Well I have gotten some great advice from marcicat, and angela986. I wanted to thank them. Well like always let me know what you think review. The park in the story is a state park near Dallas, its about 60 minutes well that's what the map said.
The Family trip to Lake Tawakoni State Park Part 1
Mom! "When are we leave for the park?" asked Elliot. Soon Elliot "Its only 9:30AM." Said Angela. Hey Elliot, I have an idea. Said Angela. Why don't you go wake up your sisters, Okay! shouted Elliot. As she ran out of the kitchen, right into her Dad. Chris laughed and asked, "where are of to little lady?" Asked Chris. "I am going to wake up my sisters." Stated Elliot, "With her hands on her hips." Okay "well I better not stop you then." Said Chris as he stepped aside to let his oldest daughter up the stairs.
One hour later
So girls "we ready to go to the park ?" Asked Angela. Yes the girls Chorused. "Where is Daddy?" asked Madison and Alyia "He's outside with Elliot, and Elizabeth packing up the van girls." You two can go outside, but put you shoes on first." Said Angela as she helped Sophia's put on her sandals. "Mommy can I bring my buggy catcher?" Asked Sophia. I Don't see why not Sophie. Said Angela. "Its on the bench out in the yard." As Angela was saying this Sophie ran in the direction of the sliding doors that connected to yard. Two seconds later Sophie came back in the house as Angela was getting a bag packed with a change of close for the girls, making sure she had first aid supplies, just incase its was needed. "Okay mommy I am read know!" As Sophia running into the house shouting. "Well we better go outside, get into the van." said Angela. As she took her daughter's hand as she walked out the front door.
Gage's family van
Are we there yet? Chorused Elizabeth, Elliot. No Girls! "we are not." Said Chris. "How much long?" Asked Madison. About half an hour. said Angela. "I spy with my little eye something blue." Said Angela. The sky? Asked Elizabeth. No not the sky. "Daddy's shirt?" asked Alyia. Yes It was daddy's shirt said Liz . "Okay my turn" Stated Liz and these went on and on for till they got to the park, Chris and Angela was entertained my their daughters for the remainder of the car ride to the park.
So what do you think I want the truth, I am going to put these one in two parts, I will put part two up no later then Tuesday. Let me know what you think I hope its easer.