Kisdota: OK so I got a few reviews. Depending on which category you're on (Either Megami Tensei, or Persona series) you'll see that I got a review from the best ChiexYosuke writer with her fic "1 More Chance" here on fanfiction 'Mayumi-H'. And since I got a review from her I know I have to step up the story a bit, don't expect updates to be this fast, I have to update other fics I have here, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Disclaimer: I don't own the game Persona4.
(Time, 4/18, the day after they fight Chie's shadow)
"*Yawn* Oh man, what a day that was," Chie said waking up and getting out of bed.
"Alright, today's the day we save Yukiko, I'm not going let that place get the better of me this time," she then continued.
Chie got on the ground and started doing pushups, but when she looked towards the ground she saw someone's feet.
"Huh?"
(Yosuke's house)
Ring ring ring ring "Ughhh, you gotta be kidding me," Yosuke reaching for the phone from his bed.
"*Yawn* What's that thing? I was having a good dream," Jiraiya asked lying on the ceiling.
"Cellphone. Hold on… Hello?" Yosuke said.
"Yosuke? Oh man listen, I really have a problem," Chie said worried.
"Chie do you know what time it is?" Yosuke said tired.
"School starts in an hour," Chie said.
"I know, that means I should still be sleeping. Now what is so important that you need to wake me up?" Yosuke asked.
"Yos-grrr...LOOK I really think something is wrong with me. That world we went to. I think… I think it might have done something to my head," Chie said.
"I'm sure whatever's wrong with your head is natural," Yosuke said.
"Yosuke, you jerk! I'm serious! I'm seeing things right now," Chie said.
"Seeing thi- wait let me guess, is it your Persona?" Yosuke asked.
"No I- wait Persona?" Chie asked.
"Yeah, you remember those figures that you saw come out of Souji and me?" Yosuke asked.
"Y-yeah," Chie said.
"Well those figures sort of come to life here in the real world. I guess we should have warned you about that when we took you back from that world" Yosuke said.
"What happened? What's going on? Is she freaking out? Let me hear!" Jiraiya said.
"Will you be quiet I'm on the phone," Yosuke said.
"Who was that?" Chie said.
"Jiraiya, my Persona," Yosuke said.
"Your… Persona?" Chie asked.
"Yeah, you wanna say hi to him?" Yosuke said.
"Uhhh… sure," Chie said uneasy.
"Here you can talk to her," Yosuke said.
"Can you hold the phone for me? I can't touch it, and how do I use it?" Jiraiya said.
"Just put your ear… or whatever you use to listen with here, and speak in this part," Yosuke said holding out the phone.
"Hello?" Chie said.
"WHOA COOL! I- how did- this is awesome!" Jiraiya said.
"Dude relax, it's just a phone," Yosuke said.
"Uhh… hi," Chie said.
"Oh hey it's the kicking lady," Jiraiya said.
"Uh hello… Jiraiya," Chie said.
"Hey there, so last night Yosuke was talking about how much he likes you," Jiraiya said.
"W-what?" Chie said.
"OK you're done," Yosuke said taking the phone back.
"He's blushing!" Jiraiya yelled to the phone.
"Why did he say-?" Chie said.
"Look don't take anything he says seriously, all he does is look for reasons to make fun of me," Yosuke said.
"OK, so I'm not going crazy then?" Chie said.
"Well I wouldn't rule that out," Yosuke said.
"Jerk," Chie said.
"So what about your Persona? What's he, she, or it like?" Yosuke asked.
"It's she… and well she doesn't talk and she follows me everywhere, she's kind of creeping me out," Chie said.
"She doesn't talk?" Yosuke said.
"Well she does, but only if she has to. All she's said was that her name is Tomoe Gozen, and she keeps calling me Chie-san," Chie said.
"Chie-san? Well lucky you," Yosuke said glaring at Jiraiya.
"LOOK, how do I get rid of her?" Chie said.
"You don't," Yosuke said.
"I don't? What do you mean I don't?" Chie said.
"I mean she's you, she won't go away because she's a part of you," Yosuke said.
"You mean I'm stuck with her!" Chie said angrily.
"Yeah sorry. Look, me and Souji will meet you at school OK. Don't worry about hiding her, only people with Persona powers can see her so… she's invisible basically. We'll talk about this there, but listen if you DO find a way to get rid of her tell me," Yosuke said.
"UGHHH!" Chie groaned.
"OR we can trade, mine's re- click lly annoy-… hello?" Yosuke said.
"Well, I guess I'll get up now," he then said.
"Alright, another day at that building, can't wait," Jiraiya said happy.
"OK look, if you're going to stay here, you're going to need to find a different place to sleep rather than above me," Yosuke said.
"But this part of the ceiling is comfortable," complained Jiraiya.
"Dude it's creepy with you sleeping above me staring down at me! Sleep somewhere else, or go outside," Yosuke said heading to the bathroom.
"Alright fine, just hurry up and get ready to go to that school. I want to see all those young women again, they were gorgeous. Back then, gold was easier to find then women as good looking as them, and the easy ones to find were all Geisha's," Jiraiya said.
"Dude, you're a pervert," Yosuke said.
"Yeah, and I'm you, so what does that say?" Jiraiya said.
"Look just don't freak me out in bathroom again," Yosuke said closing the door.
(Back with Chie)
"UGHHH! Great," Chie said slamming her phone down. "Well at least I don't have to worry about hiding her," Chie said.
"…"
"Can you please take a few steps back from me?"Chie said to the figure behind her.
(Later at school)
"This is really creeping me out," Chie whispered to Souji.
Currently the three were in school listening to King Morons lecture, which was more of his complaints and insults to kids. The groups Persona's were right next to them, the entire class was oblivious to the strange creatures.
"Lord this man is infuriating. I've fought against carnivorous monsters who are more pleasant to talk to than him," Izanagi said.
"I agree, I wish I were more solid so I could cut that offensive tongue of his out," Tomoe said.
"Do they have to stand right next to us?" Chie whispered.
"There is nothing we can do Chie. As long as we have these powers they'll remain with us. Just try and bear it. It's not as bad as it seems," Souji said.
"Well I guess. At least Tomoe's not as annoying as Jiraiya," Chie said.
"Dude will you stop doing that," Yosuke whispered blushing and angry.
"You're just mad that you can't see what I see," Jiraiya snikered floating around the floor, mostly passing through the women's tables.
"Dude you're giving me a bad name stop it!" Yosuke said.
"UGH, and the girls ask me why I wear shorts under my skirt," Chie whispered to herself.
"Heh heh, this is grea- HACK," Tomoe grabbed Jiraiya by his red scarf.
"Heyhey new girl, what's with the aggression? Don't tell me you're jealous…uh... could you pretend that I'm winking at you?" Jiraiya said.
"You will stop this right now. I will not stand by while you take advantage of these women who are oblivious to your presence. Keep doing this and I will make you regret it," Tomoe said.
"Alright alright, there's no need to get touchy. You can keep me to yourself if you want," Jiraiya said.
Tomoe brought up her blade at Jiraiya's head.
"OK nevermind. I'll just stay next to Yosuke," Jiraiya said floating back to Yosuke.
"You know what? I take everything I said back. I think I'll enjoy Tomoe's company," Chie whispered.
"Were you-… were you flirting with her?" Yosuke asked quietly.
"If flirting means trying to get her to like me, then yes," Jiraiya said.
"Why?" Yosuke said disturbed.
"Why not? I mean look at her no offense to the women here mind you, but I am actually able to hold a conversation to her and touch her. Plus I'm one of the only guys she can talk too other than Izanagi, so my chances with her are like half and half," Jiraiya said.
"Jiraiya, you are aware that Tomoe and I can hear you right?" Izanagi said.
"Yeah I know, but she's stiller than a stone. I doubt she'll- WACK GAAHH!" Tomoe hit the back of Jiraiya's head with the broad side of her weapon.
"Gahh, man you crazy woman, what's wrong wi- WACK GAH! "
"Definitely the most interesting place I've moved too," Souji thought.
(Lunch time on the roof of the school)
"OWW, jezze what the hell Chie!" Yosuke said holding his head.
"That's for letting your Persona do what he wants," Chie said angrily.
"What? Is he my pet? I can't control what he does, and it's not like I asked him to go around the floor looking up women's skirts," Yosuke said.
"I do everything because of him, it was all Yosuke's idea, and you should punish him more. HAHA" Jiraiya said.
"SHUT UP!" Yosuke said.
"Heh heh WACK AHH JEZZE! The back of my head," Jiraiya said.
"Stop trying to get your partner in trouble. He is the reason you are here now, so show him some respect," Tomoe said.
"Thank you," Yosuke said.
"Crazy women," Jiraiya grumbled.
"Hmph, I don't believe we've met yet. I am Tomoe Gozen, Chie-san's partner," Tomoe said to Souji and Izanagi.
"I am Izanagi, and this is my partner Souji," Izanagi said shaking her hand.
"Oh come on! You hit me, but you shake his hand?" Jiraiya said.
"So Chie, since Tomoe is here, then this means you have the same powers as us. Will you be helping us in the TV world now?" Souji said.
"Of course. Yukiko is still in there. We have to save her before anything happens to her," Chie said.
"And we will don't worry, we'll go to Junes today after school. We'll get Yukiko out of there before anything happens to her, I promise," Souji said.
"Alright… thanks," Chie said still sounding uneasy.
"Don't worry about your friend Chie-san," Tomoe said. "I've met thousands of men in my lifetime, and I can tell that this man is one of the few rare one who know how to keep their word. I know he will keep his promise," Tomoe said.
"Uh wow… thanks," Souji said suprised.
"I only wish more men were like you," Tomoe said.
"I think she's talking about you," Jiraiya said elbowing Yosuke.
"Shut up," Yosuke said.
"OK. Lunch is almost over. We need to go back to class. We'll meet up later at Junes," Souji said.
"Alright," the two others said heading towards class.
"How come you don't refer to me as San?" Yosuke said.
"No offense, but I don't see very much to respect about you," Jiraiya said.
Kisdota: OK here you all go, the next chapter is up. I hope I did a better job than the first Chapter. Anyway, what did you think of my portraying of the Persona's? Be sure to tell me what you think, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA