REVISED: Chapter 2 revised and ready. I noticed here that I mentioned birthmarks but I totally neglected them later on in the chapters so I took that out. Honestly, though, I didn't change much of the story...

Disclaimer: I do not own Metal Fight Beyblade. I only own my OCs and this idea.


Alex was tall, muscular, and handsome with light colored skin, ebony hair, and deep blue eyes. His hair was tousled up in a messy yet cute way. He wore a white muscle shirt under an unbuttoned black shirt, faded jeans, black sneakers with a white lining, brown fingerless gloves, and a brown tool belt. He wore brown goggles on his head like Madoka and a gold chain necklace was around his neck with a dark grey diamond-shaped charm.

Madoka, Hikaru, Mei-Mei, and Sophie blushed when they saw him. Their friends noticed and nudged them. That only caused them to blush even more.

"Alex!" Masamune, Zeo, and Toby shouted, shocked. "You are alive!"

Alex blinked. "What made you think I was dead?"

"Gee," Masamune said sarcastically. "How about: you disappeared with no trace for two years? Where have you been?"

"It's a long story and this isn't the time to tell you."

"You're explaining once we meet."

"Alright," Alex sighed.

"You know each other?" King asked.

Masamune, Zeo and Toby nodded. "Yes," Toby said. "He was part of Team Dungeon. We met years ago in Dungeon Gym. He's our mechanic so I'm surprised that you are a Warrior." He directed that last part to the blue-eyed blader.

"So, you are a descendant?" Kenta asked. Alex nodded. "Who's the Metal Warrior you mentioned?"

Alex grinned. "He's my ancestor. There are six warriors and each warrior has an element. I'm metal."

"So if there is six warriors then that means there are six descendants, correct?" Yuki asked.

"Yep. There's me and Zakia. We just have to find four more."

"Zakia?" Masamune asked.

"She's the descendant of the Earth Warrior. Zakia's in Kenya right now."

"Zakia, huh?" Demure frowned. "So the legend she told me was true."

"What are you talking about?" Kyoya asked him. "You knew about this, Demure?"

"Zakia is a friend of mine," Demure said as he nodded. "She told me that there will be a war following Nemesis but I didn't really understand. She told me what Mr. Hagane said and that she was a Warrior."

"Do you have any clue on who and where are the other warriors?" Gingka asked Alex.

Alex thought for a moment before shaking his head. "Nope, none at all. I actually just found out about this six months ago when I met Zakia. She knows more but she doesn't know much either. The only way we know if a person is a warrior if they have the bey."

"The bey?" Hikaru repeated.

"The descendants' beys are supposed to be a descendant of the Warriors' beys. If a person has those two things then they are the descendant. Problem is we might end up looking for years before we could find them. If only we have a way…"

"Maybe if we look for a person with that bey in the data we have here," Ryo suggested. "Our staff collects data from every beyblader that participated in a tournament."

"We could do that if we knew what their beys were," Alex said quietly.

"You don't know the beys? Then how do you know they are a warrior?" Wales asked with his arms crossed.

Alex sheepishly scratched his neck. "I can't explain it. It is just a feeling you get. You can feel the power from your bey rush into you and you get these blurry visions. That is a sure sign that you are a warrior."

"That's not exactly clarifying things," Hyoma told him. "Who knows. That person might be feeling sick and is hallucinating."

"Sorry but that's all Zakia and I know. She's in Kenya trying to get more info on about the legend. Apparently, the legend is told in her village quite often. She still hasn't gotten anything new."

"You're expecting us to help you find the others while having no clue where to look?" Kyoya asked. "How is that supposed to work?"

"Uh…" Alex had no answer. The others groaned. Alex looked sheepish. "I promise if we receive any info about the situation, I'll tell you immediately."

"What do we do while we wait?" Madoka asked.

Alex thought and shrugged. "I guess you should be training or help look for info. Honestly, I'm no good at giving orders or suggestions. Unless it's about mechanical or beyblade stuff, I'm kinda hopeless. I could give Zakia a call. She's better at this but not by much. She can't handle pressure."

They groaned again. "We're not going far much," Gingka muttered.

Suddenly, Alex perked up and started out the window. He looked scared. "Oh no…Not them," he whispered.

The ones in the room looked outside and had the same look as Alex. "What's going on?" King asked angrily.

Outside, there were columns of thick black smoke outside the city. The smoke climbed all the way to the sky and twirled around like a twister. "What is that?" Kenta asked. He and everyone else looked pale.

"What?" the bladers in the screen asked, annoyed for not being able to see and worried by their friends' looks.

"Black Earth is outside the city," Alex said, a bead of sweat formed on his brow. Everyone was shocked. "Those twisters are not a good sign."

"What do we do?" Madoka asked.

Alex shook his head. "I don't know. The last time I encountered them, I almost didn't make it back. They're too dangerous. They fight not only with beyblades, but also with physical strength and weapons."

"That's barbaric," Tsubasa commented.

"Very. I don't have enough training to fight them yet. The smoke twisters mean that they will attack but not yet. Maybe in a few days. Hopefully longer. I don't know who they will be attacking but the attack is inevitable."

They all looked at each other hopelessly and in fear. It was silent for a few minutes until they heard pounding of running footsteps.

"Alex! Look out!" an unfamiliar voice shouted and a girl ran into the room.

She tackled Alex down as a black arrow broke through the window and planted itself on the wall behind Alex.

They were all pale. Alex and the girl got up. "Thanks, Zakia," Alex said to her. The girl smiled weakly.

"That's Zakia?" they all asked.

Alex grinned and said, "This is Zakia Phlox, descendant of the Earth Warrior."


Like I wrote above, I didn't change a lot. Please review? Was it good, bad, or average?