I know in the past chapter there has been quite a lot of gramar problems! so i done this now (i dont think this is quite good)
"Hello Sora, how are you?" Fairy Godmother looked around "hmmm where are the other two"
"Now that you mention it, where did they go?" Sora Scratched his head looking around him.
"well where ever they are they will not get killed" Leon said reaching into his pocket "We found this gem can you turn the soul back to normal"
"who do you think I am?" Said the fairy Godmother . She waved her wand while she sung. Sora yawned and started tying his shoelaces and Leon just sat down crossed legged meditating "I am done boys!" Sora looked up and looked frightened.
"who is that guy right beside you with orange hair and a sword that can slash anyone in half……even DONALD!!!!" Sora Fainted "Sora wake up! Damn dose he have to do that every time I recover a soul?" Fairy Godmother was furious "next time ill turn you into the gem!" by that word she disappeared. "At least I have some common sense!" Leon thought "Hello "
"Kurosaki Ichigo's the name" said Ichigo pointing to himself with his thumb "and where am I"
"you are in traverse town and your world has been demolished thanks to little black monsters that go around making every one sad!" Leon Punched the ground.
"Oh My GOD!!! Every one is gone? Even Rukia?" Ichigo looked Scared . Donald and Goofy Flew in through the roof " I told you it was dark! You should take it back and get another one!" Goofy said while trying to get a hold of Donald's brand new Staff. "NO!" Donald said while he was waving it. He hit it against a mirror and the mirror was smashed up to pieces. "Look what you did now!" Quacked Donald.
"I didn't-"Goofy started but Sora slapped both of them with no hesitation.
"WHERE WHERE YOU"
"I was buying Donald a new Staff…" Goofy said "but Donald wanted a dark Staff"
"IT IS NOT DARK! Its just black" Donald interrupted Goofy "but"
"both of you shut up and meet Ichigo!" Leon said "Ichigo welcome to the team"
"Thank you but no thanks I need to find my friends!" Ichigo said "that's what we are all doing! Our world were terrorized by Heartless! And so we all stick together trying to find our friends, family and worlds!" Sora explained "MY FRIENDS ARE ALIVE!!" Ichigo Yelled, Ichigo was going to start yelling again but a knock on the door interrupted them.
"SHIP IS DONE!" Cid said from the door "and I have even installed a bigger faster engine, and you have rats!" Cid started screaming like a girl and the heard running.
"I think he is going to be in that state for a loooong time" Leon sighed putting his hand on his face. "well lets go!" Ichigo started disappearing.
"well fine! I will go with you only if you promise me my friends will come back!" Ichigo snapped "Woright! We promise!" Goofy said. "now of to the gummi ship! And a brand new world"
"you said right there Goofy!" Sora said as they walked across the Third District.
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