Chap 2

'Shhhhhh!' said Fang, franticly

I looked around. Lots of people were staring at us. I made an 'ooops' face I walked as calmly as possible to the cookies. It was a Mrs Field's. I'd never had a cookie from there, even though we have them back in the U.S, but I heard they were AH-MAZ-ING. There was about 11 different cookies, 10 different 'nibblers' which were like mini brownies or cookies, 3 different brownies, 7 other sweets and 'cookie chillers' which were like ground up two flavour cookies with ice cream, so it was a cold drink. I inhaled the warm-cookie smell and sighed. I saw the prices. They were so expensive! Then I remembered something. The Max card! We had totally forgotten about it! I handed over the card 'do you do cash out' I asked the girl at the register. She nodded

'Ok can I have…$100 please?' I punched in the password and she handed me the money' I scanned the cookies. They all had little descriptions. I spotted one. 'Chocolate Lover's: a blend of Dark, White and milk chocolates in perfect harmony.' Yum. I ordered two and agave the second one to Fang. I took a bite. It. Was. The. Best. Cookie. i. had. Ever. Tasted. It was even better than mom's! It had the perfect crunch-to-soft ratio. It was crunchy on the outside, and heavenly, warm and soft in the inside. I looked at Fang. His eyes had lit up.

I looked at the cashier. 'we'll be back. Soon.' I told her. she just gave me a weird look. We ran at full speed down the escalator, and towards the flock. They were just entering a clothing shop.

'guys come quick! I just found the best shop! It's a cookie shop!' everyone looked up. Including Total. He was pretending to be Iggy's guide dog. 'this way" I said in a sing-song voice. A sing-song voice? WTH? Cookies do weird things to me, I guess.

I led them to the shop and was met with a chorus of 'woooow's. I strode up to the counter. ' hi. Can I please have six' Total looked at me weird. 'sorry seven of everything? And YES we WILL eat it all.' I handed her the money and the card. She looked at me weird, again. God! What was with this chick and looking at me weird? We waited for a bit and the she handed everyone a massive paper bag, filled with smaller paper bags, where the food was, giving the extra to me.

'who's the extra for?' Fang asked

'Total.' I said in a duh voice

'but he's a dog!' he exclaimed

'yeah but he's a mutant dog. He'll be fine. Besides, he's had chocolate before, and nothing happened.' I said. Fang just shrugged

We stopped at a table to eat food. They were all delicious. I watched as my flock devoured their desserts. When they ran out, they all, including Fang, looked sad

'Max, I was thinking.' Started Nudge in her super sweet voice that she uses when she really wants something.

'yes?' I said, getting bored

'maybe we can just live here for a while? It's so massive that we wouldn't get caught.' I started to say no, but she interrupted me

'if we stayed, we could get more cookies!' She finished. and that's how we ended up camping out in a mall.

Ok so I might post more, like about their adventures living in a mall, but I'm about to start a max ride and cars crossover.