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A dark green puffball dressed in yellow armor shaped like a star

Paced back in forth in front of the Com set.

=Sir Arthur, we couldn't get at it. It took off at a dead run towards the castle and literally disappeared. =

Sir Arthur stopped and looked at the red warrior, Sir Dragato's long red pony tail sticking up from the electricity dancing around the ship.

"Proceed with your mission Dragato; we need to get those soldiers out of there now more than ever."

=Understood, but what about that monster? =

Sir Arthur considered this for a moment.

"We will deal with it after we get these soldiers to safety; they are our first priority right now."

=Understood, Sir Arthur. =


Sir Leeh watched from the mouth of the castle in horror as a huge shadowy beast raced towards them.

"Shadowbite…" he muttered uneasily reaching for his sword.

A flash of light shot through the beast causing it to disappear, a jet appeared where the beast had been.

Sir Leeh knew better than to celebrate yet.

"Up, Get up! It's Shadowbite!" he shouted at his soldiers, unsheathing his sword he pointed it at the door to the castle.

"Sir Leeh!" Kilo ran up to him out of breath.

"There's a monster in the castle!" Kilo said.

"I'm aware." Sir Leeh answered pointing towards the door where Shadowbite had reappeared, smaller monsters appearing out of the nowhere.

Kilo gaped.

"Don't just stand there, take your stance!" Sir Leeh commanded.

"But Sir, those aren't the only monsters in the castle…"

Sir Leeh turned to Kilo slowly, his mask hiding all emotions etched on his face.

"You can't beat that monster with swords and an ax." Sir Leeh turned to see Sir Falspar leaning against the castle wall.

"Then what do you think we should do?" Sir Leeh asked of him.

In answer Sir Falspar tapped his sword towards the entrance to the castle, there hovering some ways away in the lightning charged air was the rescue jet, its weapons trained on Shadowbite.

"The only thing we can do is to distract it long enough to get to the ship and away from Kracko." Sir Falspar said solemnly.

"Kracko?" Kilo asked.

"You don't think that this is a natural storm?" Sir Falspar said pointing towards the sky.

"Sir Leeh, Quarry! She's in danger! She went to explore in another room and I heard her shout, she said her light went out and that it was here! That's what I was to tell you." Kilo said suddenly.

"Her light went out? Why didn't she just come out?" Sir Falspar asked.

"Well that's the thing Sir, I went to help her, but the door is gone! It just disappeared!"

"Gone? How can a door just disappear?" Sir Leeh asked his eyes on Shadowbite as the rescue jet fired on it.

"Unless the door was never there in the first place…" Sir Falspar said ominously.


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Shadowbite is a mid-boss that first appeared in

Kirby: Mass Attack (2011)

Shadowbite is actually a shadow, as its name suggests. It appears to be a monster with tiny ears, razor-sharp teeth, and angry eyes. It lacks any form of legs

When Shadowbite first appears it laughs evilly then begins to chase.

Physically you can't defeat Shadowbite; your only defense is to outrun it.

If he touches you die immediately.