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Chapter 2
Alex POV
I stepped through the portal and found myself in some kind of forest. All around me were tall, old looking trees. The sun broke through their thick leaves and its rays shone on my face. The birds were chirping happily on the tree tops and the squirrels were moving from tree to tree. I was so captivated by the sight around me that I didn't hear a small noise at first, until it began to repeat itself more loudly this time, like it wanted to get my attention. I looked around until my eyes set upon a white egg just in front of my feet with cracks on it. A couple of seconds later, a small reptilian like head broke out of the egg, and I was met with big blue eyes. Slowly, cautiously, I extended my hand towards his head. As soon as it made contact, a blast of energy went through his arm and to the rest of his body, giving him a sensation of burning. It went as quickly as it came, and I looked at my new companion in wonder. He was tiny right now, but my father told me that he would grow up rather quickly. The island we were currently on was named Parlim, and it was quite from Uru'Baen. Food should be no problem, what with all the animals living in the forest, and I could just turn the salt water into drinking water when I need to, and…
I was brought out of my musing by my dragon rubbing his head on my right leg, looking at me hungrily. He was probably waiting for me to feed him. I took out my sword and headed into the forest, searching for a couple of squirrels or birds to feed my dragon.
A month passed by and the dragon had grown immensely. It was able to hunt on its own now, and it finally spoke into my head. We spent the next month in a basic routine, hunting for animals, sleeping, me telling my dragon of earth, of my past life and friends, and of the war between the Greeks and the Romans. Afterwards, he would go to train on his own since I had no idea how to train a dragon, and I also trained with my sword in the woods. My features changed completely. I almost looked like an elf, except I wasn't as fair looking. I wondered why my transformation was this quick when I heard the voice of my father in my head telling me that the gods sped up the process so I could get used to my new form quickly. I was a lot quicker than I used to be, and I noticed every tiny detail in the forest, and no animal, not even an ant could surprise me. Before going to sleep each night, I spent an hour or two practicing my magic, because I was sure that I was going to need it when facing the king. My dragon would watch me practicing sometimes and gave me a pointer or two, though I had no idea how he knew how to use a sword. Speaking of which, I had finally found a name for my dragon: Epifanio, meaning one who gives light. Quite adequate if I may say so myself.
Another couple of months passed by, and my dragon grew a lot bigger. We usually go around flying all around the island, with him performing a couple of maneuvers he was working on so I could get used to it and not fall down in battle. I know what you're thinking: a son of Poseidon flying in the air without Zeus blasting him with his master bolt? Trust me, I was hesitant before flying for the first time before Zeus swore on the Styx in my head that he wouldn't blast me while I was on my dragon, and since I heard thunder, I knew the oath was sealed. And for those of you who don't own a dragon, I would recommend getting one; they're better than a girlfriend! Nah, kidding, but anyway, we were doing a sweep of the area like we normally do, except this time, we were focused on every tiny detail because my dad had contacted me last night and told me to be ready to leave the island when the signal arose. When I asked him what was the signal, he just said: "Trust me son, you'll just know". I mean, what kind of answer is that. Anyway, we were just about to return to our camp site when we saw a ship entering the boar's eye with sloops following with speed. Probably trying to steal from the folks on the ship.
"Epifanio, go towards the boat, we have to help them get out of there. They won't make it to shore on their own!"
On it chief. Don't worry, I won't let them die.
You see, ever since I told Epifanio that the Pegasi at camp half-blood called me chief, he insisted and doing it too just to annoy me, but I got used to it. I just managed to hold onto him before he nose dived towards the boat. As soon as they saw us, the passengers of the boat started to freak out and shout something too low for me to hear, and started running around all over the deck trying to make the boat go faster. When we were just over them, Epifanio stopped his descent and flew toward the sails, and started batting his wings to push the boat faster across the pass using the wind, while staying in the air and following the boat. Once the crew saw that we were helping them, they relaxed and started rowing with renewed vigor until; finally, they were out of the boar's eye. They cheered and I couldn't help but smile at the relief on their faces. We escorted them to the city of Dauth where they were warmly welcomed. However, once they saw me on Epifanio, they cheered so loudly that you could've thought that they had won the war. Once we landed, Lady Alarice as we later found out she was called greeted with open arms, and her citizens engulfed us, thanking us for giving them hope. Lady Alarice led us to the meeting room that was so large that even Epifanio could fit in. He plopped down beside me with a big thud.
"Welcome Shurt'Ugal to the city of Dauth. I hope your trip was a pleasant one?"
"It was, thank you Lady Alarice. We're just thankful for your hospitality."
"Why, it is my Pleasure dragon rider. If I may, what is your name? How did you get another egg from the king? Surely if 2 eggs were stolen from the varden we would've known about it. The whole of Alagaesia would've known about it, yet not even the king suspects a thing."
"My name is Alex Ryan Lady Alarice, and how I got my dragon was a complicated matter which I will not delve into. I will, however tell you that when the varden stole one egg from the king, one of my friends managed to take another one, and used a complicated bit of magic to create an illusion so perfect of the egg that the king never suspected a thing. Epifanio's egg then found its way into my path, when me dragon decided to bless me, and hatch for me."
I wouldn't say blessed you, I've caused you more trouble than good.
Oh shut up, you're the best thing that ever happened to me, and no one is going to change that.
"As you wish Lord Alex. I will not delve into this matter any further if it bothers you. However, would you do me the favor of staying and eating with me today? All of you?"
I was going to respond when Roran, as he introduced himself to me, answered before I could: "It would be our pleasure Lady Alarice. May I ask, are the Varden nearby? I would like to join them"
As soon as Roran asked his question, her face darkened and she said: "The varden have already marched out and are either preparing to battle or already battling Galbatorix's army. I do not know since we have not sent a messenger since they left for battle."
"Then forgive me Lady Alarice, I must refuse your generous offer, for the varden need us. Perhaps we will have the chance to dine together another time?"
"I excuse myself as well Lady Alarice, for I too desire to help the varden in their quest for freedom."
She smiled: "I expect nothing less. Go now, and help the varden free us from the reign of the king."
We both nodded and exited the room.
"Now the only thing left for me to do is convince my companions to help me."
"Don't worry Roran, they'll help you. You've brought them so far, so they have faith in you. Come on now, let's go talk to them."
We spent half an hour trying to convince them until they finally relented and accepted to join us.
I then spent another half hour trying to convince Epifanio to wait for my signal until he has to show himself, so as to have the surprise effect on our side. I was going to travel with Roran on boat until we reached the burning plains; I would then take a horse that we would have placed on the boat and ride out to help the varden in their struggle. Before leaving, I placed protective wards on Epifanio and myself, and mounted the boat with the rest of the crew. We left heading towards the varden the same night.
When we approached the plains, we could already hear the sound of battle, and the crew immediately started preparing the boats weapons. That is until we heard a Thud in the air. And another, and another. The pressure on our ears increased, but being a dragon rider, I was used to it. A big dragon, a little bit smaller than Epifanio appeared in the sky with his rider on it. His eyes locked with Roran's, before he nodded and flew back towards battle.
"Your cousin I presume?"
"Aye, that's Eragon. He has a lot to answer for. Never mind that, now's the time. Ride out and help the varden, we'll bombard them from a distance. I simply nodded and mounted my horse. As soon as the boat hit the shore, I willed my horse onto the land and galloped towards the varden. All around me bodies were being disfigured. Dead bodies lied around on the sand, and the smell of Death filled the air. I was now accustomed to it after all the battles with the Romans, and just continued on my way, hacking and slashing at the soldiers from Galbatorix's army. They never stood a chance. I was good with a sword as a demigod, but now as a dragon rider, I was an exceptional swordsman. Each and every man in front of me was being killed by the edge of my sword, and the varden were winning, until a red dragon appeared in the sky. The fighting stopped, but I continued hacking at the enemy, not wasting my time.
Should I come now chief to even the odds?
Not now Epifanio, just wait a little bit more.
The two dragons continued fighting in the air until the dragon rider of the red dragon managed to overcome Eragon, and bring him to ground.
NOW!
As soon as I said that, a huge roar filled the air, and the fighting stopped. All eyes turned towards the horizon where a big white dragon started appearing. Both sides were scared, since no one knew on which side he would be, but Epifanio touched down on the battlefield, and everybody made way. Taking my chance, I jumped on his back, and headed towards the red dragon and his rider. As soon as he saw us attacking him, his eyes widened, and he mounted his dragon and left. I didn't pursue him; instead, I turned around and started attacking the enemy once more, until they were all eradicated. Only then did I touch down on the plains, and with everyone staring at me with wide eyes, I just sighed: I guess I have a lot of explaining to do…
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