The Hungry Elder

by muffinpants866

One-eye gets mad that Bluestar wouldn't let her go to the gathering so when the clan is gone she leaves the camp for a walk and all of a sudden she finds herself walking in ShadowClan territory. Then she becomes Shadowclan's prisoner, and Thunderclan has to do thier best to get her out!

2. Chapter 2

The Hungry Elder

This is my first story so i now it's not perfect and reviews and tips would be appreciated (:

One eyes pov

I kept on walking and my feet are getting tired… I see the ShadowClan medicine cat walking towards me. 'What the heck' I think. Why is the ShadowClan medicine cat here? I sniff the ground; I smell ShadowClan. I look around realizing I'm in ShadowClan territory. I jump behind a bush and I hear a sweet sounding voice calling "Who's that?". I struggle to not be seen.

Littlecloud's pov

What is that smell? It must be a ThunderClan warrior. What are they doing here? How dare they! A bunch of thoughts come running in my brain. I stick my head into the bush and seen a cat who I think is One-eye. Oh, what am I saying? Of course it's One-eye. She looks old and well… has one eye. I say "Hi One-eye! I won't hurt you. Let me take you back to your clan." One-eye started to follow me.

I somewhat know where ThunderClan is and I start walking there. I hear a holler and see the ShadowClan deputy Russetfur coming. I think 'Oh no! He's gonna take One-eye back to the camp to prison her! Maybe I can convince him to not to. He's not that mean, but he's very loyal and he will do what he think is right. And that is bring her to Blackstar.

Russetfur's pov

Why is One-eye walking with our medicine cat? Maybe Littlecloud found her, and if so I will NOT let her go that easy. I ran up to Littlecloud and said "Who's this?" And Littlecloud said in her usual polite voice "Oh this is One-eye… A ThunderClan elder". Please let her get back home. She just got lost, she didn't mean to." Then I said "No, she is coming back with us to ShadowClan camp! We need to report this to Blackstar. Littlecloud screamed "NO!" I said "Don't you want to be loyal and tell Blackstar? We are taking her to Blackstar and that's final!" I said

Littlecloud's pov

I knew that I couldn't fight with Russetfur anymore, so I gave up and started to follow him home. I felt bad for One-eye. She must be nervous. If this happened to me, I would be scared. Though that's never happened to me because I can really go anywhere since I'm a medicine cat.

One-eye's pov

I followed Littlecloud to the ShadowClan camp. I'm not scared at all! I'm a elder, so I won't get in much trouble! And this is perfect. If I leave the camp when Bluestar's gone, she won't be able to leave me at camp during gatherings. Ha ha! This is my evil plan! I accidentally did a evil. "Bohahahawabohahaha" (evil laugh) I laughed out loud. Littlecloud and Russetfur turned around and made a weird face at me.