So I just received a review from Michi Shojo.
Thank you for reviewing!
Enjoy,here's chapter 1
Opening theme:
"My name is Zak Bagans. I never believed in ghosts,until I came face to face with one."
"So I set out on a quest to capture what I once saw onto video."
"With no big camera crews following us around.I am joined only by my fellow investigator Nick Groff and our equipment tec Aaron Goodwin."
"The three of us will travel to some of the most highly active paranormal location. Where we will spend an entire night being locked down from dusk until dawn."
"Raw...Extreme...These are our ghost adventures."
Zak's POV
"Today we will be investigating the Eel Marsh house,which is home to a woman dressed in black."
"A very long time ago,she lost her seven year old son Nathaniel in a carriage accident. Since then she hung herself in his nursery. Her son's body was never found."
Later on me and the guys continued our search for Daniel Daily,an old relative of Samuel Daily,who lived in the 1880's.
Normal POV
"Hello?,"-asked Zak.
"Zak. There you are,"-said a man that looked like he's been in his mid-twenties.
"Are you Daniel Daily?,"-Zak asked.
"Yes I am,"-replied Daniel.
"Hi,my name is Zak,this is Nick and over there is Aaron,"-said Zak.
"It's a pleasure to meet you Zak,come on in,we were just about to have tea,"said Daniel.
The guys and Daniel sat on the couch and began to drink tea and eat crumpits.
"Ok so Daniel,I've heard that your great-grandfather Samuel Daily,used to be partners with Mr. Arthur Kipps,"-said Zak.
"Yes that's correct Zak,"said Daniel,"when Mr. Kipps came he wanted to find the papers to the house and planned to sell it. And that's when he met my great grandparents."
"Alright,"-said Nick as he took another sip of tea. Then Daniel continued.
"When he first came here,everyone in this town had a deep dark secret to hide from outsiders. The second day that he was here...he saw her,the woman in black. Some say that when you see her,a child will soon die."
"Oh,so were dealing here with a crazy child murderer,"-joked Aaron as the camera shakes a little. Daniel just continued the story.
"Now,when he was here,two children-which were two little girls-were killed. One drank poison and died in Mr. Kipps' arms,and the other girl died in a fire."
"Mr. Kipps was mostly blamed for the deaths of the two little girls. The only reason why she murdered children was because that she missed her son very much,and if she couldn't have her son,then nobody in the village can have theirs. So that's when she started to murder the children by controlling them like puppets."
"So are you saying that she would control the children like dolls all because she didn't have her son with her,"-said Zak.
"Something like that Zak,"-said Daniel.
"Anyways,once Mr. Kipps found out what she's looking for,he had help from my Great grandfather to go to the marshes to find the boys un-recovered body. It took then a long time to find him,but then Mr. Kipps felt the wagon under his shoes and found Nathaniel. So when he was back at the house,he cleaned the body and placed him on the bed with all of the birthday cards that his Aunt never gave him."
"So after that,what happened once she found out that her sons body was recovered?,"-asked Zak.
"We'll,after that,she came and told Mr. Kipps to also give Nathaniel a proper burial that her husband never gave him. So Mr. Kipps buried Nathaniel with her. And finally,she was at peace; but she gave Mr. Kipps something in return."
"What? $20,"-joked the guys.
"No,not really,but you guys would think that this was so stupid. On Friday,Mr. Kipps' son Joseph came to visit him at the train station. Mr. Kipps was just saying his last goodbyes to my great-grandfather,when all of a sudden,he sees her again,and he sees his son walking on the train tracks. He quickly ran towards him...and the train ended up running the two of them over."
"Thats just mean and stupid. You would repay someone that gave you back something very important with death. What the f*** is wrong with that woman,"-cursed Zak.
"I know right. Anyways legend has it that Mr. Kipps and his son were both reunited with Mr. Kipps' wife,it was a thank you from the woman in black for bringing back her son and giving him a proper burial,"-finished Daniel.
I know,what a very long chapter :/
Anyways this is for Michi Shojo,thanks again for your review.
I'm sorry if I made spoiler alert to those that haven't seen the Woman in Black yet.
Chapter two will be coming soon
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