Sorry that this chapter is so short! I might put up another one to make up for it. Also, thanks to Guest (Dewmist) and Guest (PepperWho) for the nice reviews!
Chpater oen prouloge When the first words in the story are misspelled, you know you're in for a heck of a ride
The cats gathered around a pool. They all looked into it eagerly. A dark shape appeared on the surface. A blue she cat looked up. Her eyes were bright. I hope this choppy sentence structure doesn't last. And who's this blue cat? Probably Bluestar *rings cliche bell*
"There is a prophecy!" She said. "out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly." This is such a predictable prophecy. And why did she have to make Hollyleaf evil?!
"Its about StarKit!" A white tom said. Who's this white tom: Whitestorm? Any of the billion white toms in StarClan? "Shes going to save the forest," He looked at a gold tom Lionheart? by BlueStar. Oh, it is Bluestar...Called it! "she has powers nobody dreamed of." *Mary-Sue alert* Said the gold tom. "Should we tell JayFeather?" He asked. "Yes." Said BlueStar. "he needs to know."
She walked away from the pool to tell JayFeather about the prophcy. ...And the misspellings begin!
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