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Chapter Two: Encounter

I watched for good few minute's as it slowly burned down, I could feel a shock through my body, someone was close by...hidden. Who were they? Did they want something from me. I was sitting here, totally vulnerable. Stuck against this hard and cold rock what could I possible do. Killing me or capturing me are the only real 2 options, they could have come to save me but it seems unlikely due to the fact they burned down that village and are hidden from me. I have only meet 2 groups of people; Enemies who are now dead and the village people which the village is burning in front of my eye's.

I sighed and closed my eye's thinking about if there was any way to save myself but what was the point...? I opened my eye's to see 2 men standing in front of me, one with white hair, glass's with his body positioned almost like he was relaxed. Did that mean I wasn't a threat to them, how insulting. The one on the right was a little taller, older look with greasy black hair below his shoulders. I looked at his face, and a shiver ran down my spine like it would have with snakes, but snakes were so much more worse then the feeling I just got now. His face reminded me of a snake when he licked he's lips, and then he spoke:

"Masaru Akane?" he asked in kinda of a greedy yet calm voice.
I nodded slowly, how did he know my name... just who were this people.
He smiled and said "I am Orochimaru, I've come to offer you something."
I took the "offer" part meaning persuade or force the way he said it.
"What could you offer me? The only thing I care about are these damn chains" I kinda said loudly.
He laughed."Power, a purpose."

I froze with shock, wired how those words hit me like I almost wanted to do something..a purpose and of course more power can always do good...for me. I saw a movement in his arm and my chains felt loose, the seals were broken as well as the metal. I stood up letting them drop around me, stretched and then I looked at them again. I opened my mouth a but I didn't really know what to say, saying I'd do whatever he wanted me to do seemed to hard for me. I was just about to speak when I heard a twig snap far off. My head shot upwards focusing on the spot but it seems the man named Orochimaru and the other guy didn't sense anything yet. I reached to my waist for my sword but there was only a case. The damn village must have it.
"Need this?" The man on the left asked holding up my sword.

"My sword, give it." I said plainly but a little childish. He tossed me my sword and I caught it

I sensed them getting closer now, seemed like 4, the two men sensed them now as well, they were in defensive positions. I looked up quickly to see 3 men and a women come from the direction of the sun. They landed in a circle around me and the two men, I smirked and cut them on the throats without hesitation as I ran to each one expect for the weakest looking one. I kicked him up high and hit him towards the ground with a crunching sound when he landed, I thought the weakest looking on might tell me something of where he's from or if he's involved with these two.

"Who are you?" I asked.
He coughed up some blood and answered as I thought he would "Hidden..l-leaf vill-illage..."

The man then appeared to be dead, I guess I hit him to hard. Been awhile since I fighted, it felt good. But what the hell was that about? Why was the Hidden Leaf Village attacking us?
Then Orochimaru licked his lip's in sort of a creepy way and laughed.