hey again party people so im up to part 2 of chapter 1 ha fun to say...So anyway thank you for your compliments and/or criticism for example "Hello there, My friend just want me to ask you that she love this story just want to let you know:)" and this one helped with this chapter "I would suggest not putting it in one big paragraphs! The last paragraph is just dialog that I can't follow. But hey someone else ships this, so yay!" so feel free to give suggestion and/or compliments 'cause i do take them into consideration thanks 3
chapter 1 part 2
henry prov
The Junk-N-Stuff store
"What are you lookin' at?" a strange man asks "Uh, nothing. Just, uh this turtle's butt. Sorry. Um, my name is Henry Hart. I'm here about the job?" I say "The job." He repeats *urf* "Um did that plant burp?" I ask "To back." "Come back?" I try "Go back." "Where?" I ask "To the back." "Oh, go to the back." I say finally understanding "Take the elevator down." "What floor?" I ask "Down." "The "Down" floor?" I ask confused "Good luck." "Thanks, Uh, you, too."
"Hey, what's up?" "Does my basement smell like chicken poop?" "Yes! What?" "I'm down in my basement with Charlotte and she says is smells like poop from a chicken, a sick chicken." "What are you and Charlotte doing in your basement?" "He wants to have his birthday party down here in this chicken toilet." "This is my home!" "Guys, I can't talk right now. I'm at a job interview. So, I've gotta go." "Henry! Are you still there? Whoa! Henry? Henry?" "I'll call you back." i say
"Hello?" i ask as i step in to a cool looking room "Hey, how are ya? Cool! Thanks! Great to meet ya. I'm doin' good. What's your name?" a strange guy suddenly bombards me with questions "Um I'm Henry Hart. I'm here about the job?" i say slowly taking a good look at him *hey he's kind of hot what where did that come from?* i was snapped out of my thoughts by his questions "Age?" he asks me cheerfully "Thirteen. I'll be fourteen on my next birthday." i ramble still shocked from my thoughts "Ah, so, you're aging sequentially. I like that." he states "Thanks." i reply
"My name's Ray." he now known a Ray says *nice name,nice face* "Hi, Ray." i say trying to ignore my mind "You ask a lot of questions." he says "I don't think I've asked any questions." i amit "Chocolate or vanilla?" he questions "Vanilla." i state "Helicopters or kangaroos?" *are his questions just going to get weirder?* "Helicopters?" i suggest "Love it! Scrambled eggs or dynamite?" *yes* "Both?" i try "Maybe. Complete this sentence. I'm sorry, mother, I didn't mean for my elephant to blank?" *I'msorrymother,ididn'tmeanformyelephantto* "Uh, lick dad." i say enthusiastically
"Ha,Ha,Ha,Ha." we laugh together *he has a great laugh as well STOP thinking like that* "Oh, that's not funny." he says blankly "No. Um, this, uh, job interview?" i started "Do you want it to be a job interview?" he asks "Um, what is the job?" i question "What do you think the job is?" he asks "Uh, well, the ad said "Part-time Helper." So, I'm thinking maybe you need someone to to help you, you know, part time." i say to him somewhat slowly
"Do you ever dream about sleeping?" *okay add that to the weird question list* "No." "Good! If you did, you'd be dead." *why?* "I am so confused." i admit "David?" *and he got my name wrong* "Henry." i correct "Can I trust you?" *i have the same question* "Sure." "Can you keep a secret?" *okay handsome man wants to tell me a secret, need to stop thinking like that* "Totally." "So I can trust you to keep a secret?" "Yes, sir." *sir really?* "I'm gonna blow a bubble." *a bubble. of course* "You're gonna blow a bubble?" "Then I'm gonna blow your mind." he starts to blow a pink bubble and it changes colour and when it pops he looks diffrent but familia "You're you're Captain Man!" i yell amazed "That's right, Henry. Oh, hold on a second. This stupid zipper! It always sticks! Come Oh, that's my skin. There we go! Ha ! Always good to keep the old zipper lubed." *so the gorgas man is THE Captain Man bonus* "I can't believe I'm standing here talking to Captain Man." i admit "Why? Are you a fan? Do you like me? Most people like me, but not everyone." *hell yeah i like you* "Yeah, I'm a huge , man, I've gotta tell Jasper about this. He's gonna freak when I tell him I'm standing here next to Captain Ah!" captain man shots my phone and melts it "Sorry, but you can't tell your friends about this." he explains "Okay, but did you have to melt my phone?" i ask "I'll get you a new one." he says "Really?"
"No. So, Henry, tell me why you want a job." "Well, you know, to to learn responsibility and challenge myself." "So, you want money." "Lots of money." "Oh, is this the ladies' room?" a old british woman asks as she leaves the elevator "No, ma'am, you're not supposed to be down here." captain man tells her "What an interesting place." she says "Thank you, but I'm conducting a job interview, and you're very old, so could you please just get back in the elevator?" he asks nicely "Oh, I'll just take me phone out of me purse and call me nephew." she tells him "Great, I'll just turn my back and look at something." he says as he turns around the woman reaches into her hand bag and i see a tattoo of a snake on her neck"What are you lookin' at?" i remember that tattoo from the guy in the store so shes not really "Captain Man!" i yell "Goodbye forever, Captain Man." he says pointing a weapon at captain man
oh cliffhangerso sorry but i have to stop there for now like abrake so please review and stuff bye for now 3
