Thnk you both for the revies althou Im not sure what a trolfic is and starkits prophecy sounds cool! I'm gnoing to read it!
Chapeter 1
Goldnsunkit was born and his mother Snadstorm was very hapy He and his sister Slivermoonkit were gnoing to make grate warriors someday adn she new it.
oldensunkit was a solid gold and shone in the sun handsomely.
Silvermoonkit was as prety as Silver and had silver fur wih metalik paws and shitmering unercoat.
Firestar came ni and saw them. "My kits he said exitly they are gorejeus!1 This is a prod day for Thudercanl; Sandstrom nodded 'They are amaznging" Godenkit opned his eyes, his eye were the pretiest golden color ever and silermonkit opend hers too. They were silver and beutifjul.
A.N- I hop you liked this chaper! and for the recrod, Squirelflight and Lefpool are stil here, but are Leafkit and Sqirrelkit and are nt Firesatre's kits, but are stil in thunderclna.