hey guys I don't own warrior's erin hunter does but I wish I did!

Raven (darkpaw) (9 moons old)- a black she-cat with gray splashes and has bright blue eyes. she's small but strong.

shadowpaw (8 moons old)- Midnight black tom with red eyes he has one single white paw.

ok chapter 1 lets start

Raven POV:

Raven yawned and stretched inside her little crate Her long skinny dark brown tail poked through one of the holes. She walked out into the dew morning the sun was shining into the ally She shoke her fur and started towards the forest.

She scented the pine trees And smiled She stepped out to go into the woods when ...CRACK!

Raven woke with a start She sat up straight Her head hit the top of her cardboard box she lived in She heard a loud lighting bolt crackle across the sky . She jumped up almost ripping a hole in the cardboard box top She curled up trying to get back to sleep but then another lighting bolt splashed across the sky.

Raven shoke her head , "WHY DON'T YOU SHUT UP!" She screamed at the night's sky.

" Why don't you?" A voice shouted in a squeaky kitten voice.

" Who's there?" She asked as thunder boomed across the sky.

" No one" Said the voice as a apprentice sized tom came out of the shadows His rusty coat was packed with dirt He smiled.

" Go away kit before this gets deadly" She hissed arching her back and stepping out and another lighting bolt flashed across the sky.

" I'M NOT A KITTEN I'M JUST SMALL!" He hissed and arched his back coming closer.

" Sure!" She hissed , " I'm warning you Stay Away!" kill him! kill him now you know you can! your strong enough! Her fathers voice whispered in her ear.

" What you going to do to me?" The kit challenged.

Darkkit didn't know what happened after that She just felt herself jumped and then felt herself fighting ,Clawing She heard frightened mews then quietness .

the next chapter will be longer.