Okay, this is not a chapter. I swear I am almost done with the 2nd one. I hope more people come and read. But please for those of you who are watching my story and plan to continue reading, I would like your help. Just a quick comment will do.
I want to know how you feel about my format? I mean the way the words are set up. Are the words too close together? Too hard to concentrate? Should I change the format and if so, how do you think you would find it easier to read? Aligned in the middle? A space between every sentence rather then every paragraph?
Give me feedback!
And I re-read my 1st chapter a few times yesterday and caught a few mistakes or things I just didn't like the way they were written. I might tweak it but thats more for people who might read it in the future. I hope you stick to it! I think my idea is pretty interesting and worth it! hopefully I can get it down on paper properly so that my ideas get across to you in a way that is interesting :)