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Harry was lying down on his bed when his room started spinning and images
started flashes before his eyes like a slid show. Then, suddenly everything went dark. When Harry woke up he was in a room that looked like a court room, or what he thought that a court room would look like, he sat up and looked around. At first he thought he had died but Harry threw that though out of his mind because hell should be worse than that. He pulled himself into a sitting position when he spotted the long table at the top of the room with 7 people sitting there. Harry could not see their faces because of the darkness so he decided to take a step
forward, into his doom he did not know.
"Hello... hello... Who are you? were am I?" Harry asked. He waited to see if the there was going to be an answer before he stood up. After a while he took a few steps forward when suddenly someone spoke,
"Hello Harry James Potter" a mysteries male voice said from the darkness.
"Hello, can you tell me were am I? Who are you? What am I doing here?" Harry asked, he was so confused. Then the voice spoke again "young Harry do ask one question at a time. You see I am old and my brain and hearing are not as good as they use to be" said the male voice.
The man, in Harry's opinion, sounded a lot like Albus Dumbledore. Harry waited a while before deciding what question to ask first. When he did he cleared his troath and spoke up "who are you?" he askws
"I was going to get there, well I will introduce you to these people to the left and right of me at the top right is Rowena Ravenclaw next to her is Helga Hufflepuff and next to her is some one who you might or might not recognise is Lily Evans Potter and next to her is someone you will not know of is Alexandra Elizabeth Sarah Black Snape and I am Godric Gryffindor. Now on the other side of me is an empty spot were you
will sit and then next to that is some I think you might know, it is James Potter and next to him is Salazar Slytherin and Alexz is going to be your teacher, so what is your next question is...?"
Harry looked at all the people sitting in front of him then to woman, founders and this girl that has both Sirius and Snapes last name and looked kind of like both of them. She was smiling at him, she was crazy, was Harry's first thought. Then his Mother, she looked as he thought she would, like a kind, loving mother. Then Gordic was looking at him with a wise look on his face. Then his father was looking at him
smiling with pride and love in his eyes, then Salazar who he is most surprise is looking at him respected and encouragement and then, just as suddenly as it came, everything went black. But just before he passed out he heard the girl that was referred to as Alexz
go"What a woman." And his last thought was "oh yea she is defiantly related to Snape and Sirius."
