Jinchuriki The Abandoned Race Chapter II: Burning Sand Cooling Teal
I'm back after a long hiatus but don't count on me being able to pump out chapters like I use to. I'll probably do one per month so just a heads up. Before you ask NO my stories are not up for adoption, but thank you for telling me that you would like to continue. If you want to do a story similar to mine let me know first so I can give you permission and keep up with the story myself, and tell me which story you want to make a "Parody" of sorts to. Thank you and enjoy my first chapter of 2016.
"Hey what's that over there?" Said a girl about 17 years old with blonde hair tied up in four pigtails with teal green eyes.
Her team looked over and saw what looked like a person face down in the sand. "I don't know." Said a man with cloth covering half his face.
"Well let's check it out!" She said and took off.
"TEMARI WAIT! IT COULD BE A TRAP!" The man yelled at Temari.
The man and only one of the two boys present, who looked to be 16 took off after her. The other boy with red hair just kept walking their original course not caring about what happened to the person in the sand.
Temari was the first to arrive and saw that it was a kid that couldn't be older than 15. 'He's kinda cute.' She thought to herself as she lifted him up and her teammates helped her carry him back to their village, more like they carried and she watched while walking.
6 hours later in a hospital
Temari was sitting in a hospital room with the person she rescued. She looked him over and noticed that for a 15 year old his body stats were more like a 19 year old.
'I wonder if he's a ninja? If so he's got to be fit.' She thought "One peak wouldn't hurt." She said and went to the bed holding Naruto.
She slowly took off the sheet all the way. Bad mistake since the nurses stripped him of all his clothes, ALL his clothes. Temari was frozen at what she saw. First off he was ripped, his arms and forearms looked like they went through a shit ton of training, his pecks were extremely defined, an 8 pack and defined obliques, quads, hamstrings, and calves. Second thing she noticed he had a giant cock even when limp. She somehow from somewhere got a tape measure and measured his dick to be 6.5 inches long when it's soft.
Her mouth was watering at this point, 'I wonder how big it is when it's hard? From what I hear from the woman at bars 6.5 inches is big, but that has to be when it's hard. They also said anything from 7-10 was huge and anything bigger is unheard of.' She thought
"So if he's already "big" when he's soft he's got to be "huge" when he's hard, there's no way he's bigger than 10 inches." She said
Her eyes then wondered on down and she saw how big his balls were. 'They're the size of fucking dumplings!'
Lime ALERT!
Temari had had enough and decided to lock the door, close the blinds and got busy getting him hard to see just how big he is. She tentatively grasped the impressive man meat and began to lightly stroke him, afraid that he'd wake up but seeing as nothing happened to him waking up or his cock she got more daring and went faster. That's when she saw results as his cock grew and she stopped to measure. 9 inches! 'And he's still not hard!' She kept going but knew what she had to do.
She gave his cock a couple of licks before taking his cock in one go. She noticed how he got bigger as it took longer to reach the base and he was hitting the back of her throat. She kept going as she got addicted to the taste of his cock and wanted to see him cum to see just how much cum his balls hold.
Naruto was slowly waking up as he felt something hot and wet around his cock, something he's felt only one other time, with Tsunade, and it felt great. He opened his eyes and quickly noticed that he was in a hospital and the girl sucking his dick was someone he's never seen before so he deduced that he's not in a Konoha hospital.
'She's pretty damn good.' He thought and kept acting like he was asleep while she pushed him further to the edge. Then out of nowhere Naruto slammed her head to his pelvis and he came hard. Temari was taken by surprise and held onto his strong thighs while she desperately tried to swallow his cum, but to no avail the cum came pouring out of her mouth and onto her top. She decided the best course of action would be to come up for air, bad mistake. Once she did she got blasted with five shots to her face and hair.
"Thanks for that. I feel a lot better." Naruto said grinning down at Temari and he finally got a good look at her once she ate all the cum.
"Your welcome." Temari said turning away and blushing.
"Wow." He replied
"What?" She asked as she turned back to come face to face with his cock that was still hard. She blushed hard again and looked up and her blush got deeper as she finally got to see him awake.
'He's so hot!' She thought
"You're beautiful miss, I'm sorry I never got your name. I'm Naruto by the way." He said
"Temari, nice to meet you Naruto." She said as she took his hand and he helped her up.
"Why don't we take this off." He said more than asked as he took off her dirtied top and left her in a tank top and spandex. One thing stood out and that would be her nipples which were extremely hard and Naruto could see them, plus he noted that she had some pretty big breasts.
"So how big are they?" Naruto just came out and asked.
"How big are what?" Temari replied
"You know your breasts, how big are they if you don't mind me asking, I mean you sucked my cock without my permission, it's only fair you tell me." He said
Temari opened her mouth ready to say no but thought about it and decided what the hell she'll tell him. "They're E cups, almost F cups." She said
"They're beautiful Tema-chan." He said and she didn't even notice the nickname he gave her as she was too busy blushing.
"Umm where are we by the way?" He asked
"Sunagakure's Hospital." She said
"And one more thing." He said
"Sure, what's up?"
"Can I get some clothes and check out?"
"Oh yeah, and I'll check you out."
"I think you already did that." Naruto said laughing at the pun.
"You idiot!" she said punching his arm and she winced as it hurt a little.
"You ok Tema-chan?" He asked with concern and took her hand to look at it. "I trained a lot so what you see is 100% muscle." He said grinning sheepishly, while scratching the back of his head.
"I can tell." Temari said getting a good look at his whole upper body.
"So… about those clothes." Naruto said
"Oh right!" Temari said getting out of her stupor and grabbed his clothes before handing them to him, "Um Naruto these look a bit too small for you." She said holding them up.
"Guess I have to try them to see." He said taking them from her and he just looked at her when she sat down looking at him.
"What're you doing?" He asked
"Waiting for you to get changed." She replied like it was the most obvious thing in the world.
"I know, but you're going to watch?" He asked
"I sucked your cock, I don't think me watching you change into clothes should bother you, besides…" She said getting up and walking up to him wrapping her arms around his neck and bringing his head down, "I was thinking that later tonight you and I could have some fun since I don't have any missions for the next 10 days." She said and Naruto got a huge blush knowing what she meant. She pecked his lips smiling and watched as he got changed.
The clothes were extremely too small. His shirt was now a muscle shirt and his pants became shorts that were too tight.
"I think I need to go shopping." Naruto said
"My thoughts exactly." Temari said as she took his hand in hers and walked out and checked him out of the hospital before going to a department store in the retail section of the village.
Temari led Naruto to a shinobi clothing store and there he picked out a black version of clothes he like and a white version. (Uniform he wears in Bee's dream of the Jinchuriki being united). He bought a few pairs each from there and then they started to walk out with Temari asking him questions.
"So where are you from Naruto?"
Naruto hesitated at first not wanting to tell in case they might send him back or kill him but he decided that being killed wouldn't be the worst thing to happen to him so he went for it. "I ran away from Konoha after finding out about some stuff that was kept a secret from me for my whole life." He said looking down
"Oh I'm so sorry, I had no idea, please forgive me Naruto." Temari said
"It's fine, I'm still trying to adjust to it and everything."
"So did you become a shinobi?"
"No the Academy there deemed me "Not good enough" and failed the test. Another of my sensei's came up to me to give me an "Alternate test" which was just a plan for him to steal the Forbidden Scroll. He wanted me to get it and give it to him saying that if I did that then I would automatically get the rank of genin. I learned that it was fake, beat him until he was barely breathing then left the scroll there, went to the Hokage's office took off the picture of the Fourth Hokage and found some items in there, took them and left the village and ended up waking seeing you." Naruto said
"Wow that's some story. You seem like a really sweet guy and really strong and skilled. I don't know why Konoha failed you but maybe we can find a spot for you here in Suna. Maybe keep you here for my sake." She said the last part under her breath.
"What was that last part?"
"Nothing, come on let's get you some gear." She said walking hand in hand with him to the lone shinobi store in the village. Temari bought Naruto some kunai, shuriken and some scrolls just in case of anything.
Temari took Naruto's hand as they walked together towards Temari's apartment. She rented one because she wanted to get away from her father and her family.
"So you live here all by yourself?" Naruto asked looking around her place.
"Yeah, I moved out of the house that I shared with my two brothers and father right when I turned 18. I've only been living here for a short while to be honest." Temari said as she went to her bedroom with his new clothes.
"So where am I gonna live Temari?" Naruto asked
"With me of course." She replied from her room.
"Right, of course." Naruto repeated softly
"What about sleeping arrangements?" He asked
"What about them?" She replied
"Well, ya know, like where am I gonna sleep?"
"With me Naruto-kun."
"I'm sorry what was that?!" He asked flabbergasted
"With me dummy, there's only one bed so it's only right that you sleep in the same bed as me. I'm not gonna let you sleep on the couch." She said
"Oh, well okay, if you say so." Naruto said going into the bedroom and saw that Temari had a Queen sized bed, big enough for the two of them.
"Wow your room has a ton of nice stuff." Naruto said in awe of all the luxurious items around her room.
"Well when you're the Kazekage's only daughter you tend to get "gifts" from people." She said
"YOU'RE THE KAZEKAGE'S DAUGHTER!" Naruto yelled
"Guess I forgot to mention that." Temari said grinning
"So you live here to get away from all the attention huh?" Naruto asked
"Yeah, that's why I moved out." Temari said dejectedly
"I understand that feeling of being the center of attention when you don't want to be." Naruto said as he hugged Temari from behind resting his chin on her left shoulder.
Temari turned her head to look up at him with a look of confusion on her face. "What do you mean Naruto-kun?"
Naruto looked down and said softly, "I'm the Nine Tails Jinchuriki."
Temari's eyes shot open and she got out of Naruto's grip and turned around looking horrified as she took a few steps back. 'Is he like Gaara, could he be insane like him?' She asked herself
Naruto looked at her confused and started to slowly walk forward with his hands up to show he wasn't going to do anything. "Temari what's wrong, please tell me what's going on inside of your head." He said
"A-Are you like my brother?"
"What do you mean Temari?"
"My youngest brother Gaara is this village's Jinchuriki, the One Tail Shukaku. Are you insane like him?" She asked
"If you mean has the beast taken over my mind then no, I'm in control of me, only when I'm angry does he try to take over but it hasn't happened."
"Okay. Okay." Temari said looking down and to her left as Naruto came up to her and hugged her again and she buried her head in his shirt.
"I promise I won't hurt you and I'll always be here for you Temari." He said soothingly and she calmed down.
"It's been a long day why don't we go to sleep for now?" Naruto suggested and Temari just nodded her head in acceptance.
It was only 5 in the afternoon but both were exhausted from today. Naruto slipped in bed first nude and Temari undressed in front of him making him blush seeing her naked as she then got in bed with him nude as well. The two blondes were facing each other and Naruto wrapped his arms around he protectively and held her close letting her know that he would always protect her.
They soon drifted off to sleep and waited to see what the next day had in store for them.
The next day came and Naruto and Temari were still sleeping in each other's arms. There was a loud knocking on the door and someone yelling for Temari.
"What is it Konkurō?" Temari asked looking extremely tired
"It's time to train Temari you got 15 minutes. Sensei and Gaara are already there. Is everything okay? You're always there before sensei and I." Konkurō said
"Yeah, I'm fine just a long day yesterday. Oh and Naruto is going to join us." Temari said
"Who's Naruto?" Konkurō asked
"The guy we found in the desert. He's gonna join us for training. Speaking of which why do we have training today? I thought we had the next 10 days off." Temari said
"Yeah well Baki called for it since Naruto was found. I'm pretty sure it has to do with him and how we're gonna need to respond to him." Konkurō said
"Alright, I'll be there soon." Temari said closing the door and Konkurō left to their training ground outside of the village.
Temari went back in to get Naruto up and get ready only to find that he wasn't anywhere to be found. She saw her window was open and knew that he overheard everything and took off probably spooked a little hearing that there was a meeting that concerned him.
Naruto followed Konkurō to where they were training unknown to the Sand shinobi's knowledge.
'Kurama I need you to suppress my chakra output so no one can detect us.' Naruto said mentally to the fox.
'I'm already on it Naruto.' Kurama responded and soon Naruto was off the grid and untraceable via chakra.
Naruto arrived and found Konkurō with Gaara and Baki and hid away in some of the only trees in Suna.
"Temari, where's Naruto?" Konkurō asked
"I don't know, he spent the night with me but after we finished talking I was going to get him up and he wasn't there anymore." Temari said
"Well that doesn't matter. From the nurses, we've learned that is chakra capacity is enormous. Even more than Gaara's." Baki said which really caught the attention of the older siblings while Gaara was interested in killing him.
"I know I promised you guys time off but I have another mission for you guys. Find Naruto, and learn who he is and what his plans are." Baki said
All of a sudden Gaara's sand shot out to a tree and Naruto jumped out of them and revealed himself with red eyes and slitted pupils.
"I'M RIGHT HERE BASTARDS!" Naruto yelled pissed off
"Naruto please calm down. You have to understand where we're coming from, please Naruto." Temari said begging Naruto to hopefully calm him down.
"If you want information you better beat me in a fight!" Naruto snapped back
Temari stepped forward only for Naruto to disappear and reappear behind her and chop her in the neck knocking her out.
'He's fast.' Baki thought
Konkurō tried to go at Naruto with his crow puppet only for Naruto to punch through Crow and then make contact with Konkurō who coughed up blood and passed out.
'And strong.' Baki thought
"Gaara he's yours I'm gonna get Temari and Konkurō to the hospital. Don't kill him." Baki said picking up Konkurō and Temari and taking off to the village.
"You smell like a fox. Mother wants your blood." Gaara said which didn't faze Naruto at all.
"Then come get it bastard!" Naruto yelled as Naruto took off and was moving faster than Gaara could track. Naruto came in for a punch only for some sand to block it and then wrap around his arm. Naruto tried to pull out of the sand but couldn't.
"Now Sand Burial!" Gaara said and crushed Naruto's arm causing him to scream out in agony. The same time Gaara crushed his arm Kurama was fully healing it. It was a constant feeling of his bones being crushed and them being fully healed only to be crushed again.
"Multi Shadow Clone Jutsu!" Naruto yelled as 500 Narutos popped into existence.
Gaara's eyes widened seeing so many and let go of the original and he dashed back hiding among the clones. The ensuing fight was brutal. Clones would jump in trying to land a hit only for Gaara to pop them out of existence with a swipe of sand. It kept going on like this for a while. Soon all of the clones were gone and both Naruto and Gaara were fatigued a bit. Naruto vanished in an instant and reappeared right in front of Gaara and sucker punched him causing Gaara to fly back and spit up some blood. Naruto was smirking thinking he was getting somewhere only for Gaara to scream as he tasted his own blood and soon passed out. 'That's it?' Naruto thought as his eyes returned to normal. Then sand started to gather to Gaara and soon cover him as it grew to a huge sand dune and finally started to take shape.
'Um Kurama what the fuck is that!?' He exclaimed mentally
'Shukaku the One Tail Beast.' Kurama responded
'Should I be worried, cause I feel like I should seeing the One Tail Beast is towering over my ass.'
'Not too much, we can take him. Just summon me and we'll be fine.' Kurama said mentally
'I don't know if you forgot but I don't exactly know the summoning jutsu you stupid fox!'
'HOW DID YOU NOT LEARN THE SUMMONING JUTSU WHEN YOU HAD THAT SUPER SCROLL IN YOUR POSSESSION A FEW DAYS AGO YOU IDIOT!'
'Because the summoning jutsu isn't forbidden dumbass!'
'Well then screw you Naruto figure out how to beat this Tanuki scum on your own.'
'Fine I will.' Naruto responded with sass and finished their internal convo only to see a sand arm smack his ass so hard he flew into the wall of Suna which was 1.5 miles away.
"Alright if that's how you wanna play you son of a bitch." Naruto said wiping the blood from his lip and getting out of the wall and charging back at the Tailed Beast.
'Let's try this fire style and see how he likes it.' Naruto thought as he jumped in the air and said "Fire Style: Hiding in Ash Jutsu!" Naruto covered Shukaku's field of vision and planned for his next move.
"Wind Style: Air Bullet!" Shukaku yelled and shot out multiple bullets of air and it cleared away the ash and fire to reveal 1000 Narutos.
"Here we go guys let's finish this fight." "RIGHT!" His clones yelled back. Then they all jumped into the air and started to lay down punches. Shukaku used his tail to swipe them away from existence and left about 50. 'Alright Naruto think. What can I do?' Then it hit him. Mentally relaying the message his clones threw kunai with exploding tags on them. They detonated right in Shukaku's face blinding him. Two clones grabbed the original Naruto's arms and threw him up to Shukaku's head. Naruto got on the head and started to charge to Gaara to wake him up. He was just about to sucker punch Gaara across his face but Shukaku interfered and stopped the punch with his arm. 'Not this time Tanuki! YOU WON'T BEAT ME, NEVER I REFUSE TO ALLOW IT TO HAPPEN!' Kurama yelled inside of Naruto and Naruto was soon covered in orange chakra. "Wake up you bastard!" Naruto yelled and headbutted Gaara. Blood came down each of their foreheads. Gaara started to wake up causing the sand to harden and crack before breaking down where the Jinchuriki fell hard into the sand that turned to glass from Naruto's fire technique causing more cuts on their bodies.
Naruto stood up and started to walk towards Gaara as Gaara had a look of fear in his eyes. "What makes you so strong?" Gaara asked in fear.
"Because I have the memories of my parents and I have Kurama to protect. And my dream of uniting the Jinchuriki. Protecting things and people precious to me makes me strong Gaara. I want you to join me Gaara, travel with me to help find the others. We'll protect each other so others can't mistreat us. I went through hell back where I'm from and I know you have too. I can see it, so why don't you join me?" Naruto asked
Gaara looked to the sky before responding. "Having those precious to you makes you strong huh? Well then maybe I should find those precious to me so I can become strong like you Naruto. Thank you."
"That's what friends are for Gaara." Naruto said smiling at him.
"Friend? Even after everything I've done to you, you still call me friend?" Gaara asked shocked
"Yeah. You're like me Gaara so we need to be friends. I'm gonna go on a journey to find the other Jinchuriki and unite them all so no one can mistreat us ever again."
"You know that actually sounds nice. But I need to protect those precious to me here. Like my brother, sister and sensei."
"I understand Gaara. Contact me when the time is right. For now, though I will head to the Land of Earth then Waterfall, followed by Lightning and finally Water. Oh, and take this." Naruto said tossing Gaara a headband with the kanji for 1 on it.
"What is this?"
"That is the number one. Keep it with you in case someone tries to say that they're you, you can prove that you are the real Gaara. Plus, it represents what Tailed Beast you have. I've got one with the number 9 on it. Every Jinchuriki will get one with the number of tails that they have."
"That makes sense and thanks Naruto. Why don't you heal up before leaving?"
"Because I need to gather the Jinchuriki soon. I feel that something big is going to happen in the next few years. I'll be taking a path through the Land of Birds then through Earth on my way to Iwagakure. Goodbye Gaara."
"Hey Naruto, my team will be going to Konoha in 6 weeks for the Chunin Exams. If you get the Jinchuriki from Earth bring them with you to Konoha." Gaara yelled out to Naruto who looked back grinning and took off.
"Amazing." Baki said under his breath at what he just witnessed.
"Maybe there is hope for you Gaara. Thank you, Naruto, you may have just save hundreds of lives by just being you."
Back in Konoha the village was either panicking or celebrating the fact that they no longer had to deal with the Demon Brat anymore hearing how he left. The shinobi of the village knew though that this was nothing to be celebrating. The Chunin Exams were coming up and they didn't have their Jinchuriki. If word got out then other villages could attack and the Chunin Exams were the perfect opportunity.
Some of Naruto's old classmates were even wondering where he was since they haven't seen him for days which was unlike Naruto.
On the road outside of Konoha was a tall man with spiky white hair that came down to his lower back. "It's good to be home again. And maybe I can finally see Naruto after all this time. I wonder how strong he is. My guess is he graduated top of his class." The man said smiling while thinking of the baby version of Naruto. The last time he ever saw his Godson.
30 Minutes Later
"WHAT THE HELL DO YOU MEAN HE'S GONE SENSEI!" The white hair man yelled
"YOU HAD ONE JOB PROTECT THE KID AND YOU COULDN'T EVEN DO THAT! KAMI ONLY KNOWS WHERE THIS KID COULD BE! HELL HE COULD EVEN BE DEAD BY NOW OLD MAN!"
"AND WHAT ABOUT YOU JIRAIYA-KUN!? WHERE WERE YOU ALL THIS TIME? OUT MAKING YOUR PERVERTED BOOKS AGAIN HUH?!" Snapped back the Hokage.
"I WAS PROTECTING THIS VILLAGE HOPING THAT YOU COULD PROTECT NARUTO BUT I GUESS I TRUSTED THE WRONG PEOPLE. MATTER OF FACT I'M LEAVING RIGHT NOW TO GO FIND HIM!" Jiraiya yelled storming out and started to track Naruto.
"Looks like he went towards the Land of Wind. Maybe Suna will know something." Jiraiya said as he took off towards the Hidden Sand Village.
AN: Well hello everyone I have finally made my long awaited comeback but I don't know how long it'll last. So comment what you thought of this, maybe give me and the story a favorite and a follow. As of now this'll be the only story that I will continue with. The other's are still in hiatus until I can figure out 100% what I want to do with them. Thank you for the support and always telling me to keep going it really got me back into writing Naruto stories again. Take care, KingSeahawk signing off again.
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