So I recently got a review on this fan fic that was posted by a guest. It seems like you may have not been logged in when you posted this review, just because it seems like you wanted me to reply, but I'm not sure. If that is the case, please let me know. Any way, thank you so much for this review. Reviews like this make authors so happy. It's great to know people enjoy and appreciate what I write! I also like to hear feedback on my stories so I can continue to improve as a writer. Now, I believe my writing has gotten a lot better since I wrote this fan fic, so I do plan on re-writing it (though it will still have the same story line). I may also be posting a few other alternate endings I have. I do have a FiMfiction account, so I could definitely post this here, and I am doing some fan fic readings on my YouTube channel. If I re-write this story and expand on it, and people enjoy it, I may make a reading of it on YouTube. If I could get an audio drama done of this, that would be even better. But thanks again for reviewing, and hopefully there will be more of this story soon.
The review:
This just HAS to be the most sweetest Scootaloo/Twilight mother/daughter relationship fanfic and best alternate ending to Rainbow Factory I have ever read in my life. Please put this on fimfiction and add it to the Twilight Crusaders folder. Just a few things I should point out though, as heartwarming as this is, this fanfic still needs a scene showing Celestia explaining to the mane 5 (hint hint) why Rainbow went insane and started doing this, then it could be even more sweet and epic if it had more chapters. So if you ever consider rewriting a few bits of the ending or adding more chapters so some people can make an audio drama out of it on Youtube, please update and let me know. Seriously, I'm getting desperate for people to take my requests everytime I post a review (hope you don't mind)