I'm going to have 'fun' with her and since I'm nice, I'll let you join." The skeleton announced, I felt my eyes widen and my grin turning into a smirk. I never knew what it was like to be included for anything like this, until now~
As soon as my boots made contact with the floor, I dashed to his bedroom and kicked the door open, eager to see what kind of human would be behind it. I was guessing she would look like one of those girls I saw in some magazines in the dump, I still wonder why anyone would throw those amazing magazines away...
I was met with the terror-filled eyes of a teenage girl, she stared at me in horror, as if I would kill her in any second. I felt my grin fade when I looked into her hazel eyes, seeing the fear. . . The sound of Sans' heavy footsteps snapped me out of the trance, "welp, should we start?" He asked, glancing from the human to me. I didn't speak for a moment, trying to think if wanted to be in this or not.
"Y-yeah." I managed, I shook off the sadness I had for the human. What the hell was wrong with me? She was a human for God's sake, she deserved this...right? The girl's eyes widened at us while we spoke. "What are you going to do now? Kill me?" She questioned the skeleton beside me. I forced my grin to reappear for the moment."Of course we are! But...not yet." I answered her, giving her a look and licking the top row of my teeth. "What do you mean 'not yet'?" She asked, looking at the two of us uneasily. I glanced over at Sans as he nodded his head at me, signalling to start.
I made sure Sans didn't hear me gulp nervously as I started walking towards the human. I could do this, I could do this. The human's hazel eyes showed even more fear than before as she screamed at us to get away. I had a feeling this wouldn't go as well as I had hoped. . .
~Y.N. POV~
The door slammed open revealing a...fish? A giant, blue, fish humanoid? He was smiling widely, sharp yellow teeth were protruding from his mouth, his smile failed for a moment as his bright yellow eye stared into my own eyes. The fish's other eye was occupied by an eyepatch, I didn't want to know why. Both of his eyebrows shot up when we made eye contact, he looked like he was...suprised? Did he actually have sympathy!?
The look he had before popped back on his face when Sans entered the room. "welp, should we start?" The skeleton asked him. My glare returned, mainly centered at the boney creature. "Y-yeah," The other being answered, still looking slightly regretful. My eyes widened at their words,"What are you going to do now? Kill me?," I snapped at Sans, who eyed me quietly. The fish creature caught my attention by forcing his toothy grin to reappear, "Of course we are! But...not yet." He claimed, licking his teeth."What do you mean 'not yet'?" I replied, eying the two of them uneasily.
They started to walk towards me in unison, I backed up slightly and felt my eyes grow in size,"H-hey! Stay back!" I yelled to them, but they didn't stop. There was no way I would let them take my virginity, the only way they would is if they knocked me out cold or killed me. In desperation, I hopped off the bed to get to the window behind me but instantly regretted it, I forgot my injured leg still had the bone lodged in it. How were they were still planning sex when my leg was in that condition?
My leg landed with a thud, pain shot up the wound after it hit the floor. I looked up to see that Sans and the fish creature were still continuing to my position, a insane Idea crossed my mind-
I ripped the bone out of my leg, ignoring the pain and focusing on my life. "woah, sweetcheeks, I wouldn't have done that if I were you." Sans commented. I seethed through my teeth in pain, cradling my bleeding leg. "I. DONT. CARE." I spat. I hid the femur weapon beside my thigh, making it seem like I sat it down. Once the creature's were close enough, I swung the bone in their direction.
"Get away! Both of you!" I screamed, waving the weapon in front of me, "Whatever you are!" I hissed. "oh yeah, an answer to one of your questions before, we're monsters." The skeleton stated, still walking towards me even though I held the weapon in my hands. I paused for a moment, "Monsters? They're real?" I contemplated the fact mentally. How did they exist without anyone knowing...expecially if they were so dangerous."we're standing right here aren't we?" He answered. "So you two actually look like a skeleton and a fish?" I was really confused now. Sans nodded, "yep, welcome to the hell of your race, wyen."
A pair of hands grabbed me while I was off guard and held me down, it was the fish's. "Hey, human."The fish greeted. My hands slipped on his firm grip on my shoulder, his skin was scaley and wet...ugh...I needed another shower already. He tried to push me onto my back, but I fought against him. I got a good look at his figure when i did, his torso stood out majorly, mostly because his muscular body was outlined with his tanktop. My eyes ended up trailing downward, of course...it was then I realized neither of them had taken off their pants yet. Thank God, the last thing I needed was two nakid people chasing me throughout the house. I didn't even know if they had private parts, but I honestly didn't want to know at the moment, I was too busy trying to get the hell outta there.
The fish was definitely stronger than Sans, that was a fact, but I easily slid out of his grip with his...sweat? UGHHH...I swung the femur weapon towards the fish creature's head hoping to knock him out but he ducked just before it came in contact with him. Instead, the bone smacked into Sans face producing a dark spot on his cheekbone that might'be been a bruise? Monsters were weird creatures...My main concern was when Sans' red eye began to spiral like a hurricane as he raised his right arm up, aiming towards my face. I jumped in realization of what he was about to do, but it was too late.
The skeleton's fist plunged into the left side of my head, my body went limp as friction shoved me against the ground. I saw a blurry glimpse of the fish's angry expression and Sans holding his right hand to his new bruise before it all went black. . .
~Undyne POV~
"What the hell did you do that for!?" I shouted at the skeleton in anger. "she hit me in the face!" Sans yelled back, covering his cheek. "So you knocked her out!?"I shot back."what? It's not like I killed her, she'll wake up sooner or later. It serves her right for attacking me..." He claimed, glaring at the unconscious human laying limp on his bed. He pretty much ruined our entire night with that damn slip up, along with my first love experience.
"I'm beat, anyway..."He stretched his arms in front of him. "she'll be ok in the morning, if she isn't...then I'll just give her some monster candy." He yawned. I looked down at the human in curiosity, Sans seemed a bit more lighthearted now that he found this human...not that he's not still a mean-spirited jerk, but I could see a slight change in his demeanor.
"So, Sans. What's so special about this human?" I asked, looking back over to the skeleton. He didn't respond, instead, he just glanced around at a wall. Even though he didn't say anything, I knew he was trying to hide something from me. My thoughts swapped to the human souls, that might've been it. I raised my hand towards tge human's body, placing my magic on her soul before Sans could notice. When he turned to see what I was doing, his frown deepened drastically.
The human's pink soul illuminated the room we were in, my mouth gaped in wonder as I stared at the soul on display. There were several known souls, the red soul, the orange soul, the yellow soul, the green soul, the light blue soul, the dark blue soul and the purple soul. They each had their own virtues...but which virtue would pink have?
"What does that mean...?" I questioned the skeleton in front of me in curiosity. He gave me a blank expression and shrugged. I stepped forward bravely and reached my other hand towards the pink heart to hold it. As soon as my fingers were in range of it's light, I felt a rush of energy surge into my body from my arm, Something slapped my hand back to my sides, I looked up in alarm. That was the best feeling I felt in a looong time, The only reason I was afraid to touch it again was Sans, his eyes were black as he rolled out his words like thunder," dont touch her again." His left arm was holding my dominant hand down threateningly. Even though I hated to admit it, I had a fear of the skeleton.
I was still in awe of the soul's power, the soul was gone now that my magic didn't hold it but I could still feel it's presence. "That soul felt...powerful" I admitted, looking back to the human. I gasped in a sudden realization,"We can break the barrier with it!" I exclaimed, Sans gave me a blank look. "We can escape with her soul!" I repeated, guessing he didn't hear me "I found her first." Sans commented. "Wh-...What?" I asked, confused by his words. "since I found her, I will decide what we do with her soul." Sans added.
"and my decision is for me to use her soul to escape, only I will escape, I will seal you all back underground when I'm done." He explained, I lowered my eyebrows at him."You mean that you would just save yourself and keep us down here? Think about the monsters-" "-that's the problem! I don't like anyone here! this is my only chance to escape this hell and I don't want you idiots ruining it for me!" He interupted in anger. "What? So you'll migrate to the surface to escape?" I asked, "yes! and when I'm there no one will torment me-they will fear me-I will force them to love me-and I'll finnaly be happy..." He growled, probably imagining a human slave army worshipping him or something, I wanted to ruin that fantasy with what could actually happen.
"What if they kill you?"I snapped, causing his smile to droop. "...at least I'll die happy rather than dying here." He answered, I glared at him, squeezing my hands into fists as I did. "Then your plan is basically to kill yourself and leave us here to die." He shrugged, "if that's what happens, but for the time being, I'm going to have fun with her and her soul before I kill her." He closed his eyes, If I didn't fear the skeleton monster's powers I would've strangled him to death right then and there.
He popped his eyes open to stare at me mentacingly, "and if anyone tries to stop me I'll murder them too." He raised his hands up in innocence and closed his eyes again. "I've gotta do what I've gotta do to get happiness, y'know?" I stared at him in disbelief, biting my lip slightly.
The skeleton pulled out his phone for a moment to look at the time. "it's getting late, undyne. you better leave." I refused and stood there eying him down with pure hatred for a few seconds. "undyne, leave." He ordered with black eyes. Not wanting to test his patience any further, I slid out the door. I peeked in the room one last time to see Sans staring, waiting for me to shut the door.
I slammed the door behind me and headed back to my house. I didn't bother to fix the front door in his living room, I blankly stepped over it and continued walking into the blizzard that awaited me. My thoughts raced as I pushed myself through the snow and ice. I needed to get the human away from Sans somehow, her soul was too powerful for him to be trusted with. Expecially with the plan he had in store for her, he was going to use her soul for his own selfish wants if I didn't stop him.
I wiped some snow off of my face with my left hand. Everyone would get out of this hell, not just Sans, I would make sure of it. . .
~Sans POV~
The redheaded fish finnaly left after a good threat, the door slammed shut behind him and I was left alone with the unconscious human. I chuckled remembering a good joke I used to tell Papyrus. It was too bad I stopped making puns, if I wasnt so tired I would've drowned the human in them today.
I collapsed on the bed next to Wyen in exaustion. As soon as I closed my eyes, I was swept into an amazing dream about the surface. . .
This took three days in a fricken row to write. I definitely know what it's like to be a writer now. If any of you don't know, in the fanfic it's was based on, this chapter would be a threesome of a certain fish, skeleton and human. But instead, this chapter is just about Y.N. being a badass against GentFell!Undyne and Fell!Sans. Oh yeah, and Sans let's his plans loose.
The next chapter is going to even longer...hopefully I won't pass 4,000 words on any chapters in the future. It's only now I realize how hard it is to write fanfics...Anyway, I'll start answering some questions I could get about this chapter again, just so none of you are confused.
-Why didn't you make Undyne female rather than male?: One, so I could have a F/M relationship. Two, because I can. Three , I found this genderbend picture: post/140002680068/what-if-i-mix-aus-runs-away
-Why doesn't Sans make jokes anymore?: Sans cut contact with alot of monsters he knew other than Papyrus so he momentarily forgot about them. He remembered them when he recalled a human joke he told Papyrus once. With someone sane around, he can express himself more.
-What did Sans dream about?: Murdering a bunch of humans, flying in the air, and becoming the King of the Surface.
-How is Undyne going to save the main character from Sans?: You'll find out.
-What are impound humans?: You'll find out.
The next chapter is going to be even longer than this, so be prepared. It's also going to explain something that was mentioned at the beginning of this chapter. . .
I hope you enjoyed, and thanks for reading.
